Haru Thomson (cielo_translation) — 付けたレビュー

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The package you sent arrived today. Thank you very much.
But there was a big problem.
The following two items written on the invoice were not included in the package.


Besides, the invoice says the size of the first item above is 150cm x 210cm, but the one we ordered was 190cm x 210cm.
We want those two items as soon as possible since our customer is waiting.
Please let us know when you will be able to send them.

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The package you sent arrived today. Thank you very much.
But there is a big problem.
The following two items written on the invoice were not included in the package.


Besides, the invoice says the size of the first item above is 150cm x 210cm, but the one we ordered was 190cm x 210cm.
We want those two items as soon as possible since our customer is waiting.
Please let us know when you will be able to send them.

元の翻訳
We received the parcel you sent today, thank you.
However, there is one big problem.
Following 2 items written on the invoice were not included.

Also, the upper item on the invoice says 150cmx210cm size, but we ordered 190cmx210cm.
We are keeping our customers waiting, so please send 2 items which were not included as soon as possible.
When will you send them?

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We received the parcel you sent today, thank you.
However, there is one big problem.
Following 2 items written on the invoice were not included.

Also, the invoice shows the size of the upper item as 150cmx210cm, but what we ordered was 190cmx210cm.
We are keeping our customers waiting, so please send the 2 items which were not included as soon as possible.
When will you send them?

元の翻訳
Today, we have received the goods you have sent. Thank you.
However, there is only one big problem.
The following two products that are recorded in the invoice aren't there.

Also, the above products are shown as having the size 150cm×210cm in the invoice, but we have ordered 190cm×210cm ones, aren't we?
We want that you send the two undelivered products to us as fast as possible so that we can deliver them to our customers.
When would you send them?

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Today, we have received the goods you sent us. Thank you.
However, there is one big problem.
The following two products on the invoice were missing.

Also, the size of the first product is shown as 150cm×210cm in the invoice, but what we ordered was 190cm×210cm.
We want you to send the two undelivered products to us as fast as possible so that we can deliver them to our customers.
When would you send them?

元の翻訳
Lisa, I can understand what your mother told.
It is spring holiday now, so I am thinking about children more than everything as well.
And I don't care about Facebook.
But I love you and Olivia and would like to see growing up. So please send photos or something by e-mail.

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Lisa, I can understand what your mother told you.
It is spring holiday now, so I am thinking about my children more than anything as well.
And I don't care about Facebook.
But I love you and Olivia and would like to see her growing up. So please send photos or something by e-mail.

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Lisa, I really understand what your mother say.
I am spending spring vacation with my child now, too.
And I am trying not to care about Facebook.
However, I love Lisa and Olivia and I would always love to see how you are growing up, so please send your pictures by email!

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Lisa, I really understand what your mother is saying.
I am on spring vacation now, and the time I spend with my children is the most precious to me too.
And I am trying not to care about Facebook.
However, I love you and Olivia and I would always love to see how she is growing up, so please send her pictures by email!

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Lisa, I can understand perfectly what you mother is saying. Now when we have Spring vacations here, the time spent with children is the best time for me. So I do not really pay much attention to Facebook. But I love you and Olivia, and I would like to see how she is growing, so please send me more pictures and other things by e-mail!

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Lisa, I understand very well what your mother is saying. Now we are on Spring vacation here, the time I spend with my children is the best time for me. So I do not really pay much attention to Facebook. But I love you and Olivia, and I would like to watch her grow up, so please send me more pictures and other things by e-mail!

元の翻訳
In the middle of a free charge campaign

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Currently offering a free charge campaign

元の翻訳
Free campaign now

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Currently offering a free campaign

元の翻訳
値段交渉が可能ですか？もし可能であれば750ドルはいかがでしょうか？

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入札は可能ですか？もし可能であれば750ドルはいかがでしょうか？

元の翻訳
オファーを検討してくれますか？
もしそうなら、750ドルのドルではどうですか？
よろしく。

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入札には応じていただけますか？
もしそうなら、750ドルではどうですか？
よろしく。

元の翻訳
今、オファーを受けられる状態ですか？
もしそうであったら、750ドルでオファーを受けることは可能ですか？
宜しくお願いします。

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入札には応じていただけますか？
もし応じていただけるのであれば、750ドルでいかがでしょうか？
宜しくお願いします。

元の翻訳
ご相談に応じていただけますでしょうか？もしご了承いただけるのであれば750ドル受け取っていただけますか？
よろしくお願いいたします。

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入札には応じていただけますか？もしご了承いただけるのであれば750ドルでいかがでしょうか？
よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
お申し出いかがですか？
もしそうなら、あなたはそのため750ドルを受け入れるだろうか？
ありがとうございます。

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入札には応じていただけるのですか？
応じていただけるのであれば、750ドルという価格は受け入れていただけますか？
ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
申し出は受け入れてくれますか。もしそうなら、それを750ドルで売ってくれますか。よろしくお願いします。

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入札には応じていただけるのですか。もしそうなら、それを750ドルで売ってくれますか。よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」


20:00〜21:00 April 5th (Sunday)
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」

※The details of the program is subject to change due to some reason. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

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ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」


April 5th (Sunday) 20:00〜21:00
ZIP-FM「SUNDAY NIGHT SPECIAL KUMI KODA ～ON THE RADIO～」

※The details of the program is subject to change due to certain reasons. We appreciate your understanding in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for a message. The teleconverter doesn't fit unto any lens you have, is it? I'm sorry to inconvenience you, but could you give me more details about your lens, please? I'll contact the manufacturer. Most sincerely.

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Thank you for the message. You are saying you cannot attach the teleconverter? I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you give me more details about your lens, please? I'll contact the manufacturer. Most sincerely.

元の翻訳
Thank you for letting me know. I understood that the teleconverter does not fit on your any lenses.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you let me know the detail of the lenses which you want to use?
I will make sure this situation between your lenses and the teleconverter to the manufacturer immediately.

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Thank you for letting me know. I understood that you cannot attach the converter.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you let me know the details of the lenses which you want to use?
I will contact the manufacturer regarding this immediately. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting us. You can't attach the converter can you?

I'm sorry for your inconvenience. I will contact with the company which was made, therefore please let me know the detail of your Lens? 　If you could let us know it would be very appreciated.

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Thank you very much for contacting us. You can't attach the converter can you?

I'm sorry for your inconvenience. I will contact the manufacturer, therefore please let me know the details of your Lens. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
Your problem is that you cannot set a converter.
We apologize to have caused an inconvenience to you.
We will check with the manufacturer. Would you tell us the lens that you are using?
We appreciate your cooperation.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your problem is that you cannot set the converter.
We apologize to have caused any inconvenience to you.
We will check with the manufacturer. Would you tell us the lens that you are using?
We appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
I solved the problem. I can show not the URL of xxx but that of yyy.
It is the same problem as the one listed below.

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The problem is solved. It can't be displayed with the URL xxx but can with yyy.
It was the same problem as the one listed below.

元の翻訳
Cheek

4/23 (Mon) Release
Cheek June

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Cheek

Released on April 23 (Mon)
Cheek June issue

元の翻訳
Cheek

Release on 4/23 (Mon)
Published in the month of June

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Cheek

Release on　April 23 (Mon)
Published in the month of June

元の翻訳
私の息子が列車プレイセットLC99582を受け取りましたが、箱の中にはCライザー2つが梱包されており、Dライザーがありませんでした。セットを完成させたいので、Dライザー1つを頂きたいと思います。

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息子が列車プレイセットLC99582を受け取りましたが、箱の中にはCライザー2つが梱包されており、Dライザーがありませんでした。セットを完成させたいので、Dライザー1つを送っていただけますか。