翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 57 / ネイティブ 英語 / 1 Review / 2013/07/30 10:36:30
今回は、東北地方をぐるーっと一周してくるよ。おいしいものを沢山食べれるといいな。お祭りもあるし、綺麗な場所も沢山あるらしいからすごく楽しみなんだ。あ、おすすめの場所やおいしい食べ物情報があったら教えてね。それでは、張り切って行ってきます!
This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat many different types of good food. I've heard there are many festivals and beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off!
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元の翻訳
This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat many different types of good food. I've heard there are many festivals and beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off!
修正後
This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat lots of good food. I've heard there are festivals and many beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off excited!
A good job! Please see my minor edits.