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日本語

真夏の夜はイケメングループとビーチバーベキュー

​7/1（火）18:30～21:20 　OZmall 東京体験・イベント

SOLIDEMOがバーベキューイベントに出演！


■イベント名
真夏の夜はイケメングループとビーチバーベキュー

■会場
ホテル日航東京 （台場）

■開催日時
2014/7/1（火）18:30～21:20

■料金
１名5,800円（税込、手数料別）
クレジットカード、コンビニ支払いにて事前決済

英語

Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30-9:20pm
OZmall Tokyo experience site


SOLIDEMO will also star in the barbecue!

Event name:
Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

Place:
Hotel Nikko Tokyo (Odaiba)

Date and time:
July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30~9:20pm

Fee:
5800 yen per person (Including tax and handling fee)
Can be paid in advance by credit card or at the convience store

レビュー ( 1 )

big_baby_duckはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/08 02:19:44

元の翻訳
Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30-9:20pm
OZmall Tokyo experience site

↵
SOLIDEMO will also star in the barbecue!

Event name:
Midsummer night barbecue with a group hansome men

Place:
Hotel Nikko Tokyo (Odaiba)

Date and time:
July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30~9:20pm

Fee:
5800 yen per person (Including tax and handling fee)
Can be paid in advance by credit card or at the convience store

修正後
Midsummer night barbecue on the beach with a group of handsome men

July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30pm-9:20pm
OZ Mall ↵
Exploration in Tokyo and an event

SOLIDEMO will star in the event of a barbecue!

Event Name:
Midsummer night barbecue with a group of handsome men

Place:
Hotel Nikko Tokyo (Odaiba)

Date and Time:
July 1st, 2014 (Tuesday) 6:30pm~9:20pm

Fee:
5,800 yen per person (tax included and handling fee separately)
To be paid in advance by credit card or at the convenience store

A good job! I'd like to be a professional translator specializing in English translations, too!

[big_baby_duck]

Hi, Ashley. I gave five stars to this translation, but immediately after that, I found out on your profile that your rate had dropped to 53 from 57! It shouldn't have happened, and the rate should be the previous one or a better one because you've got the good review, so I've explained the problem and asked for the change of the rate in an e-mail I sent to the company shortly before now. It's very possible that the trouble has been caused by a system error. If so, I hope they will fix it and up your rate soon. If they don't change the rate within a few days, please ask them to up it in an e-mail from your side, too.

[ashleywest]

Thank you very much for letting me know! I will contact them.

[big_baby_duck]

I hope they will fix your rate soon! I think they should!