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We would like to purchase your products being sold at Amazon,
Can we get those at wholesale price?
Since we would like to purchase in large quantities, we are looking for a partner to do business with continuously.

If we get it at wholesale price, our initial order would be 100 pieces.
If we can transact continuously, I think we can order more than 200 pieces next time.

We are also looking for the following products.
Can you get these for us?

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We would like to purchase your products being sold at Amazon,
Can we get those at wholesale price?
Since we would like to purchase in large quantities, we are looking for a partner to do business with continuously.

If we get it at wholesale price, our initial order would be 100 pieces.
If we can transact continuously, I think we can order more than 200 pieces from the next time.

We are also looking for the following products.
Can you get these for us?

元の翻訳
Please, would you kindly consider the discount for the shipping fee that I mentioned yesterday?

From years before, I have let ◯◯ be used and shipments requests have been received every month. But the number of shipments will be increasing. From this year, shipment requests are estimated to become weekly.

Though it will 15% for the initial use, I will be requesting to go for a 25% discount. If that will happen, I will always be using your company from now on. And if my request will be possitively received, I think it would benefit the both of us.

Patiently, would be waiting for your kind reply.

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Have you been able to consider the discount on shipping fees that I mentioned yesterday?

Since more than a year ago, I have been using ◯◯ and taking shipment requests on a monthly basis. The number of shipments is continuing to increase, and so from this year, I plan to take shipment requests on a weekly basis.

Although it is at 15% as it was originally, I am hoping to receive a 25% discount. If this happens, I will continue to use your company from here forward. I am capable of actively getting requests so I think it would benefit the both of us.

I am patiently awaiting your reply.

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Greetings!

Thank you, really, for purchasing an item from me!

Although I have unfortunate news for you.

It's about the item that you just purchased. After checking my shop, the item has now just become out of stock.

I'm really, really sorry.

Would it be alright if my resolution for this matter is to fully refund you?

I have no other words to say on how sorry I am this time..

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Greetings!

Thank you, really, for purchasing an item from me!

Although I have unfortunate news for you.

It's about the item that you just purchased. After checking my shop, the item has now just gone out of stock.

I'm really, really sorry.

Would it be alright if my resolution for this matter is to fully refund you?

I have no other words to say how sorry I am this time..