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mura (mura) — Written Reviews

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mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
21 Jul 2013 at 14:12
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Please do look forwar to that.　は　forward で、ケアレスミスです。 Hi はくだけすぎで、ビジネスの初対面では　Hello のほうがいいのではないでしょうか。 Hello. You can get・・・と、行を変えて。 ただ...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
17 Jul 2013 at 23:25
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よくわかります。 ただ、I requested you a replacement of an item previously.のところ、わかっている商品だから、of the itemとthe にしなければならないのでは？ return shipping cost, h...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2013 at 19:40
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I am intent on slowly increasing のところ intentは名詞または形容詞ですから、I intend to slowly increaseなどのほうがいいのではないでしょうか。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2013 at 14:59
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読みやすいです。 managemantだけがはっきりした間違いです。 二つ目、ofがないとだめではないですか。Planningは他動詞の動名詞でいいですがoperation　はoperation beauty salons・・・とはならないので、operation of...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2013 at 17:52
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I am not satisfied with some parts of the story, but I enjoyed watching the process about　which (process の内容がただの文章で、関係代名詞なにもなしというのは？in wh...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2013 at 18:51

original
We have already paid for this product. When could you refund the money?↵
Please refund as soon as possible.
Please don't put the items which you don't sell.↵
Please penalize this seller.
Please reply immediately.

corrected
Please don't put the items which you don't sell.
ここのところputではわかりにくいと思います。↵
Please do not display items, which do not sell well, on your site.とか具体的に示した方がいいと思います。
Please reply me immediately. reply は自動詞ですからreply to me とto が必要ではないかと思います。↵

mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
15 Jul 2013 at 19:21
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よくわかります。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
11 Jul 2013 at 17:55
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Good Afternoon. Helloでいいと思います。朝か午後かわからないですから。 Thank you for checking the items in my shop. The goods are slated to arrive very soon ...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
09 Jul 2013 at 22:34
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いい訳だと思います。ただ、 real stable はstableが形容詞なので、really stableです。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
09 Jul 2013 at 22:23

original
Piano playing by Mr.Nakamori is exquisite, well-balanced and most of all, COOL!

corrected
Piano playing by Mr.Nakamori is exquisite, well-balanced and most of all, COOL!↵
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簡潔な文章でいいです。COOLがいい。↵
でも　”正確に時を刻んでるみたいでホントにゲームの曲みたい”を、ここまで無視するのはどうかと思います。

mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
07 Jul 2013 at 05:00
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簡潔できれいな英語です。ところでdetailsで明細書という意味になるのですか？教えてください。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
07 Jul 2013 at 02:03
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よくわかります。 １行目　We have size of S, M, L, LL (XL), 100, 120, 140. のsizeはsizesと複数形ではないですか。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
06 Jul 2013 at 12:13
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全体的に簡潔で良い訳と思います。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
04 Jul 2013 at 16:07
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わかりやすいです。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
04 Jul 2013 at 10:43

original
It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet on the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed a order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

corrected
It looks like the refund hasn't been done yet (on) (seeing の方がいいのでは。display 上での返金ではないでしょうから）the transaction display.
Please contact me if I need to proceed (a) (anです） order cancel on ebay etc.

Please arrange for it as soon as possible.
Thank you.

mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 21:31
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勉強になりました。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 17:48
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よくわかります。ただ、 to let him to spend some time to teach others and make it useful. のところ、let one は動詞の原型をとると思いますので、let him spendではないかと。 それと、...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 16:59

original
From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.

corrected
From the second half of the project, it is a bit difficult to see his current situation about the development. The difference of language and time may also be the cause.
During his work time as a remote employee, I think he can report the progress of the simple project at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.
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I think he can report the progress of (the simple project ここおかしい。簡単な、は報告にかかるのでI think he can give me a simple report concerning the project progress とか) ↵
at least once a week and make the work becomes easier.↵
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mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 19:36
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よくわかります。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 17:54
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よくわかる文章です。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 17:25
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よくわかります。looks はseems のほうがいいのじゃないか、lookは外観とか体調とかの気がしますので、私の感覚だけです。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 16:28
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In order not to work for a long time, これでは働かないためにですので、In order not to have to work for a long time, と、have to をいれて、働かなくてもいい、という意味をださねばな...
mura rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 14:44

original
I don't know what excuse to make how to apologize to you.
The notification of shipping I sent you just ago is wrong.
I will correct the error, so please please check it.

I noticed the shipping in error.
Although I still don't ship, but how should I correspond to him?

corrected
I don't know what excuse to make how to apologize to you.
丁寧すぎてわからなくなります。文法的にも間違いがあります。↵
I am very sorry.だけでいいと思います。↵
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The notification of shipping I sent you just ago is wrong.
I will correct the error, so please please check it.
please を意識して２度使われたのではないと思います。↵

I noticed the shipping in error.
これでは私が気が付くということで、↵
I notified of a wrong shipping とか↵
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Although I still don't ship, but how should I correspond to him?↵
Although と butの二つの接続詞があります。それから後半は？が必要です。それからまだ出していないということで現在形ではなくて完了形だと思います。↵
Although I still haven’t ship it, how should I correspond to him?↵
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mura rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
02 Jul 2013 at 00:27
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よくわかります。
mura rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
06 Jul 2013 at 16:44
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When you sharpen the blade of Japanese razors, you will be able to make it more sharper with a natural whetstone than an artificial one. ...