中林もも (linne0213) Written Reviews

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linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
05 Aug 2014 at 19:54
Comment
This should be translated into English, not French! Be careful and check before submitting. Your French is good, though.
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
22 Jul 2014 at 22:25
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
18 Jul 2014 at 14:47
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
22 Jul 2014 at 21:38
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
08 Apr 2014 at 10:58
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
08 Apr 2014 at 10:26
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
07 Apr 2014 at 16:11
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
05 Apr 2014 at 13:05
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
28 Mar 2014 at 01:05
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese
16 Mar 2014 at 07:09
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
16 Mar 2014 at 07:38
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
12 Mar 2014 at 10:30
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English
05 Apr 2014 at 12:45
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese
12 Mar 2014 at 14:36
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
23 Jul 2014 at 10:59
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
06 Feb 2014 at 20:10
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
04 Feb 2014 at 16:30
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
12 Mar 2014 at 14:44
linne0213 rated this translation result as Japanese → English
04 Feb 2014 at 14:24
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
04 Feb 2014 at 14:14
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
07 Apr 2014 at 15:41
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
22 Jul 2014 at 22:49
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
13 Jan 2014 at 18:33
Comment
内容の解釈には問題がありませんが、言い回しの洗練は可能です。 「議論するには別の独立した記事が必要となるスマートウォッチ」は、意味がとりにくいので 「スマートウォッチについて議論するには別に独立した記事が必要となるので、ここでは~」のような言い換えも検討してみてください。
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese
05 Apr 2014 at 12:55
linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
04 Feb 2014 at 21:30