Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

数日前に写真を添付したメッセージをebayからお送りいたしました。ご確認ください。部品が無ければ商品を装着することはできません。

English

Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at this picture.. Witout a part I can not ware this product.

Reviews ( 3 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★ 15 May 2014 at 12:17

original
Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at this picture.. Witout a part I can not ware this product.

corrected
A few days ago, I sent a message along with a picture through ebay. Please take a look at it. You cannot wear the item without the part.

h-gruenberg rated this translation result as ★★★ 13 Jun 2014 at 11:53

original
Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at this picture.. Witout a part I can not ware this product.

corrected
Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at that picture. Without the part I can not install this product.

linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★ 18 Jul 2014 at 14:47

original
Few days ago I have sent a message along with a picture. Please take a look at this picture.. Witout a part I can not ware this product.

corrected
A few days ago, I sent a message along with a picture from eBay. Please check it. Without a part you cannot attach this product.

伝えるべきことが伝わっていません。eBayから、というのはとても大事な部分です。
ware (wearのタイプミスだと思いますが）は非常に用途が限られています。
部品が必要だということから、自分が装着するのではなく、何かに装着するのだということを読み取る必要があったと思います。

一般化するときは、主語にyouを取るとナチュラルな英語になります。
短い文章の中に誤字がいくつもありますので、提出前にしっかり確認する癖をつけてください。
お金をいただくお仕事である以上、良い品質のものをお届けするのがマナーです。