Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

先日荷物を発送したが、ひとつ伝えておくことがあったのを思い出した。

ダンボールを開けたときにクッション入りの大きな封筒が入っている。これはあなたがナイフなどでダンボールを開ける際に刃物でお菓子を傷付けてしまうことがないように入れたものである。
なので、箱を開けたあとは封筒は捨ててしまって構わない。

発送はEMSで行ったので、早いうちに商品を受け取れると思う。

English

I shipped the good the other day, and I remembered there was one thing I had to tell you.

If you open the box, you will see a big envelope with a cushion inside. I put it inside so that you will not damage the snack when you try to open the box with blades like knives.
So you can just throw away the envelope after you open the box.

I shipped it with EMS, so you should receive the item soon.

Reviews ( 1 )

linne0213 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 05 Apr 2014 at 13:05

original
I shipped the good the other day, and I remembered there was one thing I had to tell you.

If you open the box, you will see a big envelope with a cushion inside. I put it inside so that you will not damage the snack when you try to open the box with blades like knives.
So you can just throw away the envelope after you open the box.

I shipped it with EMS, so you should receive the item soon.

corrected
I shipped the good the other day, but I forgot to tell you something.

When you open the box, you will see a big envelope with cushioning inside. I put it there so that you will not damage the snack with a blade when you try to cut the box open with a knife or something.
So you can just throw the envelope away after opening the box.

I shipped it with EMS, so you should receive the item soon.

原文に忠実に訳されていると思います。
添削は、より自然に訳すとすれば、という提案だと考えて頂ければと思います。

[akihiro_12]

レビューありがとうございます。なるほど、「ひとつ伝えておくこと」は確かにsomethingで伝わりますし自然ですね。you openもopeningにするとスムーズですね。ありがとうございました。