翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

①私もその曲聴いたけど、クラッシックバージョンだったからか、その曲に聴こえなかった。フルバージョンは聴いていないけど、もうYouTubeとかにアップされてるかな？
②まだ最後まで見ていません。
③彼女は子供達の前では決して疲れた顔をみせません。彼女はいつも笑顔で私達を幸せな気持ちにさせてくれます。
④私は疲れている時や落ち込んだ時、子供が笑ってる写真をみます。不思議と疲れてるのを忘れて私も笑顔になっています。
⑤それは見たことがなかった。
⑥まだ仕事中です。

英語

1. I also listened to that song but it did not sound the same one because it was Classic version. I didn't listen to its full version, though, I guess it might be already uploaded onto Youtube or something.
2. I didn't watch that to the end.
3. With children, no one can notice her tiredness. She always smiles and makes me happy.
4. I always see pictures of children when I feel tired. I'm not sure why but It makes me smile and wipe my tiredness out.
5. I haven't see that.
6. I'm still working now.

レビュー ( 1 )

yosuke-oshidaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/30 10:10:32

元の翻訳
1. I also listened to that song but it did not sound the same one because it was Classic version. I didn't listen to its full version, though, I guess it might be already uploaded onto Youtube or something.
2. I didn't watch that to the end.
3. With children, no one can notice her tiredness. She always smiles and makes me happy.
4. I always see pictures of children when I feel tired. I'm not sure why but It makes me smile and wipe my tiredness out.
5. I haven't see that.
6. I'm still working now.

修正後
1. I also listened to that song but it did not sound the same one because it was Classic version. I didn't listen to its full version, though, I guess it might be already uploaded onto Youtube or something.
2. I didn't watch that to the end.
3. With children, no one can notice her tiredness. She always smiles and makes me happy.
4. I always see pictures of my children when I feel tired. I'm not sure why but It makes me smile and wipe my tiredness out.
5. I haven't seen that.
6. I'm still working now.