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Cheek

Release on 4/23 (Mon)
Published in the month of June

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Cheek

Release on　April 23 (Mon)
Published in the month of June

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To person in charge

My name is T, F Ltd., in Japan.

I have a question about transformation cable of your company.
Is it possible for you to make card edge to 9pin cable of AERA FC-260 series?
If possible I want to know t"how much it costs.

I am waiting for your reply.

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To person in charge

My name is T, F Ltd., in Japan.

I have a question about transformation cable of your company.
Is it possible for you to make card edge to 9pin cable of AERA FC-260 series?
If possible I want to know how much it costs.

I am waiting for your reply.

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I do not have any stock of A.
It may arrive after April but I do not know the details like amount or price etc.
Except A, what I have many ordered from U.S. customers are B and C.
The price of the product is current price. There is a possibility the price will be changed as soon as it is out of stock.
Please let me know if you look for something in connection with games.

When I searched, I found a vendor who have stock of A and B.
If you order the product from the page below, I will stock it immediately.
Please understand that if there is no stock at merchandise resource when you order, the order will be cancelled.

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I do not have any stock of A.
It may arrive after April but I do not know the details like amount or price etc.
Except A, what I have many orders from U.S. customers are B and C.
The price of the product is a current price. There is a possibility the price will be changed as soon as it is out of stock.
Please let me know if you look for something in connection with games.

When I searched, I found a vendor who have stock of A and B.
If you order the product from the page below, I will stock it immediately.
Please understand that if there is no stock at the vender when you make an order, the order will be cancelled.

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Thank you for contacting.

It seems that tha package has already sent from Japan to US but we cannot find out a record for arrival in US.

When you get it, please refuse to receive it.

We think it will return to Japan.

When you refuse to receive it and contact us, we would like to take a process of refund.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for contacting us.

It seems that the package has already been sent out from Japan to US, but we cannot trace the record that confirms the arrival in the U.S.

When you receive it, please decline the receipt.

That way, we think it will be returned to Japan.

After you decline to receive the parcel, please contact us. We will then proceed with the refund arrangement.

Thank you for your understanding.

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40th single "SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Special Edition>

Commemorable 40th single is <AAA Party> special edition only a member of the fan club can get!!! But for this single, special edition is also sold with report special part (P36)!

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40th single "SHOW TIME" <AAA Party Special Edition>

Commemorable 40th single is <AAA Party> a special edition only a member of the fan club can get!!! But for this single, the special edition is also sold with a special edition fanzine(36 pages)!

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Hello, nice to meet you.
I will adjust this case instead of Mr. Tanaka because I am in charge of A company.

In terms of business cooperative industry with your company, I think it is effective to introduce you the following members.

Mr. Sato

Because I would like to check to Mr. Sato immediately, I appreciate it if you wait for a while.

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Hello, nice to meet you.
I will adjust this case instead of Mr. Tanaka because I am in charge of A company.

In terms of cooperation in business with your company, I think it is effective to introduce you the following member.

Mr. Sato

I will check this with Mr. Sato immediately. Please wait for a while.

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I am sorry for my late reply.
Then please deal with me at $170.↵
Thank you.
I will order if I get order because it is sold now.
Thank you for your help.

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I am sorry for my late response.
So, let us proceed at $170. Thank you.
As it is currently on sale, I will place an order upon request.
Thank you for your assistance with this matter.

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Hello.
I paid by my credit card some time ago but I could not buy the product I put in a shopping cart because it was recognized automatically as a credit card company's misuse.
If you can see the stock in my shopping cart, I want to purchase it as a same product content and at same price.
I am happy if you correspond as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help.

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Hello.
I paid by credit card a while ago, but I could not settle the payment for the product in my shopping cart because the card's company automatically identified it as an unauthorized transaction.
If you can see the stock in my shopping cart, I want to purchase that same product at that same price.
I would appreciate it if you could deal with this matter as soon as possible.
Thank you for your help.

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Carriage is expensive. SAL mail of international package can send about $21 if it is less than 3kg and cannot you use international package?
Other Pakistani sellers can use international package. Your company's correspondence is great and I will raise deals in the future.
There is no problem if delivery is delayed little bit.
Best regards.

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Carriage [word choice] is expensive. SAL mail of international package can send for about $21 if it is less than 3kg [wordy]. Could you not use international package?
Other Pakistani sellers can use international package. Your company's correspondence [word choice] is great and I will raise [usage] deals in the future.
There is no problem if delivery is delayed little bit.
Best regards.

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Carriage is expensive. SAL mail of international package can send about $21 if it is less than 3kg and cannot you use international package?
Other Pakistani sellers can use international package. Your company's correspondence is great and I will raise deals in the future.
There is no problem if delivery is delayed little bit.
Best regards.

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The shipping fees are so expensive. It appears that SAL fees for international parcels are about $21 if the weight is under, so could you ship it using this service?
Apparently, other Pakistani sellers can use this type of international shipping. Dealing with your company is great and I plan on increasing our transactions in the future.
There is no problem if the delivery takes a little longer.
Best regards.

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I purchased 3 pieces of your picture recently. It arrived in Japan early and I'm very satisfied with products. This time furthermore I'm thinking I would like to purchase plural pieces of picture (3-5pcs) from you. And here is my suggestion, can I purchase from you directly? As the postage is wasteful, I'm very glad if I purchase from you directly and you send it to me in one go. I'm thinking of purchasing from you continuously in the future. If possible, I will additionally send picture I want to purchase to this email. I'm waiting for your good reply.

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I purchased 3 pictures of yours recently. They arrived in Japan early and I'm very satisfied with your products. This time furthermore I'm thinking I would like to purchase 3 to 5 pictures from you. And here is my suggestion, can I purchase from you directly? To save the postage, I'm very glad if I could purchase from you directly and you could send them to me in one go. I'm thinking of purchasing from you continuously in the future. If possible, I will additionally send a picture I want to purchase to this email. I'm waiting for your good reply.

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マレンウェッグは人間の多様性の傾向を最も極端だとしました。2つだけのサイクルの代わりに、マレンウェッグは居眠りの間に約2.5時間あけて1日に6回の睡眠をとります(約40分ずつ)。

「これはおそらく私の人生においての最も生産的な時間だった。私はその時間にWordPressを書いた。」と彼はフェリス人間の言いました。

しかし実行するのは簡単ではありませんでした。もしマレンウェッグが１日6回の睡眠のうち1回でもし損ねたら、彼は「台なし」になっていただろう、と言いました。その難しさにも関わらず、もっと社会的に受け入れられていれば、彼はUberman睡眠法を続けていたかもしれません。マレンウェッグは彼女ができたあと究極の睡眠法を放棄した、と言いました。

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マレンウェッグは人間の多相睡眠の傾向を最も極端な方向まで押し進めました。睡眠、覚醒のサイクルを通常のように2回とる代わりに、マレンウェッグは約2.5時間ずつあけて居眠りしながら、1日に6回の睡眠をとりました(約40分ずつ)。

「これはおそらく私の人生においての最も生産的な時間だった。私はその時間にWordPressを書いた。」と彼はフェリスに言いました。

しかし実行するのは簡単ではありませんでした。もしマレンウェッグが１日6回の睡眠のうち1回でもし損ねたら、彼は「台なし」になっていただろう、と言いました。その難しさにも関わらず、この睡眠法がもっと社会的に受け入れられるものなら、彼はUberman睡眠法を続けていたかもしれません。マレンウェッグは彼女ができたあと、この極端な睡眠法を放棄した、と言いました。

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Please stop.

I checked before I ordered, did not I?
You said you would dispatch because it arrived on 1st week of February.
After that you put off one week each and I cannot stand it.

Due to your lie, I lost my important customers' trust on my business and I'm suffering damage a lot because the ordered product have not arrived and many other products which is waiting for it depreciate.

Send it to me right now, please.
And the product cost should be 20% discount.
That is it.

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Please stop [unclear].

I checked with you before ordering, did not I?
You said you would dispatch because it would arrive in the first week of February.
After that you keep putting off one week each and I cannot stand it.

Due to your lie, I lost my important customers' trust in my business and I'm suffering a lot of damage because the ordered products have not arrived and many other products which is [s-v agreement] waiting for it depreciate.

Send them to me right now, please.
And please give me a 20% discount on the product price.
That is it.

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I'm very sorry that there is a defectiveness the way to exhibit of this product.
As there is XX, you say there was a warning but I'm very sorry I cannot find the message even if I check email or seller central.
Is it possible for you to tell me the date of sending because I want to check and refer.

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I'm very sorry that there is a defectiveness [awkward] in the way to list this product.
As there is XX [unclear], you say there was a warning but I'm very sorry I wasn't able to find the message even if I checked email or seller central.
Could you please tell me the date of sending because I want to check it and refer to it?

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Process of shopping
About postage
About tax
About coupon
About point
About icon
It is a shop manager's recommendation product.
Sales ranking up to top 5th can have this mark.
The postage will be free if you bundle the product indicated this icon.

Will you wish the delivery of email magazine?

If you make a mistake your email address, reply cannot be sent.
Please take care.
Please check spam folder as well because there are cases when reply from our shop can be processed as a spam.

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Process of shopping
About postage
About tax
About coupon
About point
About icon
It is a shop manager's recommendation product.
Sales ranking up to top 5th can have this mark.
The postage will be free if you bundle the product indicated this icon.

Will you wish the delivery of email magazine?

If you make a mistake about your email address, reply cannot be sent.
Please be careful.
Please check spam folder as well because there are cases when reply from our shop can be processed as a spam.

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If product send back, what I can do is as below.
I will refund $1which deducts $1 from $2 for round postage (going:$1, return:$1) after I get the product immediately.
After that if you wish to have the same product, you need to order again.
If you don't need it, I will just correspond to refund.
Regarding of the round postage, please understand that we cannot refund because we have to pay to post office for it.

If you send the product back to me, I will refund the product's cost and postage which you have to pay to return after i receive it immediately.

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If you have sent back the product, I can do the following:
I will refund $1 which deducts $1 from $2 for round postage [usage] (going:$1, return:$1) as son as I receive the product.
After that if you wish to have the same product, you need to order it again.
If you don't need it, I will just refund.
Regarding of the round postage [usage], please understand that we cannot refund because we have to pay the post office for it.

If you send the product back to me, I will refund the product's cost and postage you pay to return after I receive it immediately [what does this modify in the original?].

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Today I went to Japanese post office and I discussed with the chief that a packed I sent to you had been greatly delayed.

I already submitted the document of tracing research and I'm on the stage that I'm waiting for the research result from US post office.

Generally the answer is coming 2-3 weeks later after the document is submitted.

I'm very sorry for your inconvenience but I would like you to wait for it until the end of this month.

I promise I will refund you the full amount if the package is lost.

And when you purchase next time, I will do postage for free as my apology.

Thank you for your understanding.

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Today I went to Japanese post office and I discussed with the chief that a package I sent to you had been significantly delayed.

I already submitted the document of tracing research and I'm waiting for the research result from US post office.

Generally it takes 2 to 3 weeks to receive the answer after the document is submitted.

I'm very sorry for your inconvenience but I would like you to wait for it by the end of this month.

I promise I will refund you the full amount if the package is lost.

And when you purchase next time, I will do postage for free as my apology.

Thank you for your understanding.

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I want to order as below.
Here is my questions.

The number of orders
64GB
•Black 50 pieces
•Brown 50 pieces

How much is for 1 piece?
•How should I pay the price after I get discount?
•How much is for express delivery?
•When will you send it to me if I order?

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I want to order as below.
Here is my questions.

The number of orders
64GB
•Black 50 pieces
•Brown 50 pieces

How much is it for 1 piece?
•How should I pay the price after I get the discount?
•How much is the express delivery?
•When will you send it to me if I order?

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This diaper does monitoring health condition for baby. At front part, a QR code and various colors of squares are attatched and the colors will turn depends on protein and moisture included to wee-wee or microbes. And to read the patch color turned with smart phone tell us if there is any inflammation in baby's ureter, functional disorder of the kidney and dehydration. Also it is possible to keep everything like carte if the patch is read once.

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This diaper monitors a baby’s health. At front part, a QR code and various colors of squares are attatched [spelling] and the colors will turn depends on protein and moisture in wee-wee [word choice] or microbes. By reading the patch color with a smartphone, you can tell if there is any inflammation in a baby's ureter, functional disorder of the kidney and dehydration [not parallel]. Also it is possible to keep everything [awkward] like carte [word confusion] if the patch is read once.

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Hello, thank you for contacting me many times.
I will move to a new place tomorrow.
I will reply you after I finish to move.
Please wait one more day.
Thank you.

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Hello, thank you for contacting me many times.
I will move to a new place tomorrow.
I will reply to you again after I finish moving.
Please wait one more day.
Thank you.

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Hello, thank you for contacting me many times.
I will move to a new place tomorrow.
I will reply you after I finish to move.
Please wait one more day.
Thank you.

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Hello, thank you for contacting me many times.
I will move to a new place tomorrow.
I will reply you after I finish moving.
Please wait one more day.
Thank you.

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Good evening. Thank you for your message.
The product you ordered have not been canceled yet.
I have not canceled one you ordered later though 2 products you purchased at first have already canceled.

I will send it to you as soon as possible.
Please wait for a while. Thank you.

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Good evening. Thank you for your message.
The product you ordered has not been canceled yet.
I have not canceled one you ordered later though 2 products you purchased at first have already been canceled.

I will send it to you as soon as possible.
Please wait for a while. Thank you.