翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

サマースクールに参加するためにカリフォルニア州バークレーに来ています。
大学の中を七面鳥の群れが歩いてるような田舎街ですが、幸せに生きていくのに必要なものはすべてある気がします。
毎日いろんな人に出会って、本当に楽しい。バークレーにはあと１か月滞在します。ナパバレーに行ってからでなければ日本には帰れない！

英語

I'm visiting Barkeley, California to participate in summer school.
Herds of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything neccessary to live happy seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Barkeley. I can't go home in Japan before visiting to Napa valley!

レビュー ( 2 )

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/15 09:26:34

元の翻訳
I'm visiting Barkeley, California to participate in summer school.
Herds of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything neccessary to live happy seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Barkeley. I can't go home in Japan before visiting to Napa valley!

修正後
I'm in Berkeley, California to take summer school.
Flocks of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything necessary to live happily seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Berkeley. I can't go home to Japan before visiting Napa valley!

A couple of small mistakes here and there but not a bad job

[tomsak]

Thank you for your review.

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/16 20:03:13

元の翻訳
I'm visiting Barkeley, California to participate in summer school.
Herds of turkeys can be seen walking around the college in this country town, but everything neccessary to live happy seems to be here.
I meet so many different people everyday, and it's so exciting. One more month to go in Barkeley. I can't go home in Japan before visiting to Napa valley!

修正後
I'm in Berkeley, California, to attend summer school.
Flocks of turkeys can be seen walking around the campus in this rural town, but everything necessary for living happily seems to be here.
I meet so many different people every day, and it's so exciting. I'll stay here in Berkeley for another month. I can't go back to Japan before visiting Napa valley!