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元の翻訳
The videos with the new music composed by HATSUNE Miku and ocaloid characters were uploaded one after another on the video sharing websites including niconicovideo and it becomes more and more popular. Consequently, this is an exceptionel hit product as DTM Software.

▼ It sings like this.

World is Mine - supercell

▼ Enter KAGAMINE Rin/Len followed by HATSUNE Miku

It was released on December 27, 2007 as the 2nd DTM Software "Character Vocal Series (CV series)" followed by the Hatsune Miku version.

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The videos with the new music composed by HATSUNE Miku and ｖocaloid characters were uploaded one after another on the video sharing websites including niconicovideo and it becomes more and more popular. Consequently, this is an exceptional hit product as DTM Software.

▼ It sings like this.

World is Mine - supercell

▼ Enter KAGAMINE Rin/Len followed by HATSUNE Miku

It was released on December 27, 2007 as the 2nd DTM Software "Character Vocal Series (CV series)" followed by the Hatsune Miku version.

元の翻訳
ph35306

▼ What is haiku?
A haiku, there is a rule refers consist of 17 ”on” (17 hiraganas) in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 "on" respectively. It is unique japanese poetry with a fixed form. It must contain a "kigo" to imply the season. The term "haiku" is abbreviated "Haikainoku". It was named "Haiku" for "Haikainoku".

▼Originally, it is a game called "Utakumi 575".

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ph35306

▼ What is haiku?
A haiku is a poem formed from 17 ”on” (17 hiragana syllables) in three phrases of 5, 7 and 5 "on" respectively. It is a form of fixed form poetry unique to Japan. It must contain a "kigo" - a word implying a particular season. Originally "haikainoku"; later shortened to "haiku".

▼Originally, it is a game called "Utakumi 575".

元の翻訳
ha26503

GIRLS und PANZER wrapping train
Kashima Rinkai Tetsudō (Kashima Seaside Railway) in Ibaraki Prefecture services GIRLS und PANZER wrapping trains. The line in that anime was actually modeled on Kashima Rinkai Tetsudō.

The illustrations also everywhere in the trains!

Wrapping train "Oreno imotoga konnani kawaiiwakeganai (My small sister is not so cute.)" ↵
Chiba Toshi Monorēru (Chiba Urban Monorail) services wrapping trains "Oreno imotoga konnani kawaiiwakeganai."

The inside looks like this.

Chihayafuru wrapping train
The Keihan Ishiyama Sakamoto Line in shiga Prefecture services Chihayafuru wrapping trains.

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ha26503

The wrap advertising train of the of the animation “Girls and Panzer”
Kashima Rinkai Tetsudo which covers in Ibaraki prefecture is operating a wrap advertising train of the “Girls and Panzer”. The railroad line is also taken as a model of the animation.↵


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Illustrations are everywhere inside of a car!

The wrap advertising train of the animation “My younger sister should not be such cute”↵
The Chiba urban monorail is operating the wrap advertising train for the “my younger sister should not be such cute”

The inside of the car is roughly like this.

The wrap advertising train of the animation “Chihayafuru”
The Keihan Ishiyama Sakamoto line which covers Shiga prefecture is operating the wrap advertising train of the animation “Chihayafuru”↵

元の翻訳
ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

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ly77504

Definition of traditional Kyoto vegetables
1. Traditional vegetables which have been produced before the Meiji Restoration in1868 when the capital was located in Kyoto.
2. The vegetables are produced in not only Kyoto central city but also the rest of Kyoto prefecture.
3. It Includes Bamboo shoots.
4. It Excludes mushrooms, ferns (flowering royal fern, bracken, etc.)
5. It includes the vegetables which are grown only for the species preservation or the vegetables species which are not grown but it is preserved the species. And it includes the extinct vegetables.

元の翻訳
ly63301
▼Location of Mino
Mino is located in Hokusetsu area of Osaka. (*cf. dark pink area in the map)

▼Access from Hankyu Umeda Station （JR Osaka Station）

【Train】
Umeda Station (Hankyu Takarazuka line) → Ishibashi Station (Hankyu Mino line) → Mino Station

【Subway and Bus】
Umeda Station (Midosuji line) → Senri-Chūō Station (Hankyu bus) → Mino Station
You can arrive Hankyu Mino Station.

Mino Station

Let's go to Mino Waterfall (Minoh Otaki)!

Now you are at Mino Station (at the lower left of the map). You walk along the street Takido for about 40min to Minoh Otaki (at the upper right of the map). Minoh Otaki is about 2.7km from Mino Station.

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ly63301
▼Location of Mino
Mino is located in Hokusetsu area of Osaka. (*cf. dark pink area in the map)

▼Access from Hankyu Umeda Station （JR Osaka Station）

【Train】
Umeda Station (Hankyu Takarazuka line) → Ishibashi Station (Hankyu Mino line) → Mino Station

【Subway and Bus】
Umeda Station (Midosuji line) → Senri-Chūō Station (Hankyu bus) → Mino Station
You will arrive at Hankyu Mino Station.

Mino Station

Let's go to Mino Waterfall (Minoh Otaki)!

Now you are at Mino Station (at the lower left of the map). You walk along the street Takido for about 40min to Minoh Otaki (at the upper right of the map). Minoh Otaki is about 2.7km from Mino Station.

元の翻訳
私たちは在庫切れになり、非常にゆっくり注文がきているので、アマゾンはこれらのために私どもの注文を遂行してきている。私どもは、他のバッチ処理が送られてきており、私どもはできるだけ早くあなたに出荷する予定です。

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私たちは在庫切れになり、非常にゆっくり注文がきているので、アマゾンはこれらのために私どもの注文を遂行してくれています。私どもは、他のバッチ処理が送られてきており、私どもはできるだけ早くあなたに出荷する予定です。