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ph62204

▼Finally......
Popular characters have got together after we chose 10 characters. It is apt to hear "That character hasn't been chosen!" or "What the hell without that girl!".
But, all the more reason, I wonder if twin tale has high popularity.

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ph62204

▼Finally......
Popular characters have got together after we chose 10 characters. We will likely hear "That character hasn't been chosen!" or " Why isn't that girl there?".
But, all the more reason, I wonder if its just that twin tale has a high popularity.

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Ph59701
TOMODACHI! I love the world! Pretty foreign young ladies in the Anime, 10 selections
Characters in Japanimation often have colorful eyes and hairs, it's frequently referred as a "non-national" characters. Meanwhile, the foreign characters no matter appearance or personality are made ​​along the characteristics of the country. Although those characters are drawn up by Japanese, there should have pros and cons comments when viewed by foreigners. That's why, we will introduce the alien characters by different nationalities one by one this time.

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Ph59701
TOMODACHI! I love the world! Pretty foreign young girls in the Anime, 10 selections
Characters in Japanimation often have colorful eyes and hair, it's frequently referred as a "non-national" characters. Meanwhile, the foreign characters no matter appearance or personality are made ​​along the characteristics of the country. Although those characters are drawn up by Japanese, there should have pros and cons comments when viewed by foreigners. That's why, we will introduce the alien characters by different nationalities one by one this time.

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mo109013

(3) Donation to WWD Japan (World Wild Fun For Nature Japan)

Happinet

A conglomerate that becomes the core of Bandai Namco Group and holds the leading position in Japanese market as the toy wholesale business.

A leading company in wholesaling of games and DVD softwares. It's also very strong in character business as well as in music and video business.

The company serves as the distributor of home video game players like Xbox and Xbox 360 of Microsoft Corporation in Japan.

It also involved in the production of "Digital Monster (Digimon) Series" including "Digimon Adventure".

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mo109013

(3) Donation to WWD Japan (World Wild Fun For Nature Japan)

Happinet

A trading company conglomerate that becomes the core of Bandai Namco Group and holds the leading position in Japanese market as the toy wholesale business.

A leading company in wholesaling of games and DVD softwares. It's also very strong in character business as well as in music and video business.

The company serves as the distributor of home video game players like Xbox and Xbox 360 of Microsoft Corporation in Japan.

It also involved in the production of "Digital Monster (Digimon) Series" including "Digimon Adventure".

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mo109005

In past days, they had focused on their main business on running "Vector" which is the largest software downloading website in Japan. However, they are now concentrating on their core business on offering and running online games.
The ticket available for online games of 10,000 yen

The following is the content of complimentary goods for shareholder
Shareholders holding more than 100 stocks are to be equally presented the ticket available for online games for P.C. of 10,000 yen.
(The tickets subject to both browser game service and client-server model online game service)

TOEI ANIMATION CO., LTD.

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mo109005

In past, they had focused on their main business on running "Vector" which is the largest software downloading website in Japan. However, they are now concentrating on their core business on offering and running online games.
10,000 yen worth of online games use ticket

The following is the content of complimentary goods for shareholders.
Shareholders holding more than 100 stocks are to be equally presented 10,000 yen.worth of ticket available for P.C. online games use.
(The tickets apply to both the browser game service and client-server model online game service)

TOEI ANIMATION CO., LTD.

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mo109005

Before we had focused on management of the nation's largest software download website "Vector", now we would like to make online game supply and operation our core business.
The 10,000 yen online game use ticket.

Below are the stockholder special benefits
Stockholders owned more than 100 stocks evenly get the 10,000 yen online game ticket used for PC.

(This applies to both browser game service and client/server online game service)

Toei Animation

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mo109005

Before we had focused on management of the nation's largest software download website "Vector", now we would like to make providing and operating online gameｓ our core business.
10,000 yen worth of online game use ticket.

Below are the stockholder special benefits
Stockholders owned more than 100 stocks evenly get the 10,000 yen online game ticket used for PC.

(This applies to both browser game service and client/server online game service)

Toei Animation

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Complimentary goods for shareholder Handbook 2013-2014

Because there are many people who buy stocks in order to get shareholder incentives, a lot of books introducing complimentary goods for shareholder are published.

・Complimentary goods for shareholder in America (example)
Complimentary goods for shareholder of Starbucks Corporation, which is based on Seattle, are gift certificates of Starbucks.

・What are complimentary goods for shareholder in Japan?
Mandarake
It is the largest specialty store in used-books in Japan which deals with manga and secondhand books. It also runs sales for original anime pictures and toys.

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Complimentary goods for shareholder Handbook 2013-2014

Because there are many people who buy stocks in order to get shareholder incentives, a lot of books introducing complimentary goods for shareholder are published.

・Complimentary goods for shareholders in America (example)
Complimentary goods for shareholders of Starbucks Corporation, which is based in Seattle, are gift certificates of Starbucks.

・What are complimentary goods for shareholders in Japan?
Mandarake
It is the largest specialty store in used-books in Japan which deals with manga and used books. It also runs sales for original anime pictures and toys.

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mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mer104805

Fairy fashion is the combination of long cardigan and short pants.
It is a boyish looking if you only look at the items, but you can get the softly impression using pastel colors.
Starts changing one item to the fairy item
You may have a resistance if you say fairy fashion, because it is a littlegaudy ...
If it is your case use "1 Fairy item" as lemma!

Beginners in fairy fashion, should use a dress with race in it!
This alone is enough cute, and it is a start.

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mer104805

Fairy fashion is the combination of long cardigan and short pants.
It is boyish looking if you only look at the items, but you can get a soft impression by using pastel colors.
Starts changing one item to the fairy item
Even if you say fairy fashion, you may be hesitant since it is a little gaudy ...
If this is the case, use "1 Fairy item" as a slogan!

Beginners in fairy fashion, should use a dress with lace in it!
This alone is cute enough, and it is a start.

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fr104708

The look of the Sky Tree beyond the narrow alleys of the old-fashioned wooden building.
Try to visit at least once Sumida, the traditional city that coexists with high-tech.

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fr104708

The Sky Tree can be seen beyond the narrow alleys where the old-fashioned wooden buildings stand in a line.
Please try visiting Sumida, a traditional city that coexists with high-tech, at least once.

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Article 4 (Prohibited Items)
The Second Party can not commit any of the following acts.
① Leasing this property to a third party, or transferring the right to lease to a third party.
② Constructing any building or otherwise on the property, or modifying the present state of the property.

Article 5 (Reporting Requirements.)
If the Second Party should move the parked automobile described below, consent must be received from the First Party.
2 In the case that the Second Party should at any time park another vehicle in place of the vehicle described below, the Second Party must report the vehicle name and number to the First Party, and must receive the consent of the First Party.

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Article 4 (Prohibited Items)
The Second Party can not commit any of the following acts.
① Leasing this property to a third party, or transferring the right to lease to a third party.
② Constructing any building or otherwise on the property, or modifying the present state of the property.

Article 5 (Reporting Obligations.)
If the Second Party should move the parked automobile described below, consent must be received from the First Party.
2 In the case that the Second Party should at any time park another vehicle in place of the vehicle described below, the Second Party must report the vehicle name and number to the First Party, and must receive the consent of the First Party.

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The excellent product with soft fluffy cheese melted into hot curry.
There are baked curry shops everywhere so you might want to walk around to try and compare?
Just try going a little further from Mijoko Station
It's Shiokaze-go that faces towards Mekari Shrine!

After getting satisfied with the Mojiko Retro, we would like to recommend this "Mojiko Retro Train - Shiokaze-go" tour to anyone who still has time.
Connecting the Mekari area of Kanmon Straits and Mojiko Retro area, the train is operated during spring and summer vacation, on Saturdays, Sundays, and holidays from middle March to late November.

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An excellent dish with soft fluffy cheese melted into hot curry.
There are baked curry shops everywhere so you might want to walk around to try and compare?
Just try going a little further from Mijoko Station
It's Shiokaze-go that faces towards Mekari Shrine!

After getting satisfied with the Mojiko Retro, we would like to recommend this "Mojiko Retro Train - Shiokaze-go" tour to anyone who still has time.
Connecting the Mekari area of Kanmon Straits and Mojiko Retro area, the train is operated during spring and summer vacation, on Saturdays, Sundays, and holidays from middle March to late November.

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Link express is FUJITSU `s forwading product which combined the best performing DTS and DB-EXPRESS with improved functions.
The Linkexpress supports alot of main frames, UNIX aswell as PC plot forms and ets, TCP/IP, FNA`s protocol and etc, File and Symfoware, Oracle, SQL Server`s data base and etc.That is why this product can deliver easy,reliable, and speedy results of existing assets of file forwarding business.

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Link express is FUJITSU's forwarding product which combines the best performing DTS and DB-EXPRESS with improved functions.
The Linkexpress supports a lot of main frames, UNIX as well as PC plot forms and ets, TCP/IP, FNA`s protocol and etc, File and Symfoware, Oracle, SQL Server`s data base and etc.That is why this product can deliver easy,reliable, and speedy results for existing assets of file forwarding business.

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no100802

The beautiful views with 260 islands from the 360 degree panoramic observation deck will show you the indescribable stunning scenery.

Matsushima (Spring)

Matsushima (Summer)

Matsushim (Autumn)

Matsushim (Winter)


Amanohashidate (Miyazu-shi, Kyoto Prefecture)

Amanohashidate looks like a bridge towards the heaven. People say that the ladder that the God used to use when the God was able to commute between the heaven and the land became Amanohashidate for some reasons.
When you see through between your legs on Mata no Nozoki Dai, you can see the pine forest looks like the bridge over the heaven. It is highly recommended to see the amazing scenery created by the nature. ↵

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no100802

The beautiful views with 260 islands from the observation deck will show you an indescribable stunning scenery that can be viewed from all sides.

Matsushima (Spring)

Matsushima (Summer)

Matsushim (Autumn)

Matsushim (Winter)


Amanohashidate (Miyazu-shi, Kyoto Prefecture)

Amanohashidate looks like a bridge that rise toward the heavens. It is said that the ladder that God used to commute between the heavens and earth became Amanohashidate.
When you look through between your legs on Mata no Nozoki Dai, you can see the pine forest, which look like a bridge over the heavens. Seeing this amazing scenery created by nature is highly recommended.

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no79304

Nomozaki is the westernmost cape of Kyusyu and a warm place whose average of yearly temperature is 18 degrees.


Toimisaki (Kushima-shi, Miyazaki Prefecture)

In addition to the beautiful scene with the seascape of the Pacific Ocean and the landscape of greenery cape, Misaki horse designed a National Natural Treasure (native horse of Japan) live around this cape.

Cape Sata (Ohtsumi-cho, Kagoshima Prefecture)

The southernmost cape of Kyusyu has Cape Sata lighthouse, one of the oldest lighthouse in Japan, in Ohwa Ireland (Ohwajima). Cape Sata faces the Pacific Ocean and East China Sea and Tanegashima and Kusijima can be viewed in distance when it is a fine day. ↵

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no79304

Nomozaki is the westernmost cape of Kyusyu and a warm place, whose average of yearly temperature is 18 degrees Celsius.


Toimisaki (Kushima-shi, Miyazaki Prefecture)

In addition to the beautiful scene with the seascape of the Pacific Ocean and the landscape of greenery cape, Misaki horse designed a National Natural Treasure (native horse of Japan) live around this cape.

Cape Sata (Ohtsumi-cho, Kagoshima Prefecture)

Beyond the southernmost cape of Kyusyu, is the Cape Sata lighthouse, one of the oldest lighthouse in Japan, in Ohwa Island (Ohwajima). Cape Sata faces the Pacific Ocean and East China Sea and Tanegashima and Kusijima can be viewed in distance when it is a fine day.