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日本語

第４条 （禁止事項）
乙は、次に掲げる行為をすることができない。
① 本件土地を第三者に賃貸し、又は第三者に賃借権を譲渡すること。
② 本件土地に建物その他の工作物を設置し、又は現状に変更を加えること。

第５条 （報告義務）
乙が駐車する後記の自動車を変更しようとするときは、甲の承諾を受けなければならない。
２ 乙が車体検査又は修理等のため、後記自動車に代え一時ほかの自動車を駐車
　　　　させようとする場合は、事前にその車輛名及び車輛番号を甲に通知し、甲の承諾
　　　　を得なければならない。

英語

Article 4 (Prohibited Items)
The Second Party can not commit any of the following acts.
① Leasing this property to a third party, or transferring the right to lease to a third party.
② Constructing any building or otherwise on the property, or modifying the present state of the property.

Article 5 (Reporting Requirements.)
If the Second Party should move the parked automobile described below, consent must be received from the First Party.
2 In the case that the Second Party should at any time park another vehicle in place of the vehicle described below, the Second Party must report the vehicle name and number to the First Party, and must receive the consent of the First Party.

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o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/26 20:29:47

元の翻訳
Article 4 (Prohibited Items)
The Second Party can not commit any of the following acts.
① Leasing this property to a third party, or transferring the right to lease to a third party.
② Constructing any building or otherwise on the property, or modifying the present state of the property.

Article 5 (Reporting Requirements.)
If the Second Party should move the parked automobile described below, consent must be received from the First Party.
2 In the case that the Second Party should at any time park another vehicle in place of the vehicle described below, the Second Party must report the vehicle name and number to the First Party, and must receive the consent of the First Party.

修正後
Article 4 (Prohibited Items)
The Second Party can not commit any of the following acts.
① Leasing this property to a third party, or transferring the right to lease to a third party.
② Constructing any building or otherwise on the property, or modifying the present state of the property.

Article 5 (Reporting Obligations.)
If the Second Party should move the parked automobile described below, consent must be received from the First Party.
2 In the case that the Second Party should at any time park another vehicle in place of the vehicle described below, the Second Party must report the vehicle name and number to the First Party, and must receive the consent of the First Party.

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