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評価: 52 / ネイティブ ベトナム語 / 2 Reviews / 2014/02/24 17:55:25

luklak
luklak 52
日本語

mo105101

黒髪を美しく保つために日本人がしていること
日本人の髪の色は黒です。 昨今、髪の毛を元と違う色に染めている人々も目立ちますが、近年は自然な黒髪の魅力が見直されてきています。 黒髪を美しく保つための日本人の秘訣は何でしょう。

◎昔から伝わる日本伝統の技
・ヘアオイルに「椿油」
ツバキ(椿)の種子から採った天然成分100%のヘアオイル

髪のうるおいを保ちハリとコシを与え、しっとりなめらかな輝く髪に整えます。

日本原産の常緑樹で花が美しく利用価値も高い



英語

mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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o63odt 61 Extensive experience in providing hig...
o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/26 12:43:05

元の翻訳
mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mooomin 52 英語圏に通算6年半居住経験があります。 最近はなかなか時間が取れないのが...
mooominはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/26 12:43:35

元の翻訳
mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

修正後
mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

The flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan are beautiful, and also has a high utilization value .

最後の文の花が「美しい」の部分の訳がされていたなかったので、付け足してみました。ちょっと無理やりですが・・・。勉強になりました。

このレビューを100%の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。

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