Miyako Sakamoto (miya-fu) — 付けたレビュー

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We have started to distribute mailing magazine!
Please register your mail address, your name from here, and register your wish and the products you want also!
We will deliver discount information and bargain sales information which is exclusively available for registered members only, and discount coupon code available for next purchase only.

And, we will also deliver miscellaneous information about Japan!
Thank you for your continuous support.

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We have started to distribute mailing magazine!
Please register your mail address, your name from here, and also register your wish and the products you want!
We will deliver discount information and bargain sales information which is available exclusively to registered members, and discount coupon code which can be used on your next purchase.

And, we will also deliver miscellaneous information about Japan!
Thank you for your continuous support.

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Thank you for your reply. Yes, you are right. I am very sorry about it. I really appreciate your reply in spite that my question was too late.
I am looking forward to the publication of the anthology, and I wish your success of the project.

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Thank you for your quick reply. Yes, you are right. I am very sorry about it. I really appreciate your reply in spite that my question was too late.
I am looking forward to the publication of the anthology, and I wish your success of ーthe project.

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Thank for your shopping at our store.
And, I deeply appreciate your feedback.
Please keep in touch with us. We will try more harder to ship quickly, and to support carefully.
Please do not hesitate to contact to us any time, if you have any single piece of questions.
Thank you for choosing us among a lot of shops. Thank you very much, again.

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Thank for your shopping at our store.
And, I deeply appreciate your feedback.
Please keep in touch with us. We will try more harder to ship quickly, and to support carefully.
Please do not hesitate to contact us any time, if you have any single piece of questions.
Thank you for choosing us among a lot of shops. Thank you very much, again.

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I am so sorry for I can't not do what you expect.
However, I will accept the returns, when the goods arrive to my home and I will do the refunds.
Please wait for the notice.
I paid for the postage for 30 dollars to send out the items.
Please note the return is customer's will so the refund will be take out the postage and it will be 99 dollars.

Also, you asked before about the item is the same size as the one I send out to you.
I am still hunting for a little bit bigger item, if you find it please contact with me.

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I am so sorry I can't do what you expect.
However, I will accept the returns, when the goods arrive at my home and I will do the refunds.
Please wait for the notice.
I paid 30 dollars for the postage to send out the items.
Please note the return is customer's will, so the postage will be taken off the refund and it will be 99 dollars.

Also, the item you asked about before is the same size as the one I send out to you.
I am still hunting for a little bit bigger item, if I find, I will contact you.

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We received a complaint from Mr. KE.

According to Ms. SE's email in the end of last month, it was going to start on Jan. 5th.
I trusted that information and arrived at Cambodia on the 5th, and yet received another notification saying it has been postponed and I cannot hide my anger.

For three months Ms. SE made me go back and forth, expenses piling up and I get any work done.

Please put this in action by the end of next week.
Also I demand that you give me a firm answer by tomorrow.

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We received a complaint from Mr. KE.

According to Ms. SE's email at the end of last month, it was going to start on Jan. 5th.
I trusted that information and arrived at Cambodia on the 5th, and yet received another notification saying it had been postponed and I cannot hide my anger.

For three months Ms. SE made me go back and forth, expenses piling up and I couldn't get any work done.

Please put this in action by the end of next week.
Also I demand that you give me a firm answer by tomorrow.

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Thank you for your message!
I make effort to deliver this merchandise for you early.

However this haven't be selled in Japan.
So I will ask the maker when I can receive it.

I think I can receive it at the beginning of February.

I will put it at my store after confirm.
I will let you know first.

Please wait just a little.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your message!
I make effort to deliver this merchandise for you soon.

However this haven't been sold in Japan.
So I will ask the maker when I can receive it.

I think I can receive it at the beginning of February.

I will put it at my store after confirming.
I will let you know first.

Please wait just a little.

Thank you.

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You said that you sent the item by EMS of Japan Post a couple of days ago.
But it is stopped at the customs in China.
I heard that inspection at the customs is stricter as import by individual from Japan has been increasing.
As a recent example, the customs contacts you.
In that case, they will charge you to pay duties and consumption tax.
We hope that you handle it as soon as possible.
If you would like to cancel receipt of the item immediately, the item will be returned to us if you contact the customs. After that, we will issue you a refund.

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I have sent you the item by EMS of Japan Post a couple of days ago.
But it is stopped at the customs in China.
I heard that the inspection at the customs is stricter as the number of imports by individuals from Japan has been increasing.
As a recent example, the customs contacts you.
In that case, they will charge you the duties and the consumption tax.
We hope that you handle it as soon as possible.
If you have to cancel receiving the item for a urgent reason, contact the customs. The item will be returned to us. After that, we will issue you a refund.

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Since I had time before the dinner, I visited observation room on the 38th floor of JR tower which is connected to Sapporo station.
I was fascinated by the view that was like thousands of jewelry scattered around myself in the dim but high-grade room.
This JR Tower observation room is designed to show the night view more outstanding in the low light of the room and each chairs at the window side is perfect for some who would like to enjoy the view alone. Of course, viewing night view here for couples, friends and families would be great too.

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Since I had time before the dinner, I visited observation room on the 38th floor of JR tower which is connected to Sapporo station.
I was fascinated by the view that was like thousands of jewelry scattered around myself in the dim but high-grade room.
This JR Tower observation room is designed to show the night view more outstanding in the low light of the room and each chair at the window side is perfect for some who would like to enjoy the view alone. Of course, viewing night view here for couples, friends and families would be great too.

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I apologize for your inconvenience, and thank you for your patience.
It seems that both of the items you ordered are kept in the post office, one is the first item I shipped by regular mail, the other is the one I sent by express mail. Please contact to the post office.

At the post office, please receive the item of EL033301581JP. And refuse RR376779540JP. Then the refused one RR376779540JP is going to be sent back to my shop in Japan.
If you receive both, please note it is charged for you to send either one back to me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I apologize for your inconvenience, and thank you for your patience.
It seems that both of the items you ordered are kept in the post office, one is the first item I shipped by regular mail, the other is the one I sent by express mail. Please contact the post office.

At the post office, please receive the item of EL033301581JP. And refuse RR376779540JP. Then the refused one RR376779540JP is going to be sent back to my shop in Japan.
If you receive both, please note it is charged for you to send either one back to me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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It is possible to return goods.
In this case, it is you mistake when you order our product, Please confirm items as below ;
Did you open the box when it arrived or not?
If you opened the box already, you will refund only 60% of purchased price.
If you used the machine already, it will be second hand grade and you will refund only 35%.
If the box is not opened ( the appearance is not damaged), you will receive full refund.
But we will not return the transportation fee (65USD) from Japan to you.
Please understand that We are not responsible for transportation fee of returning goods to japan.

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It is possible to return goods.
In this case, it is your mistake when you order our product, Please confirm things below ;
Did you open the box we sent you?
If you opened the box already, you will get a refund of only 60% of the purchased price.
If you used the machine already, it will be second hand grade and you will get a refund of only 35%.
If the box is not opened ( the appearance is not damaged), you will receive a full refund.
But we will not return the transportation fee (65USD) from Japan to you.
Please understand that We are not responsible for transportation fee of returning goods to Japan.