Mami S (mechamami) — 付けたレビュー

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If we find overnight act, there may be a case where the live is cancelled.
※ Travel expenses and accommodation expenses on the day should be paid by the customer.
※ We will cancel the live when we determine that the live can’t be performed due to unforced reasons such as equipment failure in the venue, a natural disaster, and traffic strike.
※ If by reason of force majeure or natural disaster equipment failure, strike and transportation of the venue, it is determined to be unenforceable live, we will cancel the live.
※ Please note that there is a possibility that the live content changes depending on the situation of the members.

Contact:
Avex Marketing Inc.
0120-85-0095 (11:00 to 18:00 weekdays only) ↵

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If we find people lining up overnight, we might cancel the live concert.
※ In this case, travel and accommodation expenses will be on the individual customers.
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※ We will cancel the live concert if we deemed that it can’t be performed due to an unforced reason such as equipment failure in the venue, a natural disaster, or a traffic strike.

※ Please note that there is a possibility that the live content will be changed depending on the situation of the members.

Contact:
Avex Marketing Inc.
0120-85-0095 (11:00 to 18:00 weekdays only)

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"I want to tell you the joy of music by singing and dancing!"
The five some girls group of dance and vocal consisting of Ayano Konishi, Miyu Yamabe, HItomi Arai, Yuri Nakae, and Mei Shoji was formed in January 1, 2010. Their goal is to grow up in a group to play an active role all over Asia as well as in Japan by having much experience. .
They started from regular live concert with a pace of twice a month. They are mainly performing live performance and carried out the first JAPAN TOUR in May in 2011. They released their first album.↵

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"We want to tell you the joy of music by singing and dancing!"
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The dancing and vocal group of five girls, who are Ayano Konishi, Miyu Yamabe, HItomi Arai, Yuri Nakae, and Mei Shoji, was formed on January 1, 2010. Their goal is to expand their performance area from Japan to all over in Asia throughout a lot of experiences.
They started with a regular live concert held twice a month. They are mainly doing live concerts. Their first live tour called 1st JAPAN TOUR was carried out on May in 2011 as they released their first album.

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・When attaching the entry ticket to your post card, please tape the whole ticket with a tape like cellophane tape to prevent it to come off.
・After your application, you can not change the address for an election notice.
・If the prize item had a failure, we would exchange it with a new one, but we would not make a refund.
・Please note that we are not responsible for any accidents or lost during the delivery.

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・When attaching the entry ticket to your post card, please tape the whole ticket to prevent it to come off.
・After submitting your application, you can not change the address for a notice of winning the prize.
・If the prize item had a failure, we will exchange it with a new one, though we will not make a refund.
・Please note that we are not responsible for any accidents or lost during the delivery.

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The sales detail for [jujika(cross)-film[ghost story -curse soul language-]ver.] mu-mo shop event velue limited edition!
In mu-mo shop, we will sell it with [participation ticket for private autgraph session].

※Please care if you get mu-mo shop event velue limited edition in each event venue before selling, [participation ticket for private autgraph session] is not be geined.
Above-mentioned [participation ticket for private autgraph session] is sent only person who elected in apply for lottery in mu-mo shop with goods.

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The sales detail for [jujika(cross)-film[ghost story -curse soul language-]ver.] mu-mo shop event velue limited edition!
In mu-mo shop, we will sell it with [a participation ticket for the private autgraph session].

※Please note if you get mu-mo shop event velue limited edition in each event venue after it's released, [the participation ticket for the private autgraph session] is not be accompanied with.
The above-mentioned [participation ticket for private autgraph session] will be sent with the mu-mo shop goods to the only person won the lottery .

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How to Apply for Limited edition of Jujika "Gakko no Kaidan-Noroi no Kotodama- (Movie) " Ver. exclusive for mu-mo Shop Event.

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How to apply for limited edition of "Jujika 'Gakko no Kaidan-Noroi no Kotodama- (Movie) ' ver." exclusive for the mu-mo shop event.

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We will start to application for lottery from 19:00 on 4 april 2014 (fri)!!

Here is sales page!
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/tgs1404/

※Move to mu-mo shop if you access to the site before the time start to application lottery.
※Only mu-mo shop members(for gratis) can apply to mu-mo shop event velue limited edition with [indivisual autograph session] . From free member resistration, please resistrate to the member before.

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We will start to accept applications for the lottery from 19:00 on April 4 2014 (Fri)!!

Here is the page you can buy it!
http://sp.mu-mo.net/shop/r/tgs1404/

※If you access to the site before the acceptance for the lottery applications starts, the page will jump to Mu-mo shop.
※Only mu-mo shop members (free registration) can put their names in draw for the mu-mo shop event limited edition with [the ticket for an autograph session with members] . Please resister to be a member beforehand via the free member registration page.

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※[Back stage invitation] is targeted to customers who have procedured before time to program opening. In cace you admission or upgrading late for opening, we will give you the special favor other than Back stage invitation.(special favor is announced at the late date)
※[Back stage invitation]is targeted to customers who have procedured before time to program opening.. In cace you admission or upgrading late for opening, we will give you the [photo session participational ticket].
※In case you admission firts time, we will use the cell phone number for resistrating the identify.

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※[Back stage invitation] is applied to customers who have proceeded before the show starts. If you registered or upgraded after the show starts, we will offer you an another special gift different from the Back stage invitation. (What the special gift is will be informed later)
※[Back stage invitation]is applied to customers who have proceeded before the show starts. If you registered or upgraded after the show starts, we will offer you a "photo session ticket" that will be conducted after the show.
※If you register for the first time on the spot, you will be required to use your cell phone for registering your personal information.

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Concerning the continuation privilege:
We will give you the continuation privilege in the venue which is usually sent by mail after continuation.
※ We will give you a continuation privilege "Projector Lights", If persons whose expiration date is the end of March of 2014 continue registration.
※ We will give you a continuation privilege "double charm key ring", If persons whose expiration date is after April of 2014 continue registration.↵

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【privilege for continuation 】
We will offer you privilege for continuation in the venue, which is usually sent by mail after continuation.
※ We will offer you a privilege for continuation,"projector lights", if your expire date is the end of March of 2014 and registers to continue.
※ We will g offer you a privilege for continuation, "double charm key ring", if your expire date is after April 1 of 2014 and registers to continue.

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■Friend Invitation campaign
In case your accompanies become members of B course why they invite from members of B course, we give a special favor to members who invite thair friend!

[special favor]
・one of a can batch from 5 kinds at random

※when your friend join procedure in the venue, the member have to go with the booth. Then please show us the membership number.
※Invitation friend is targeted one Astalight* B course member to one new join procedured customer.

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■Friend Invitation campaign
In case your accompanies become members of B course by your invitation, we will offer a special gift to the members who invited thair friend!

[special gift]
・one pin that are randomly chosen out of 5 kinds

※When your friend register in the venue, the member has to come with him/her to the booth. Then please show us the membership number.
※Friend Invitation is only applied to one member who has Astalight* B course.

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Please let us know your membership number at the registration.
※The acceptance of the comeback is applied for persons who withdrew from B course within three years
※If you wish to continue the registration, in addition, we will give you "one out of the five species of can badge in a random manner”.
※If you introduce your friends in the venue, we will give you "one out of the five species of can badge in a random manner” per one person introduced.
※Persons can also join even if they does not have the live ticket on the day.↵

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Please let us know your membership number at the registration.
※The acceptance of the comeback is applied for those who withdrew from B course within three years
※If you are register at the spot, we will offer you another pin that will be randomly chosen out of the five kinds.
※If you introduce your friends at the venue, we will give you another pin that will be randomly chosen out of the five kinds per one person introduced.
※People who don't have the live concert ticket also can join the event.

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Information for object stores regarding original privileges for the 4th album 「Killing Me Softly」

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Information about the stores that will sell the 4th album "Killing Me Softly" with original privileges.

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■Sponsorship: Serite craiseCO., LTD/ SHO planning office CO., LTD
■support: Mainichi Shimbun newspaper campany
■management: tempo primo CO., LTD
■contact: tempo primo CO., LTD 03-5810-7772(from 10:00 to 18:00 on weekday)
■donation: Mainichi kibou shogakukin(Everyday hope scalaship)

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■preceding for May J. Family (http://fc.avex.jp/mayj/)
period for acception
2 april(wed)15:00 to 6 april (sun) 23:59

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■Sponsorship: Serite craiseCO., LTD/ SHO planning office CO., LTD
■support: Mainichi Shimbun newspaper campany
■management: tempo primo CO., LTD
■contact: tempo primo CO., LTD 03-5810-7772(from 10:00 to 18:00 on weekday)
■donation: Mainichi kibou shogakukin(Everyday hope scalaship)

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■pre-order for May J. Family (http://fc.avex.jp/mayj/)
period for the pre order
April 2 (Wed)15:00 to April 6 (Sun) 23:59

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May J's first-ever event!! A contest with the greatest opera singer at the Suntory Hall!!

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May J's first-ever concert with one of the greatest opera singers at the Suntory Hall!!

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■ Download Yahoo! Live Talk held on March 26 in commemoration of "Heartful Song Covers" release. Until April 4, for the limited time only!

■ Download Channel
http://www.ustream.tv/content/itsonlyidol007

From March 29, 00:00
Until April 4, 23:59

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■ Distributing Yahoo! Live Talk held on March 26 in commemoration of "Heartful Song Covers" release. Until April 4, for the limited time only!

■ Distributing Channel
http://www.ustream.tv/content/itsonlyidol007

From March 29, 00:00
Until April 4, 23:59

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■NHK "MUSIC JAPAN"
・Date：2014 April 6(Sun)
・Air time：24:05-24:49
・Program website： http://www.nhk.or.jp/mj/

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■NHK "MUSIC JAPAN"
・Date：April 6, 2014(Sun)
・Air time：24:05-24:49
・Program website： http://www.nhk.or.jp/mj/

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It is about 9612019228746915235789.
Although the product was marked as "Dangerous Good prohibited to Destination Country" at the website, it has no problem to be exported. If there is anything to be done, please kindly let us know.
You could find more if you would consult the matter with Japanese embassy.

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I'm writing about the item with the tracking #9612019228746915235789.
Although the item was marked as "Dangerous Good prohibited to Destination Country" at the website, it has no problem to be exported. If there is anything to be done, please kindly let us know.
You could find more if you would consult the matter with the Japanese embassy.