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I forgot to accept your suggested amount and now the time limit has passed. I'm sorry but please make the offer again.

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I forgot to accept your suggested amount and now the time limit has passed. I'm sorry and will make another offer.

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The other day the item I ordered from you off of eBay was denied shipping by the forwarding contractor B. Because of that, I am sending the item back to you. Once it gets back to you, could I have you ship it to my address in Japan? I will pay to cover the costs for the shipping to Japan. If you can't do this then I would like to ask for a refund. I hope to hear from you soon.

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The item A I ordered from you the other day through eBay was denied shipping by the forwarding company B. Because of that, I am resending the item back to you. Once it gets back to you, could I have you ship it to my address in Japan? I will pay to cover the costs for the shipping to Japan. If that's not possible, please treat it as a returned item. I hope to hear from you soon.

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I have already given up and sold my inventory to Amazon and removed several items, and deleted all of the listings.
I no longer have any items that are violating the terms of service.
I will send you the URL for my fixed Amazon seller front.
Please take a look at it.
I have already contacted the Japanese staff at Payoneer.
I promise I will not violate the agreement a second time.
I ask for your kind approval of my request.

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I have already deleted all of the listings excluding some items fulfilled by Amazon.
I no longer have any items that are violating the terms of service.
I will send you the URL for my fixed Amazon seller front.
Please take a look at it.
I have already contacted the Japanese staff at Payoneer.
I promise I will never violate the agreement.
I ask for your kind approval of my request.

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The coffee looks like it's going to spill.
I'm sleepy and can't focus on work.
I have the afternoon off tomorrow.

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The coffee looks like it's going to spill.
I'm too sleepy to focus on work.
I'm taking tomorrow afternoon off.

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I know this doll is stated as being in "good condition" but could you elaborate further on this?
Are there any parts that have cracks, splinters, or look like they've been repaired?
Also, can the head, tongue, and hands move normally?
I know this is a bit of a bother but thanks for your help in advance.

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I know this doll is stated as being in "good condition" but could you elaborate further on this?
Are there any parts that have cracks, chipping, or look like they've been repaired?
Also, can the head, tongue, and hands move normally?
I know this is a bit of a bother but thanks for your help in advance.

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I apologize for being so slow.
It seems like the user interface has changed and I can't find the page to resend the invoice.
Could you temporarily pay with the amount that you sent before?
I apologize for the trouble this causes you and I will make the cost of shipping free for you as my apology to you.
Once you pay I will refund you the $9 that was for the shipping cost.
The shipping is e packet.
Is this okay?
I'm so sorry for making you wait.

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I apologize for being so slow.
It seems that the user interface has changed and I can't find the page to resend the invoice.
Could you temporarily pay for the amount that I sent before?
I apologize for the trouble this causes you and I will make the cost of shipping free for you as my apology to you.
Once you pay I will refund you the $ 9 that was for the shipping cost.
The shipping is by ePacket.
Is this okay?
I'm so sorry for making you wait.

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Thank you for contacting me.

I am very relieved to hear that you take your product manufacturing seriously.
It seems you have only just finished sending your first shipment out, am I correct?
If this is the case then I understand if you can't send a sample.
It seems like your product sales are also going very well.

If you have a price list then could you please send it to me?
By the way, where are your products manufactured?

Well, I will wait patiently for the product sample.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could contact me once you send the sample.

We are really looking forward to introducing this product to the Japanese market.

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Thank you for contacting me.

I am very relieved to hear that you take your product manufacturing seriously.
It seems you have only just finished sending your first shipment out, am I correct?
If this is the case then I understand if you can't send a sample.
It seems like your product sales are also going very well.

If you have a price list then could you please send it to me?
By the way, which country are your products manufactured?

Well, I will wait patiently for the product sample.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could contact me once you send the sample.

We are really looking forward to introducing this product to the Japanese market.

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I would like to bid on 8 pieces for the items you are selling.
I would like to have them shipped all together so I would like to pay after the bidding for all of them has ended.

I know you only ship within the US.
But if it's at all possible, I would like for you to ship them all together to me in Japan.
Could you please send a shipment to Japan?

If that isn't at all possible then I would like for you to send it to an American address I have.

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I would like to bid on 8 pieces for [wrong proposition?] the items you are selling.
I would like to have them shipped all together so I would like to pay after the bidding for all of them has ended.

I know you only ship within the US.
But if it's at all possible, I would like for you to ship them all together to me in Japan.
Could you please send a shipment to Japan?

If that isn't at all possible then I would like for you to send it to an American address I have.

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Hello.

Your refund has been processed on eBay.

However, I already sent off the item to you.

If you get the item and it's in good condition could you pay me for it again??

I hope to hear back from you soon.

And I'm really sorry for the trouble this will cause you.

Thanks!!

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Hello.

Your refund has been processed on eBay.

However, I already sent off the item to you.

If you get the item and it's in good condition, could you pay me for it again??

I hope to hear back from you soon.

And I'm really sorry for the trouble this may have caused you.

Thanks!!

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Dear ABC,

Thank you for your time.
I am Tarou from Tarou's Shop.

This email is concerning the goods you ordered. It seems that the post office in your country had been keeping custody of them for a long time as there had been no one home to receive them.

After that, they were returned back to us.

I am currently checking the condition of the items but there is damage to the box.

Once again, I plan to replace the items and get them sent off within 2~3 days.
(I will issue a refund if they are not in stock)

*I'm sorry but please be aware that I will be unable to offer a refund the next time items are returned to be because they were not picked up by you.

Manager↵
Tarou

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Dear ABC,

Thank you for your time.
I am Tarou from Tarou's Shop.

This email concerns the goods you ordered. It seems that the post office in your country had been keeping custody of them for a long time as there had been no one home to receive them.

After that, they were returned back to us.

I am currently checking the condition of the items, but there is damage to the box.

Once again, I plan to replace the items and get them sent off within 2~3 days.
(I will issue a refund if they are not in stock)

*I'm sorry but please be aware that I will be unable to offer a refund the next time items are returned because they were not picked up.

Tarou, Manager