翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私はあなたの出品している商品を８個落札したいと考えています。
まとめて発送して欲しいので、支払は商品全ての落札が終わってからにして欲しいです。

あなたがアメリカ国内にしか発送しないのは知っています。
もし可能でしたら日本へまとめて荷物を発送して欲しいです。
あなたは日本へ荷物を発送することはできませんか？

無理でしたらアメリカの住所へ発送をお願いしたいと思います。

英語

I would like to bid on 8 pieces for the items you are selling.
I would like to have them shipped all together so I would like to pay after the bidding for all of them has ended.

I know you only ship within the US.
But if it's at all possible, I would like for you to ship them all together to me in Japan.
Could you please send a shipment to Japan?

If that isn't at all possible then I would like for you to send it to an American address I have.

レビュー ( 1 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/21 11:38:15

元の翻訳
I would like to bid on 8 pieces for the items you are selling.
I would like to have them shipped all together so I would like to pay after the bidding for all of them has ended.

I know you only ship within the US.
But if it's at all possible, I would like for you to ship them all together to me in Japan.
Could you please send a shipment to Japan?

If that isn't at all possible then I would like for you to send it to an American address I have.

修正後
I would like to bid on 8 pieces for [wrong proposition?] the items you are selling.
I would like to have them shipped all together so I would like to pay after the bidding for all of them has ended.

I know you only ship within the US.
But if it's at all possible, I would like for you to ship them all together to me in Japan.
Could you please send a shipment to Japan?

If that isn't at all possible then I would like for you to send it to an American address I have.

[14pon]

すみません。 I would like for you to というのは初めて見たのですが、I would like you to do より丁寧とかなのでしょうか？どのようなときにふさわしい、とか何かありましたら、お教えいただけますと幸いです。