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元の翻訳
关于汇款一事，已经确认完毕。
在此有一事相求。
虽说至今招募会员，代为进货已为固定模式，耗费一年多尝试在日本召集，却未能如期招收到会员。
因此，我将该会员网站关闭了。
只是，还是想继续个人中国进口事业，所以希望能像以往般使用你和我的交易来进行。
我因维护会员网站等增加了许多开销，而让经营上变得困顿。
为了持续下去，今后想使用下一次订单支付500元的方式进行，您觉得如何呢?

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关于汇款一事，已经确认完毕。
在此有一事相求。
虽说至今招募会员，代为进货已为固定模式，耗费一年多尝试在日本召集，却未能如期招收到会员。
因此，我将该会员网站关闭了。
只是，还是想继续个人中国进口事业，所以希望你和我的交易能做些变动。
我因维护会员网站等增加了许多开销，而让经营上变得困顿。
为了持续下去，今后想使用下一次订单支付500元的方式进行，您觉得如何呢?

元の翻訳
虽对我来说也是相当痛心的，但为了保护双方的利益这也是没有办法的一件事。
至11月为止的份固定支付金额2500元，从这个月开始，请让我以一次的订单支付500元的方式进行(没有订单的月份将会支付最低金额500元)
敬请您多多见谅
备注:上次订购的商品之中其中两种都各不足一个
此后若有不足的情况​​也请和和我联系。
日本和长沙都非常的寒冷，请一定要注意身体，也请代和大家指教

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虽对我来说也是相当痛心的，但为了保护双方的利益这也是没有办法的一件事。
至11月为止的份固定支付金额2500元，从这个月开始，请让我以一次的订单支付500元的方式进行(没有订单的月份将会支付最低金额500元)
敬请您多多见谅
备注:上次订购的商品之中其中两种都各不足一个
此后若有不足的情况​​也请和我联系。
日本和长沙都非常的寒冷，请一定要注意身体，也请代和大家指教

元の翻訳
用這樣的方式、我也是很痛苦、但是為了確保雙方的利益、也沒有其他方法。

11月為止的部分、我會支付固定要支付的2500元、不過從這個月開始、請每次的訂單、都請支付至少500元(沒有訂單的月份也至少支付500元)

請幫忙理解為祺。

追加、上次您下訂單裡面的商品、有兩種各缺一個
今後如果有數量不夠的時候、我這邊會跟您聯絡

日本還有長沙應該都很冷、請注意健康。也跟大家問好 謝謝

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我也是苦恼乐很久，但是為了確保雙方的利益，也沒有其他方法，只能用这样的方式。

11月為止的部分，我會支付固定要支付的2500元，不過從這個月開始，每次的訂單将改为支付500元(沒有訂單的月份也至少支付500元)

谨请见谅。

追加：上次我下的訂單裡面，有两种商品各缺一個。
今後如果有數量不夠的時候，请和我聯絡。

日本還有長沙應該都很冷、請注意健康。也跟大家問好 謝謝

元の翻訳
①300 and more kinds of famous stamps
from special moves to popular characters.

②A bulletin board full of laughter! Aim for the interesting first place ranking

③Simple one-touch processing

④Share it and get your points

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①More than 300 kinds of popular stamps
from special moves to popular characters.

②A bulletin board full of laughter! Aim for the first place of interesting ranking

③Simple one-touch processing

④Share it and get your points

元の翻訳
①Popular stamp of more than 300 kinds
From finishing move to popular characters.

②Roar of laughter bulletin board!
Aim the No.1 interesting rankings

③Easy processing by one-touch.

④Gte points with Share

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① More than 300 kinds of popular stamps
From special moves to popular characters.

②Roar of laughter bulletin board!
Aim for No.1 interesting rankings

③Easy processing by one-touch.

④Share and get points

元の翻訳
Seeing as in this period deliveries are numerous, I am contacting you regarding your hope of a fast delivery.
Please understand that it will not be possible to deliver on time for the 25/12.

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During this time of a year, deliveries are numerous.↵
I have contacted you regarding your hope of a fast delivery.
Please understand that it will not be possible to deliver you package to you before 25/12.

元の翻訳
It's a rush period right now.
We informed you to deliver as soon as possible.
The delivery will be late for 25th december.
We appreciate your understanding.

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It is a high time we have lots of packages to be delivered.
We had arranged to deliver the package as soon as possible.
However, it will not be delivered to you before 25th of December.
We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
During this time of year, we have a great number of packages to be delivered,
and thereby we arranged to deliver it as soon as possible.

You cannot receive it before December 25th, and i hope that you understand it.

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During this time of year, we have a great number of packages to be delivered,
and thereby we arranged to deliver it as soon as possible.

However, the package won't be able to delivered to you before December 25th. We hope that you understand it.

元の翻訳
很快就聖誕節啦★ 週末的銀座擠滿了人，街道已經是喜慶的氣氛！我很興奮看到用禮物包裝點綴的品牌店。每年讓人期待的是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹。每年拍照的人很多。您所在的城市聖誕景觀是怎樣的呢？

BeautyStar視頻，我採取了不同的規劃內容。前幾天我也拍攝了由化妝師順子指導的化妝竅門的視頻！不久將公開，敬請期待！

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聖誕節即將到來★ 週末的銀座充滿了人潮，街道充滿歡樂的氣氛！品牌店的外觀也煥然一新包裝地像禮物般，讓人忍不住想血拼一場。每年讓人最期待的是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹，吸引大批人潮去拍照。您所在的城市聖誕景觀是怎樣的呢？

BeautyStar影片，採取不同的規劃內容。前幾天也拍攝了化妝師Junko的化妝竅門教學影片！即將公開，敬請期待！

元の翻訳
聖誕節即將到來★週末的銀座人來人往，街上充滿了華麗熱鬧的氣氛喔！名牌商店的外觀也好像是將整家店包裝起來般地讓人興奮。每年最讓人期待的就是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹。有不少人停下腳步拍照。不知道大家的城市有什麼樣的聖誕風景呢？

BeautyStar的影片也拍攝了各種的企劃內容。前幾天我們拍攝了由媒體藝術家Junko提供了我們化妝建議的影片喔！影片即將公開敬請期待！

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聖誕節即將到來★週末的銀座人來人往，街上充滿了華麗熱鬧的氣氛喔！名牌商店的外觀也煥然一新，就像是將整家店包裝成禮物般地讓人興奮。每年最讓人期待的就是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹，總是吸引不少人停下腳步拍照。不知道大家的城市有什麼樣的聖誕風景呢？

BeautyStar的影片也拍攝了各種的企劃內容。前幾天我們拍攝了由媒體藝術家Junko提供的化妝建議影片喔！影片即將公開，敬請期待！

元の翻訳
聖誕節即將到來★銀座周末人來人往，街上氣氛很熱鬧喔！名牌商店也如同禮物被包裝起來一般，好令人興奮。每年令人期待的MIKIMOTO聖誕樹。似乎有許多人拍照留念。各位所居住的城市的聖誕節景色如何呢？

BeautyStar錄製的影片有各種企畫內容。前些日子拍攝了彩妝師じゅんこ（JUNKO）的彩妝建議影片喔！近期內會公開，敬請期待！

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聖誕節即將到來★銀座周末人來人往，街上氣氛很熱鬧喔！名牌商店也如同禮物被包裝起來一般，好令人興奮。每年令人期待的MIKIMOTO聖誕樹總是吸引許多人去拍照留念。各位所居住的城市的聖誕節景色又是如何呢？

BeautyStar錄製的影片有各種企畫內容。前些日子拍攝了彩妝師じゅんこ（JUNKO）的彩妝建議影片喔！近期內會公開，敬請期待！

元の翻訳
就要到聖誕節了，週末的銀座人流湧動，熙熙攘攘，大街小巷洋溢著節日的氣氛。名牌店的裝飾也煥然一新，讓人忍不住要血拼一場。每年最期待的就是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹了。去那裏拍照的人很多。大家所在的街道的聖誕節風景是什麼樣的呢？
BeautySTar也企劃了很多動畫。前幾天還化妝師Junko桑的化妝技巧教學。最近就要上傳了，請期待！

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就要到聖誕節了，週末的銀座人流湧動，熙熙攘攘，大街小巷洋溢著節日的氣氛。名牌店的裝飾也煥然一新，讓人忍不住要血拼一場。每年令人最期待的就是MIKIMOTO的聖誕樹，吸引大批人潮去那裏拍照。大家所在的街道的聖誕節風景是什麼樣的呢？
BeautySTar也企劃了很多影片。前幾天還請化妝師Junko桑教學化妝技巧。最近將要上傳，盡請期待！

元の翻訳
面具大約●日元。我們的EC網站在建設，您可以在taobao的商店中購買。這是由我們的員工運營。如需大量購買，請詳談。

動畫中的全部商品並非都能銷售，我們也希望盡可能銷售更多。如果您有自己的商店或對應的客戶，我們可以考慮給您提供特別的會員價格优惠。

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若以日元購買的話，面具大約是●日元。雖然我們的EC網站正在建設中，您可以在我們的合夥商店淘寶網(taobao)中購買。這是由我們的員工運營。如需大量購買，請與我們聯絡。

在影片中的商品並非全部都能銷售，我們也希望盡可能銷售更多。如果您有自己的商店或對應的客戶，我們可以考慮給您特別的優惠會員價格。

元の翻訳
面膜在日元以●円表示。我們歐共體的網站正在建設中，但您可以在我們合夥的淘寶店購買。我們的員工是在這裡運營。歡迎諮詢如果您想大量購買。

我認為在視頻里不能夠介紹出售的所有產品，但我想可能多地賣產品。我認為，如果您有自己的店鋪， 您也可以特殊的會員的價格出售給那些有銷售能力的客戶。

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面膜在日元以●円表示。我們歐共體的網站正在建設中，但您可以在我們合夥的淘寶店購買。我們的員工是在這裡運營。歡迎諮詢如果您想大量購買。

我認為在影片裡不能夠介紹所有出售的產品，但我想盡可能地多賣產品。如果您有自己的店鋪， 也有會購買商品的客戶群，我可以考慮給您優惠的會員價格。

元の翻訳
面具是●日元。我們的EC網站正在建設中，您可以在淘寶（taobao）的合作商店中購買。這是由我們的員工運營的。如需大量購買，請和我們詳談。

動畫中介紹的全部商品並非都能銷售，我們也希望盡可能銷售更多的種類。如果您有自己的商店，或有對應的銷售客戶，我們可以考慮給您提供特別的會員價格优惠。

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若是用日元購買，面具是xxx日元。雖然我們的EC網站正在建設中，您可以在淘寶（taobao）的合作商店中購買您想買的商品。這是由我們的員工運營的。如需大量購買，請和我們聯絡。

動畫中介紹的全部商品並非都能銷售，我們也希望盡可能銷售更多的種類。如果您有自己的商店，或有對應的銷售客戶，我們可以考慮給您特別的优惠會員價格。

元の翻訳
Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm speaking looking at some written English. Please forgive （フォギブ） my poor English.

I have a corporate account with this bank. I want to know my ID. I know that IDs are given only by phone, so I am calling you.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other information needed?

I wish I could speak with somebody who speak Japanese. Is there any such people up there?

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Hello, this is XX, calling from Japan.

I don't speak English well, so I'm talking to you and looking at some written English at the same time. ↵
Please excuse my poor English.

I have opened a corporation account of your bank. ↵
I would like to know my ID and I am making a phone call to you is because I have heard that this is the only way to know my ID.

My security number is xxxx.
Is there any other necessary information I need to provide?

I would like to speak to somebody who can speak Japanese. Is there anyone available for Japanese?

元の翻訳
Hello,
My name is....
I can speak English so I am talking with you using translated English.↵
I think It is hard to hear so I'am sorry about that.
I open a legal account of your bank.
I heard that there is a only a way to know about myself ID is talking via phone.
I want you tell me about my ID.
Security code is 11111111.
Phone is............in private,
Are there any important information else?
If you can, because I want to talk with someone who can speak Japanese, do you have?

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Hello,
This is ooo.
I can't speak English so I am using a script of Japanese to English translation in order to talk to you.↵
I am sorry for the inconvenience.
I have opened a corporation account of your bank.
I heard that the only way to know my ID is to make a phone call.
I would like to know my ID.
The security code is 11111111.
I am ooo the actual person.
Is there any other necessary information I need to provide?
If possible, I would like to talk to someone who can speak Japanese. Is there anyone available for Japanese?

元の翻訳
Hello, I am ○○.

I am making a call to you by using the pre-translated script, because I cannot speak English.

I apologize for the inconvenience for this.


I have opened a corporate account at your bank.

And I have been informed that on the phone is only way I can know my ID.

I would like to know my ID.

The security code is 1111111.

I am the identical person, this is ○○○.

Would you need me any other information to provide?

If possible, I would like to talk anybody who can speak Japanese. Anybody there?↵

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Hello, I am ○○.

I am making a call to you and using the pre-translated script because I cannot speak English.

I apologize for the inconvenience.


I have opened a corporation account at your bank.

And I have been informed that I could only get the information of my ID by making a phone call.

I would like to know my ID.

The security code is 1111111.

I am the actual person, this is ○○○.

Is there any other necessary information that I need to provide to you?

If possible, I would like to talk to someone who can speak Japanese. Is there anyone available for Japanese?

元の翻訳
The attached is the list of the shipping charges calculated by Commerce. If you look at the description for shipping charges in the following URL, you will know that shipping charges are different between for Europe and the U.S.

Originally, the shipping charges for Europe and the U.S. are supposed to be the same for shipping from Japan with "economy" option.

I repeat again that I am not accusing you at all.

Which tool are you using to find items sold on eBay from Japan?

Do you know the tool called "Telapeak"?

If you wish, I can lend you this tool with some conditions.

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The attached file includes the list of the shipping charges calculated by Commerce. If you look at the description for shipping charges in the following URL, you will know that shipping charges in Europe is different from the ones in the U.S.

Originally, the shipping charges for Europe and the U.S. are supposed to be the same for shipping from Japan with "economy" option.

I repeat again that I am not accusing you at all.

Which tool are you using to find items sold on eBay from Japan?

Do you know the tool called "Telapeak"?

If you wish, I can lend you this tool with some conditions.

元の翻訳
I'm afraid but we cannot accept a change to the delivery method due to A's system process. To change the method, please cancel this order and purchase it again from B's store-front, then choose "Expedited".
Since we have only 1 item in stock, we will temporally set the price to 200 so that other customer wont buy it. We'll pay balance amount $114.00 back to you before we ship the item.
Now, we have already finish packing and we can ship it on the next day of your order. Please note that if you didn't re-order it after canceling, we will handle it as usual cancellation.↵

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I'm afraid that due to system A, the delivery method cannot be changed after the order has been placed. To change the method, please cancel this order and purchase it again from B's store-front page, then choose "Expedited".
Since we have only 1 item in stock, we will temporally set the price to $200 so that other customers won't buy it. We'll pay balance amount $114.00 back to you before we ship the item.
Now, we have already finished packing the item and we can ship it on the next day of your order. Please note that if you didn't re-order it after canceling, we will handle it as usual cancellation.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry, but you can not change delivery method after purchase because of A system's restriction.
If you would like to change the delivery method, please cancel the order and buy the item again from B-store-front. When you re-purchase the item, please select "Expedited".
As we have only one stock, we set the price 200$ to prevent purchase from other customers.
We refund 114$ for the difference before shipment.
We can ship the package on the day subsequent to your reorder.
Please note that the order is going to be cancelled as per normal without your reorder.

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We are very sorry, but you can not change delivery method after purchase with system A.
If you would like to change the delivery method, please cancel the order and order the item again from B store front page. When you re-purchase the item, please select "Expedited".
As we have only one stock, we set the price $200 to prevent purchase from other customers.
We will refund $114 to you before the shipment.
We can ship the package the next day after you complete your reorder.
Please note that the order is going to be cancelled if you don't place your reorder.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased due to the System A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it after the next day once you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

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Unfortunately, I can not change the shipping option once you have purchased with system A.
If you want to change the shipping option, please cancel the order and order it again from the B's top page and choose the Expedited option.
Since I only have one stock available, I will set the merchandise price at $200 in order to prevent other customers to buy.
I will refund $114 to you before the shipment.
Also, the merchandise is ready for shipping so I can send it the next day after you make the re-order.
Lastly, If you do not order it again, I will cancel the order.

元の翻訳
We are selling Japan's products. We have a lot of Japan's products. Please feel free to request us. We can't supply foods and weapons and something can become weapons. In addition to the products that your country don't allow to import.So please search about the prohibited items in your country. There is also wasting tariff for receiving products. Buyer must be responsible for the tariff. Please search about your country tariff, first.
Household appliances are different from voltage and shape of plug so there is some Japan product can not use. Please confirm that you can use that products in your country or not.

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We are selling Japanese products. We have a lot of good products made in Japan. Please feel free to contact us for placing an order. We can't supply foods, weapons and something can be used as weapons. Also, we can't sell the products that are prohibited from the import regulation of your country. So please search for the prohibited items in your country before you place an order. The customer duty will fall on the receiver of the products. Buyer must be responsible for the tariff. Please search for information about the tariff in your country in advance.
There are some situations where you might not be able to use the household appliances made in Japan due to the differences of voltage and of the plug shapes. Please make sure if you can use the products in your country or not beforehand.

元の翻訳
We have been selling the Japanese Products. We have a lot of excellent Japanese products. Please feel free to contact us for items. What we cannot sell are the foods, the weapons and the others could be used as the weapon. Of course, we cannot sell any products prohibited by your country. Prior to placing an order, please check items banned on import of your country. Buyers are responsible for shouldering the import taxes and duties if it would be required to pay. Prior to placing an order, please check the provisions of import taxes and duties of your county. For the housing appliances, you may need to consider about the difference of the power plugs from Japan and your country. Those may not be used in your country. Please check them before placing an order.

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We have been selling the Japanese Products. We have a lot of excellent Japanese products. Please feel free to contact us for items. What we cannot sell are foods, weapons and the things could be used as weapons. Of course, we cannot sell any products prohibited by the import regulation of your country. Prior to placing an order, please check items banned from the import regulation of your country. Buyers are responsible for shouldering the import taxes and duties if it would be required to pay. Prior to placing an order, please check the provisions of import taxes and duties of your county. For the housing appliances, you may need to consider about the differences of the power plugs and voltage. Please check them before placing an order.

元の翻訳
We sell Japanese goods.
There are a lot of great items made ​​in Japan.
Please request feel free to contact us.

Things that can not be sold is a thing that can be deadly weapons and food, use to the deadly weapon.
You can not sell the import ban items of your country in addition.
Please check the import ban items of your country in advance.
There is the case that a duty depends on the receiving of the product.
Tariff is borne by the purchaser.
Please check the tariff of your country in advance.

There is that you can not use Japanese products shape of the plug, the difference in voltage household appliances.
Please confirm gets to use at home.

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We sell Japanese goods.
There are a lot of great items made ​​in Japan.
Please feel free to contact us for request.

Things that can not be sold are the things that can be deadly weapons, food and something that could be used as weapons.
In addition, you can not sell the products that are banned from import regulations of your country.
Please check the banned items from import regulations of your country in advance.
The customer duty will fall on the receiver of the product.
Tariff is borne by the purchaser.
Please check the tariff of your country in advance.

There might be some situations where you can't use the electric appliances due to the different shapes of the plugs and the difference in voltage regarding the products made in Japan.
Please make sure that you will be able to use the product in your country in advance.