iluvsnoopy (iluvsnoopy228) — 付けたレビュー

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I will contact you again if modificaiton is required pursuant to the law in the future on negotiations with Comapny A and Company B.

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I will contact you again if there are modifications needed for future legal compliance on the discussion with Company A and Company B.

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Sorry but it is not our fault.
We have the freedom to set the price of our products.
If you think it is expensive for you ,why did you order?
Is not it best to check the price and delivery cost before payment .
Why did you order if you don't want to pay for it.
I understand your feeling but I don't get why you are complaining.
Anyway if you don't like it please send the product back to us to Japan.
We will refund you.
Thank you very much.

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Sorry but it is not my fault.
The seller has the freedom to set the price for this product.
If you think that this is an expensive product then why did you make an order?
The product price and the delivery cost were already confirmed before payment .
If you think it is expensive then it is alright not to proceed with the order right?
I understand your feeling but I don't understand why you are complaining.
Anyway if you don't like it please send the product back to me in Japan.
I will issue a refund.
Thank you for understanding.

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Question about UPS account
Hello. I deal with the UPS account used by ●●company.

I recently received communication from ●●company that the UPS account has been canceled.


1. Why was the UPS account canceled? Please tell me the reason.
2. ↵
Please tell me how to recover the UPS account and use it in the same way as it has been used up until now.

Our company is a Japanese company. We request delivery to the following address in America.

Our company's Japanese address
We look forward to your reply.

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Question about UPS account
Hello. I use the UPS account to deal with ●●company.

I recently received communication from ●●company that the UPS account has been cancelled.


1. Why was the UPS account cancelled? Please tell me the reason.
2. Please tell me how to recover the UPS account to be used in the same way as before.

Our company is a Japanese company. We are requesting for a delivery to be made to the following address in America.

Our company's address in Japan
We look forward to your reply.

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My apologies but I was long to reply you. Thank you very much for the reply yesterday while you were very busy.

I just confirmed the delivery of the product and found that it was delivered to the destination shortly before. Hope you will not worry about any more.
(Delivery completion: at 8:25pm, October 8)
I will be very much pleased if you visit our shop again.↵
I expect you continuing transaction in the future.
Best regards,

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My apologies for my delayed response. Thank you very much for the reply yesterday despite that you were very busy.

While I was confirming the delivery of the product, it was already delivered to the destination a while ago so I hope you will not worry about it any more.
(Delivery completion: October 8 at 8:25pm Japan time)
I will look forward for your next visit to our shop again.
Best regards,

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I do not understand why is my UPD ID has been cancelled. I currently do not own other IDs.
Could you please advise on how I can ship the items now?
Also, could you charge the shipping fees to my credit card from now on?
Once that is done, are you able to deliver the products today?

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I do not understand why my UPD ID has been cancelled. I do not have any other IDs.
Could you please advise on how I can ship the items now?
Also, could you charge the shipping fees to my credit card as always?
Once that is done, are you able to deliver the products today?

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HEMS or better known as Home Energy Management System is a technology to provide ecology and comfortable living.
By centralizing the equipment at home with a control panel, it promotes energy saving rather than "visible" energy.

In the end, the energy consumption at home is the total consumption of home appliances.
If home appliances constitutes the energy at home, than wouldn't it make sense to connect them all with the home appliance controller HEMS?

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HEMS or better known as Home Energy Management System is a technology to provide ecology and comfortable living.
By centralizing the equipment at home with a control panel, it promotes energy saving rather than "visible" energy.

In the end, the energy consumption at home is the total consumption of home appliances.
If home appliances constitutes the energy at home, then wouldn't it make sense to connect them all with the home appliance controller HEMS?

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The inter-tech examination has successfully ended.
There were no problems found, so it passed. In addition, the submission of documents has also been done.
The schedule of the shipping will be set on October 10.
Initially it was scheduled on September 24, but it got delayed for a little bit because of the iter-tech examination.
I will contact you again for any updates.

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The inter-tech examination has successfully ended.
There were no problems found, so it was given a passing mark. In addition, the submission of documents has also been done.
The schedule of the shipping will be set on October 10.
Initially it was scheduled on September 24, but it got delayed for a little bit because of the inter-tech examination.
I will contact you again for any updates.

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Hello,
Thank you all the time and I would like to ask you some questions.
The product from Sena that I bought before, are the formware of SMH10D-10( 25pieces) and SMH 10-11 ( 15 pieces ) 4.2 of the newest version? If not, could you tell me what is the newest version?

Baby Plus, the product I bought from you said it is made in China, Is it the right product?
Also could you tell me when you will sell Baby plus? I would like to know some great deal products too.

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Hello,
Thank you all the time and I would like to ask you some questions.
The product from Sena that I bought before, are the firmwares of SMH10D-10( 25pieces) and SMH 10-11 ( 15 pieces ) using the newest 4.2 version? If not, could you tell me what is the newest version?

Baby Plus, the product I bought from you said it is made in China, Is it the right product?
Also could you tell me when you will sell Baby plus? I would like to know some great deal products too.

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I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same place as Ms. Libby, I would most probably cancel the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and fortunately, I have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.

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I deeply apologize for the trouble that my carelessness has caused you.
The cause of this is from my lack of experience in Ebay's system, as well as in English.
Because of this, I deeply regret for causing trouble to Ms. Libby.
If I was in the same situation as Ms. Libby, I would probably have cancelled the transaction as well.
However, is it really impossible for us to continue with this transaction?
I've been searching for this item for a while, and I was lucky enough to have finally found it.
While this is a selfish request, I'm looking forward to your positive response.