cheng yu (fantasyc) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
你可以在這裡看到可以從哪裡得到貼紙。

*有可能發生派發點已經關閉的情況。請在前往派發點之前，查看相關信息。

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你可以從這裡看到貼紙取得地點。

*有可能發生發放地點已經關閉的情況。請在前往發放地點之前，查看相關信息。

元の翻訳
你可以在 这里 看到可以从哪里得到贴纸。

*有可能发生派发点已经关闭的情况。请在前往派发点之前，查看相关信息。

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你可以在 这里 看看哪里能领到贴纸。

*有可能发生派发点已经关闭的情况。请在前往派发点之前，查看相关信息。

元の翻訳
"Ichiko is so weak inside ..."
"Do not tell me ... things like this."
"Are you... afraid ...
in this way, ... she might not be able to return that home ... "

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"Ichiko is so weak inside ..."
"Do not tell me ... things like this."
"Are you... afraid ...
I think, ... she might not be able to return to that home ... "

元の翻訳
Thank you for reactivating the account and contacting me.
I am glad to get the opportunity to sell products on ebay again.

We would take your advice and try out best to satisfy the buyers to make our business successful.
We would like to continue to build a lasting prosperity together with your company.

Thank you for your continued business guidance and encouragement.

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Thank you for contacting me and reactivating my account.
I am glad to get the opportunity to sell products on eBay again.

I would take your advice and try my best to satisfy the buyers to make our business successful.
I would like to continue to build a lasting prosperity together with your company.

I will always appreciate your further business guidance and encouragement.↵
↵
Best Regards

元の翻訳
Hi there
Thank you for your email.

I'm glad that producing seems to be no problem.
As for the candle holder, it is all right as the photo you send me.

Thank you very much for letting me know that!


Thank you for your email.
Thanks to you, the mat we received sell well.
In addition, I would like to visit your booth in the exhibition of India.
Thank you.

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Hi there
Thank you for your email.

I'm glad that producing seems to be no problem.
As for the candle holder, it is all right as the photo you send me.

Thank you very much for letting me know that!

thank you for your ongoing cooperation.↵

Thank you for your email.
Thanks to you, the mat we received sell well.
In addition, I would like to visit your booth in the exhibition of India.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
どの部分が必要ですか？もう一度教えてください。この間はアナベルが担当しましたが、彼女今は出産休暇ですので、彼女に聞くことはできません。その後、次の出荷商品に足りなかった部分を追加いたします。

よい一日を！

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どの部分が必要ですか？もう一度教えてください。この間はアナベルが担当しましたが、現在彼女は出産休暇中ですので、あいにくと話を聞くことはできません。次の出荷時に足りなかった部分を追加いたします。

よい一日を！

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

How many mask could be put in the case of cardboard sent to me last time to the address in the United States?
When I opened, I found there is still a little space, and I think it could hold a little bit more items.

Thanks in advance.

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Thank you for your reply.

How many masks can you place in the cardboard case you shipped to me last time the U.S. address?
When I opened, there was still a little room, so I think it could hold a little bit more items.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
你好，我是Bowei，报道来自世界各地的启动项目。今天，我在“武士启动岛孵化会议”上遇见了Conyac的CEO。这是一项通过网络让任何人都可以使用的翻译服务。

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你好，我是Bowei，报道来自世界各地的启动项目。今天，我在Samurai Startup Island ( SSI )上遇见了Conyac的CEO。这是一项通过网络让任何人都可以使用的翻译服务。

元の翻訳
I am very sorry to have kept you waiting.

The product would be delivered day after tomorrow.

I am very sorry to keep you waiting, and it would not take too long to arrive. Thank you for your understanding.

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I am very sorry to have kept you waiting.

The product will be dispatched the day after tomorrow.

I am very sorry to keep you waiting, and it will not take too long to arrive. Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
カネボウにシステムで検出可能かどうか聞いてみますが、
たぶん難しいと思います。
実際の購入数を確認できない場合、例の10人の達人にしましょう。

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カネボウにシステムで検出可能かどうかを聞いてみますが、
たぶん難しいと思います。
実際の購入数を確認できない場合、例の10人の達人にしましょう。

元の翻訳
それについては、★★に問合せします。システムにあるかどうか聞いてみます。↵
↵
検出することは可能と思いますが、かなり難しいでしょうか。

実際の購入数を確認できない場合、前の10人の達人のままにしましょうか。

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それについては、★★に問合せします。システムで検出↵
できるかどうかを聞いてみます、かなり難しいと思います。

実際の購入数を確認できない場合は、前の10人の達人のままを使いましょう。

元の翻訳
Hello.

I refund $ 75 to your PAYPAL.

Please check.

And I'm really sorry for the inconvenience this time.

I will be always at your service, so please tell me anything if I can help.

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Hello.

I refunded $75 to your PAYPAL account.

Please check.

I'm really sorry for the inconvenience this time.

I will be always at your service, so please tell me if I can help with anything.

元の翻訳
Can I use a Japan credit card?

In addition,
Goods purchased on May 31
Order No. ○ ○ ○
REI Item No.: ○ ○
Watch
It was cancelled.
Could you please tell me why?

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Can I use a Japan credit card?

In addition,
about the item purchased on May 31
Order No. ○ ○ ○
REI Item No.: ○ ○
Watch
It has been cancelled.
Could you please tell me why?