Stefan Fiala (chiba) — もらったレビュー

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Could you enjoy your last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I have been to Korea as an exchange student, it's good to go!
This time I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's have fun in Korea as well next time!
It's a really exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

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Did you have fun last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I used to be an exchange student in Korea so I visit here often!
This time round I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's get together in Korea as well next time!
It's really an exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

元の翻訳
Could you enjoy your last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I have been to Korea as an exchange student, it's good to go!
This time I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's have fun in Korea as well next time!
It's a really exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

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Did you enjoy your last night?
I'm now in Korea!

I have been [tense confusion] to Korea as an exchange student, it's good to go [mistranlation]!
This time I'm accompanying my mom and a friend of hers as a translator.

Let's have fun in Korea as well next time!
It's a really exciting place!

Be careful on your way home!
With love,
From your Japanese sister

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Are you also shy?
You are still young, if you study a little you will become very good at Japanese!
I'm looking forward to that day!
Don't expect too much from my English!

Next time we meet you will speak in Japanese and I will speak in English!

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Are you also shy?
You are still young, so if you study a little you can improve your Japanese!
I'm looking forward to that day!
Don't expect too much from my English!

Next time we meet you will speak in Japanese and I will speak in English!

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Please reply to my question.
A week ago I sent you a question by email regarding the Vergil Spesial MM2.4. Why are you not replying to me?
Is it because you don't understand my question? If there is no reply I can't understand anything.
As I'm in real trouble I asked a question.
I will say it once more. Please tell me why I can't change any settings in the Lot application.

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Please reply to my question.
A week ago I sent you a question by email regarding the Vergil Special MM2.4. Why are you not replying to me?
Is it because you don't understand my question? If there is no reply I can't understand anything.
I am asking you this question because I am in big trouble.
I will say it once more. Please do something about it, because I cannot operate it with the fixed lot no matter how I set it.

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Sorry for writing so many replies this time.
I'm very happy about all the consideration regarding the transaction.
Thank you very much.
Of course the shipped products will not be returned to me.
But it's also a fact that they haven't arrived with you.
Iif possible I want to have good relations with you.
If from now on the products don't arrive please contact me anytime.
I will do my best to refund you as fast as possible.
I think from now on I want to let everyone know about Japanese products through ebay.
If there are any questions please contact me.

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Sorry for troubling you writing me so many replies this time.
I'm very happy about your kind consideration regarding the transaction.
Thank you very much.
Of course the shipped products has not been returned to me.
But it's also a fact that it has not been delivered to you either.
If at all possible, I would like to sustain a good relationship with you.
If from now on the item does not arrive to you please contact me anytime.
I will refund you as fast as possible.
I think I will further strive to introduce the world about Japanese products through eBay.
If there are any questions please contact me.

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Hello,
Thank you for your inquiry.
I also confirmed the details.
It seems that I can't ship to your area.
I'm sorry that we can't conduct business this time↵
and I will refund your money as fast as possible.
I have another favor to ask of you.
As you will receive a cancelation request from ebay↵
could you please confirm it?
If you don't confirm it I will not get my fees refunded.
Please help me in this matter.
Sadly it didn't work out this time↵
but I'm glad that I could meet you through ebay.
Thank you very much

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Hello,
Thank you for your inquiry.
I also confirmed the details.
It seems that I can't ship to your area.
I'm sorry that we can't conduct business this time and I will refund your money as fast as possible.
I have another favor to ask of you.
As you will receive a cancelation request from eBay, could you please confirm it?
If you don't confirm it, I will not get my fees refunded.
Please help me in this matter.
Sadly, it didn't work out this time, but I'm glad that I met you through eBay.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and it seems that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we offer you to buy it at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused to you this time.

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We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and it seems that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we will offer it you at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused to you this time.

元の翻訳
We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and it seems that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we offer you to buy it at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused to you this time.

修正後
We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and they said that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we offer you to buy it at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused you this time.

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Don't worry about it, Kory, please. If your mom likes Japanese wasabi you can pay next time, this time please try it out as a present.
You are always helping me so I wanted to return the favor. This was the perfect occasion I think.
By the way, the wasabi your mom always uses, is it raw wasabi or is it wasabi from a tube? A few day ago I there was a coin in my doll's shoe. Is there any reason for this?

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Don't worry about it, Kory, please. If your mom likes Japanese wasabi you can pay next time, this time please try it out as a present.
You are always helping me so I wanted to return the favor. This was the perfect occasion I think.
By the way, the wasabi your mom always uses, is it raw wasabi or is it wasabi from a tube? A few day ago there was a coin in my doll's shoe. Is there any reason for this?

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I'm relieved that you contacted me.
It seems that many counterfeit versions of A are appearing on the Japanese market and I'm very sorry that your company is displeased with that fact.
The place where I sold was the Yahoo Mall.
The requested document is either the maker's invoice or an invoice from the direct management.

As the buying price, etc. are internal affairs of your company it can't be said that it is impossible.
If I stop selling there will be no problem.
In this case would it be possible to return the products?
I will of course assume the shipping costs.

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I'm relieved that you contacted me.
It seems that many counterfeit versions of A are appearing on the Japanese market and I'm very sorry that your company is displeased with that fact.
The place where I sold was the Yahoo Mall.
The requested document is either the maker's invoice or an invoice from the direct management.

As the buying price, etc. are internal affairs of your company and it is impossible to disclose.
If I abandon the sale there will be no problem.
In this case would it be possible to return the products?
I will of course assume the shipping costs.