Stefan Fiala (chiba) — 付けたレビュー

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Is (B) same as (A) which you talk about in your mail ? I like (B) so much too.
Near by my work, there is a restaurant which provides (B), and I go to there every few weeks.

Tomorrow is my birthday. I won't be able to say I'm in my twenties anymore LOL.
When I look back my twenties, I remember lot of things with fun or with regret. One thing I regret with that I have not studied English well! I want to be able to speak in English, even just a little bit within a year from now.

What you want for your birthday?

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Is (B) the same as (A) which you talk about in your mail ? I like (B) very much as well.
Near my workplace, there is a restaurant which provides (B), and I go there every few weeks.

Tomorrow is my birthday. I won't be able to say I'm in my twenties anymore LOL.
When I look back at my twenties, I remember a lot of things with happiness or with regret. One thing I regret is that I have not studied English seriously! Within a year from now I want to be able to speak English, even just a little bit.

What do you want for your birthday?

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I'm really sorry to reply was late.
I confirm EMS tracking number, the package was arrived in your country and it now on customs clearance.
You can confirm it below site.
Sincerely yours,

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I'm really sorry for my late reply.
I checked the EMS tracking information and the package has already arrived in your country and is now undergoing customs clearance.
Please have a look on the site below.
Sincerely yours,

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I appreciate that you sent a price list and picture.
I am glad as many of them are very beautiful pictures.
I will sell the items based on them.

The size of the flat sheet that you sent is fine.

I have the following questions additionally.
If it has been listed in the before, please send the picture of the magazine.
What kind of package are you going to use when I receive it?
Which delivery company are you going to use?
May I pay by credit card?

I appreciate your cooperation in the future.

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I appreciate that you sent a price list and picture.
I am glad as many of them are very beautiful pictures.
I will sell the items based on them.

The size of the flat sheet that you sent is fine.

I have the following questions additionally.
If it has been listed in the before, please send the picture of the magazine.
What kind of package are you going to use when I receive it?
Which delivery company are you going to use?
May I pay by credit card?

Thank you for everything.

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[2014.10.12] The final performance of national live tour in conjunction with the New York largest music festival, “The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival”!!

The final stage of national tour “NINE LIVES TOUR ~ ROAD TO NY ~”, which started in April this year, was decided to take place in conjunction with the New York largest music festival, "The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival".

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[2014.10.12] The final performance of the national live tour in conjunction with the New York largest music festival, “The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival”!!

The final stage of national tour “NINE LIVES TOUR ~ ROAD TO NY ~”, which started in April this year, was decided to take place in conjunction with the New York largest music festival, "The 3rd Annual CBGB Music & Film Festival".

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(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at the Disney Land today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind, too.
(4) He entertains us by posting fun videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am too busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

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(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at Disneyland today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind as well.
(4) He entertains us by posting funny videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am so busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

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I thought that filling a damage report runs smoothly if you would show the damaged staff, but it would be better to let post office know that there is no necessary to send it back.

Cup(s) cost(s) about 40$.
Check a "Gift" checkbox by shipping.
Does "bill" mean invoice? We understood that we will not put it into the package.

Thank you for your cooperation.
Please understand that it takes some time for me reading and writing in English, because I don't understand English very much.

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I thought that filling a damage report runs smoothly if you would show the damaged stuff, but it would be better to let post office know that there is no necessity to send it back.

Cup(s) cost(s) about 40$.
Check the "Gift" checkbox when shipping.
Does "bill" mean invoice? We understood that we will not put it into the package.

Thank you for your cooperation.
Please understand that it takes some time for me to read and write in English, because I don't understand English very well.

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Since your company have never sent an invoice that we have been requested since last month and your address and phone number are unknown,
there is no way but we ask for refund!
I telephoned the company A and told that your company had no relation with A.
We purchased the products not from A but from your company, so we needed your information.
The parcel company also contacted A, but there are no record of any purchases under my name, so we could not get any information.
We cannot wait anymore, so we start the procedure of refund with PayPal.
Please contact the parcel company if you have any solutions.

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Since your company has never sent an invoice that we have been requesting since last month and your address and phone number are unknown,
there is no way but to ask for a refund!
I telephoned company A and told that your company had no relations with A.
We purchased the products not from A but from your company, so we needed your information.
The parcel company also contacted A, but there are no records of any purchases under my name, so we could not get any information.
We cannot wait anymore, so we start the procedure of refund with PayPal.
Please contact the parcel company if you have any solutions.

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Hello.
I am *** and live in Japan.

This product is excellent and very popular in Japan.
In a case if I will buy 10 of these at the same time, will you sell by 10 pounds including a shipping charge, pleased
I'd like to transact business with you continuously. Thank you very much for you cooperation.

Here is a shipping address below.

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Hello,
My name is *** and I live in Japan.

This product is excellent and very popular in Japan.
If I buy 10 pieces would you sell them for 360 points, including shipping fees?
I hope to be able to continue business with you in the future.

Shipping address

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1. I was surprised by her being his quick-witted. I think I could only say that in a slower pace compared to him.
2. This episode out of this program was the most interesting one, right?
3. I think, people who talk a lot are also thinking rapidly.
4. A I can see the children making big steps in growing, I have to hang on.
5. You don't like sweet food?
6. I have to go to sleep soon. Every time I stay up late I regret it in the morning (thinking "I should have slept earlier...")
7. I have heard of this group, but I don't know them any further.
8. I wonder, how it is... but I don't really know.

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1. I was surprised by her being this quick-witted. I think I could only say that in a slower pace compared to him.
2. This episode out of this program was the most interesting one, right?
3. I think, people who talk a lot are also thinking rapidly.
4. As I can see the children making big steps in growing, I have to hang on.
5. You don't like sweet food?
6. I have to go to sleep soon. Every time I stay up late I regret it in the morning (thinking "I should have slept earlier...")
7. I have heard of this group, but I don't know them any further.
8. I wonder, how it is... but I don't really know.

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■Open/Start:<13th>11:00/12:00<14th>11:30/12:30
※Each day is planned/ no postponement for rain (cancellation for stormy weather)
■Ticket: 13th ticket ￥9200 (tax is included) / 14th ticket ￥9200 (tax is included)
blocks are reserved/ all standing/ with a reference number/ children 3 years old or older need tickets

<LIVE AREA： Raijin STAGE>
[PERFORMER] (Sorted by the Japanese syllably)
9/13(Sat)
「May J」
9/14(Sun)
「May J」

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■Open/Start:<13th>11:00/12:00<14th>11:30/12:30
※Each day is planned/ no postponement for rain (cancellation for stormy weather)
■Ticket: 13th: ￥9200 (tax is included) / 14th: ￥9200 (tax is included)
Blocks are reserved/ all standing/ with a reference number/ children 3 years old or older need tickets

<LIVE AREA： Raijin STAGE>
[PERFORMER] (Sorted by the Japanese syllable)
9/13(Sat)
「May J」
9/14(Sun)
「May J」