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I am ***, who used the help of English translator to speak with you today around 11:30.

You have mentioned about remitting first by paypal but does that mean to send money as a gift and not as a commodity exchange?


I would appreciate it if you could first send business transaction invoice by paypal.

Would it be possible?


I hope you'll take good care of this as I want to continue our business with you.

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I am ***, who spoke to you today at around 11:30 with the help of a English translator.

You have mentioned about remitting payment first by Paypal but does that mean sending money as a gift instead of commodity exchange?


I would appreciate it if you could first send a business transaction invoice by Paypal.

Would this be possible?


I hope you would look into the above matter and I look forward to future business dealings with you.

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What time does FedEx come to pick up today?

The person in charge will come and pick this item up.
Will return the mis-received rug.

Ordered for 3 rugs but only 1 has arrived so far.
Is this shipment error?
Can only check one TrackingNo as well.
Have the 2 remaining rugs been sent?
I want remaining 2 rugs to be sent immediately.

Checked the picture but there's no problem in this package.
Arrived as ordered.
Please remove the shipment limit.

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What time will FedEx be coming to pick up today?

The person in charge will come and pick this item up.
I will return the rug which has been delivered wrongly.

Ordered for 3 rugs but only 1 has arrived so far.
Is this a shipment error?
Can only check one TrackingNo as well.
Have the 2 remaining rugs been sent?
I would like the remaining 2 rugs to be sent immediately.

Checked the picture but there's no problem in this package.
Arrived as ordered.
Please remove the shipment limit.

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Tagging
Tagging music on a genre, an artist or a comment is now available.

You can tag it through the button shown in the picture above as well as when posing music.

There are 2 tags. The tag colored in yellow is the one a user who posited music by their selves can put. The other colored in blue is the listener tag which other users will put. Listener tags can be freely edited by anybody.
Both kinds of tags can be put up to 5 respectively. Let’s edit it together friendly!
A genre and a recommendation, etc. can be easily selected and entered for tagging.

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Tagging
Tagging music on a genre, an artist or a comment is now available.

You can tag it by clicking the button shown in the picture above as well as when posting music.

There are 2 tags. The tag colored yellow is the one users who posted the music by themselves can put. The other one colored blue is the listener tag which other users may put. Listener tags can be freely edited by anybody.
Both kinds of tags can be put up to 5 respectively. Let’s all edit it together amicably!
Genres and recommendations etc. can be easily selected and entered for tagging.

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1. Thank you for sending the movie, I was able to download it.

2. I made the bank transfer. Please see the attached documents.
Please respond in regards to the following paragraph.

3. I'd like to ask a few questions about the product. We're very pleased, however after about half a year of use, the lower part loses it's resilience. Even though we try to even out the down, it doesn't seem to help; every day it gets a bit thinner. Without scrapping the product, is there a way to fix this?

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1. Thank you for sending the movie, I was able to download it.

2. I made the bank transfer. Please see the attached documents.
Please respond with regard to the following paragraph.

3. I would like to ask a few questions pertaining to the product. Though we are very pleased with the item, the lower part unfortunately loses its resilience after about half a year of use. Even though we tried to even out the down, it doesn't seem to help; every day it gets a bit thinner. Without scrapping the product, is there a way to fix this?

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Thank you for being understanding.
It would be great if you can refund it as soon as possible to avoid any complication.
Thank you.

Is TourIssueS100 the right thing isn't it?
I just want to check just in case, as we don't hear many people using S100s.

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Thank you for your understanding.
It would be great if you can refund it as soon as possible to avoid any potential complications.
Thank you.

TourIssueS100 is the right thing isn't it?
I just want to check just in case, as we don't hear many people using S100s.

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A6, the size of a paperback book, is very small. The standard size of a Japanese comic book is ☆by☆. The right side of an attached image is the size of a paperback pocket edition.
I'm not quite sure about the specific size of a graphic novel, but will ☆by☆by☆ book cover work? It's flexible as the width can be sealed to tighten.

You properly got the magazine from 〇 as well！
What should I do. You don't need 2 of them right? But I have sent it already. Sorry, it's my fault for judging prematurely. I'll send some extra gift next time. I hope you'll forgive me.

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A6, the typical size of a paperback book, is pretty small. The standard size of a Japanese comic book is ☆by☆. The right side of the attached image is the size of a paperback pocket edition.
I'm not quite sure about the specific size of a graphic novel, but will a book cover of ☆by☆by☆ dimension work for you? It's flexible as the width can be sealed to tighten.

You got the magazine from 〇 as well！
What should I do. You don't need 2 of them right? But I have sent it already. Sorry, it's my fault for judging prematurely. I'll send some extra gift next time. I hope you'll forgive me.

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When I was young, high-school or university students seemed to have more confident than younger people nowadays. They tended to prefer to keep away from things which most of people preferred to do. The young people tend to follow what other people are doing and they feel nervous if they don't wear things which other people are wearing.Of course anybody can be sensitive to the trend, but I think the trend shouldn't be the one people to follow, but the one people to try to catch up somehow.

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When I was young, high-school or university students seemed to have more confidence than younger people nowadays. They tended to keep away from things which most of people preferred to do. Young people today on the other hand, tend to follow what others are doing and they would feel nervous if they do not wear things which others are wearing. Of course anybody can be sensitive to trends, but I think that trend shouldn't be the one people follow, but rather one that is led by people instead.

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Please tell me what year the bass was created.
Is the picture on the Website the sample?

I would like you to send a few pictures of the product.
I would like to see the color of the fingerboard in rosewood.

Unfortunately I cannot go to your company's store to check them directly.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Please tell me which year the bass was created in.
Is the picture on the website the sample?

I would like you to send a few pictures of the product.
I would like to see the color of the fingerboard in rosewood.

Unfortunately I am unable to go to your company's store to check them directly.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I have just received the order no.2528.
Thank you for packing the item carefully.

I don't understand about "loom part number" and "chassis number", but Juke type is F15E and Qashqai type is J10E.
The each part's numbers are 26580-xxxxx and 26580-xxxxx.
I will also attach a photo of the parts.
It will be very helpful if you have the harness which I can connect to the parts.

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I have just received the order no.2528.
Thank you for packing the item carefully.

I don't understand about "loom part number" and "chassis number", but Juke type is F15E and Qashqai type is J10E.
The numbers are 26580-xxxxx and 26580-xxxxx for each of the parts respectively.
I will also attach a photo of the mentioned parts.
It will be very helpful if you have the harness which I can connect to the parts.

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I received the products yesterday. Unfortunately, the wrong color was sent to me.

This is the color selected when I first ordered the product. I sent you an email saying that I wanted to change the color. There was no reply, so I requested to cancel the order from the Qoo10 purchase history page and then reordered it. After that, the purchase history screen was left showing the order as cancel in progress.

How long does it take to exchange a product? Also, please let me know about return shipping charges and product returns.

I await your response. Thank you.

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I received the products yesterday. Unfortunately, the wrong color was sent to me.

This is the color selected when I first ordered the product. I sent you an email saying that I wanted to change the color. There was no reply, so I requested to cancel the order from the Qoo10 purchase history page and then reordered it. After that, the purchase history screen was left showing the order as cancellation in progress.

How long does it take to exchange a product? Also, please let me know about the return shipping charges and product returns.

I await your response. Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your swift payment, Once again sorry for the late reply. I went to get the Momoshiri Pocky and Strawberry Pretz just earlier. There aren't many stores which have it but we managed to find them. They're really delicious!

The Sweet Potato Jagariko is a new item so it hasn't been put up in stores yet. That's why we want to order it online. Again as always, once I have got all the items together and calculate the shipping costs, would you like me to let you know the price with the additional charges added in? I will make sure to reply to you sometime early next week. Sweet potato is a food that really reminds me of Fall! Anyway, I will speak to you soon.

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Thank you very much for your swift payment, Once again sorry for the late reply. I went to get the Momoshiri Pocky and Strawberry Pretz just earlier. There aren't many stores which have it but we managed to find them. They're really delicious!

The Sweet Potato Jagariko is a new item so it hasn't been put up in stores yet. That's why we want to order it online. Again as always, once I have gotten all the items together and calculated the shipping costs, would you like me to let you know the price with the additional charges added in? I will make sure to reply to you sometime early next week. Sweet potato is a food that really reminds me of Fall! Anyway, I will speak to you soon.

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Only the first edition released in 2001, as you claimed, was from Universal Japan, and its back track description seems to be different.
But it is difficult in Japanese second hand market to get the first edition.

We didn't write in the product's description that it was made in 2001.
So we don't think we have sent you the wrong product.
The amount of money you want to get back is not large, but please understand that we have just sent the product written in the list of Amazon.

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Only the first edition released in 2001, as you claimed, was from Universal Japan, and its back track description seems to be different.
But it is difficult in Japanese second-hand market to get the first edition.

We didn't write in the product's description that it was made in 2001.
So we don't think we have sent you the wrong product.
The amount of money you want to get back is not large, but please understand that we have just sent the product written in the list of Amazon.

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I am really sorry that my credit card is not usable.
Since I already sent a letter for it to be usable again, I will order the same product with the order number XXX afterwards.
I'm sorry for the trouble I made.
Thank you for understanding.

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I am really sorry that my credit card is not usable.
Since I already sent a letter for it to be usable again, I will order the same product with the order number XXX afterwards.
I'm sorry for the trouble caused.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I`m delighted that I was able to buy the item.

However, when I tried to process the payment for the item, I was unable to pay because the delivery destination had not been specified.

Please can you designate the delivery destination as Japan and issue a Paypal invoice?
I`m looking forward to receiving an invoice from you.

I`m sorry for any bother I may have caused.

Regards

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I`m delighted that I am able to purchase the item.

However, when I tried to process the payment for the item, I was unable to pay because the delivery destination had not been specified.

Can you kindly designate the delivery destination as Japan and issue a Paypal invoice?
I`m looking forward to receiving an invoice from you.

I`m sorry for any botherance that I may have caused.

Regards

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This product must be sealed immediately after use. Keep away from high temperatures and humidity. If this product gets into the eyes, throat, or mucous membranes, rinse with plenty of water and contact medical help immediately. Never use chlorine bleach and chlorine based mold disinfectants at the same time. Do not wash by soaking for long periods, items may become discolored. To reduce risk of dry hands and skin if using a high concentration of product, gloves should be worn while washing. When washing after drying, powder that did not melt completely may adhere to clothes and appear white. In that case, it should be removed.

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This product must be sealed immediately after use. Keep away from high temperatures and humidity. If this product gets into the eyes, throat, or mucous membranes, rinse with plenty of water and contact medical help immediately. Never use chlorine bleach and chlorine based mold disinfectants at the same time. Do not wash by soaking for long periods, as items may become discolored. To reduce risk of dry hands and skin if using a high concentration of product, gloves should be worn while washing. When washing after drying, powder that did not melt completely may adhere to clothing and appear white. In that case, it should be removed.

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Thank you for your kind proposal. Yes of course, please let us search for you.

Thank you also for presenting with me the great number of links. Of course I also have used well-known stores (those that advertise on Rakuten, Yahoo!, etc.) and searched many auctions for items. But I have run into nothing but items being out of stock and my estimated bids exceeding the budget.

I'm now in the middle of confirming inventory of two far away retails stores I've found.

I continue this long search and when I can ensure items are in stock I'll contact you again.

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Thank you for your kind proposal. Yes of course, please let us search for you.

Thank you also for presenting with me the great number of links. Of course I also have used well-known stores (those that advertise on Rakuten, Yahoo!, etc.) and searched many auctions for items. But I have run into nothing but items being out of stock and my estimated bids exceeding the budget.

I'm now in the middle of confirming inventory of two far away retails stores I've found.

I will continue this long search and when I can ensure the items are in stock I'll contact you again.

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Thank you fo accepting my offer.
I'd like to buy this item but I am now processing to have new address in the US.

As it will be fixed by 19th, could you kindly wait till that?

Best Regards,

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Thank you for accepting my offer.
I'd like to buy this item but I am now processing to have new address in the US.

As it will be fixed by 19th, could you kindly wait till that?

Best Regards,