Ceputra Salim (blub91) — 付けたレビュー

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Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, would you do me a favor and could you please change your feedback?

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Certainly you can purchase the item.
Since you've already ordered, you can buy it after I send you an invoice.
As soon as payment is received and confirmed, I'll send you the package.

The item is sent by EMS.
It costs 15 USD.
The total amount is 125 USD.

It takes a little time due to shipment from Japan.
That's why we'll send the package by EMS, so that you can receive it as soon as possible.

By the way, would you do me a favor by changing your feedback?

元の翻訳
The shipping has been delayed due to the verification of PayPal.

We are going to ship the item today as the verification seems completed.

We will get back to you once the shipping is completed.

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The shipping has been delayed due to the verification processes conducted by PayPal.

We are going to ship the item today as the verification seems to have been completed.

We will get back to you once the shipping is completed.

元の翻訳
I bought three display cases the other day.

However, what I received were all blown color though I ordered black, so I contacted the seller.

The seller is now sending black items, which have not reached me by now.

I was thinking about sending back the blown cases that were wrongly sent to me, but decided to buy them.

I asked the seller how to pay for my additional order, then the seller told me to contact Amazon.
As this is my first case and I have no idea what to do. Please give me your advise on this matter.

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I bought three display cases the other day.

However, what I received were all blown color though I ordered black, so I contacted the seller.

The seller is now sending black items, which have not reached me by now.

I was initially thinking of sending back the brown cases that were wrongly sent to me, but decided to buy them instead.

I asked the seller how to pay for my additional order and I was told to contact Amazon.
As this is my first time facing such an issue, I have no idea what to do. Please give me your advise on this matter.

元の翻訳
I would be helpful if you could ship this order on Monday next week.

Part A and B is necessary.
The picture of the necessary parts is attached.
All of the parts circled in red.


Is it possible to order only three of the parts bellow?
If so please inform me the price.

I have Paypal account of Japan.
Is it possible for the payment?
Shipping is to Florida.
How many days does it take for the arrival?

I would appreciate if you could reply as soon as possible.

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I would be helpful if you could ship this order on Monday next week.

Part A and B is necessary.
The picture of the necessary parts is attached.
All of the parts circled in red.


Is it possible to order only three of the parts below?
If so please inform me the price.

I have Paypal account of Japan.
Is it possible to make payment?
Shipping is to Florida.
How many days does it take for the arrival?

I would appreciate if you could reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I was working until late yesterday. Thank you for sending the revised invoice.

Japanese banks close early, so I wasn't able to send the money today.

In Japan there is a three-day long weekend starting tomorrow.

The 15th is Marine Day, a national holiday, so I won't be able to send the money until the coming Tuesday.

Is it possible to send the items before I send the money? I'd like to be able to quickly deliver them to him.

I will absolutely send the money on the morning of Tuesday the 16th, Japan time, so I sincerely hope for your cooperation.

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I was working until late yesterday. Thank you for sending the revised invoice.

Japanese banks close early, so I wasn't able to send the money today.

In Japan there is a three-day long weekend starting tomorrow.

The 15th is Marine Day, a national holiday, so I won't be able to send the money until the coming Tuesday.

Is it possible to send the items before I send the money? I'd like to be able to quickly deliver them to him.

I will definitely send the money on the morning of Tuesday the 16th, Japan time, so I sincerely hope for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
The host was friendly and we had a lovely time, though it was such a short stay. Conveniently situated, close to the station and variety of restaurants in the neighborhood. The room was clean and well equipped. We had such a comfortable stay.
Next time when I stay in Italy, I would love to go back to the accommodation.

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The host was friendly and we had a lovely time, despite it being a short stay. The accommodation is conveniently situated close to the station and there is also a wide variety of restaurants in the neighborhood. The room was clean and well equipped. We had such a comfortable stay.
The next time that I am in Italy, I would love to go back to the accommodation.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your payment.

We will be shipping it soon.


This merchandise is brand new, so would you like to buy this by $259 including the tax?

This is a special price only for you.

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Thank you for your payment.

We will be shipping it soon.


This merchandise is brand new, so would you like to purchase it at $259 including tax?

This is a special price only for you.

元の翻訳
In case you haven't read the previous mail, from now on I will be using this e-mail address.
Please, respond to this address next time .
My PayPal account hasn't changed.
I would like to keep cooperating with you.

This is a re-sent message.

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In case you haven't read the previous mail, from now on I will be using this e-mail address.
Kindly direct all future correspondences to this email from now on.
My PayPal account hasn't changed.
Looking forward to our future dealings.

This is a re-sent message.