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The delivery man would give u a call before delivering this product.

The delivery man would tell you about the delivery time by phone call.

At that time, if the phone is not answered, the product would not be delivered.

When you order the product, please fill in the accurate phone number.

Thank you for your support.

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The delivery man will give you a call before delivering this product.

The delivery man will tell you about the delivery time by phone call.

At that time, if the phone is not answered, the product will not be delivered.

When you order the product, please fill in the accurate phone number.

Thank you for your support.

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Thank you for your reply. Is it possible to have a 5% or above discount? If the discount can be changed according to the amount we order, please tell me the proportion of it.

For example:
amount: discount
5：5%
10：8%
20：10%

Do we have to order a certain amount for each purchase? Please tell us the log number required.

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Thank you for your reply. Is it possible to have a 5% or above discount? If the discount can be changed according to the quantity we order, please tell me the quantities and discounts.

For example:
quantity: discount
5 pcs: 5%
10 pcs: 8%
20 pcs: 10%

Do you have any minimum order quantity? Please tell us the quantity required for one lot.

元の翻訳
Size

Width 80x Depth 80x Height 36cm, countertop thickness 21mm, cord length 3m

Material
countertop: MDF （Walnut sliced veneer ）, urethane resin paint, leg: rubber wood, 510w switch heater between <metro electrical product> 【method】EVA seal attached to the back of the leg to prevent damage to floor

Possible to remove the leg.

We use the heater produced from the Japanese top maker of heater which has high quality and safety. Deodorant ability. the heat can be transmitted to the corner of the room by the fan. The thin type of heater is used so the heater part would not be seen obviously, the table can be used in both spring and summer.

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Size

Width 80x Depth 80x Height 36cm, countertop thickness 21mm, cord length 3m

Material
Countertop: MDF （Walnut sliced veneer ）, urethane resin paint, leg: rubber wood, 510w intermediate switch heater <Metro Co.Ltd.> 【Specifications】EVA seal attached to the back of the legs to prevent damage to floor

Possible to remove the legs.

We use the heater produced from a Japanese top maker of heaters which has high quality and safety. Deodorant ability and heat can be transmitted to the corner of the room by the fan. The thin type of heater is used so the heater part would not be seen obviously, the table can be used in both spring and summer.

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for purchasing the product.
We are packing the product and as the model of the item has changed, the colour of the handle of it has changed from red to green as showed in the picture attached.

The product is sold in Japan and as a Japanese, we seldom notice the change of the model.
People from other countries may think that it is a fake product and feel uncomfortable for it.
We promise that it is a genuine product.

If you still have any questions, please contact us. A@COM

We will send the product now with a additional gift.

Thank you for your support.

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Hello
Thank you for purchasing the product.
We are packing the product and as the model of the item has changed, the colour of the handle has changed from red to green as showed in the picture attached.

The product is sold in Japan. We,Japanese, seldom notice the change of the model.
However,people from other countries may think that it is a fake product and feel uncomfortable for it.
We promise that it is a genuine product.

If you still have any questions, please contact us. A@COM

We will send the product now with a additional gift.

Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
Hello

It is about the product you ordered, it would be delivered later due to the traffic problem.
We prepare to send the product once we get it, it may take 2 or 3 days until we get the product.
We are deeply sorry for the late of our delivery.
If you have any question, please feel free to ask us.
Thank you for your support.

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Hello

It is about the product you ordered, it would be a delayed shipment due to the traffic problem.
We prepare to send the product once we get it, it may take a few days until we get the product.
We are deeply sorry for the delayed shipment and the inconvenience caused.
If you have any question, please feel free to ask us.
Thank you for your support.

元の翻訳
我在◯月◯日买了订单号〇〇的产品。
★的交易全交给代理人处理。
我需要运用号码和运送公司的资料去提取货品。
代理人会根据运用号码把产品送给我。
但根据您提供的号码我查不到我的货品。
请提供正确的信息。
已收到的★还差◯个。
因为我住在日本，昨天才从代理人那里收到货品。
请快点处理这个事件。

收到的★有◯个是破损的
收到的★的设计是不对的

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我在◯月◯日买了订单号〇〇的产品。
★交易全交给代理人处理。
我需要运送号码和运送公司的资料去提取货品。
代理人会根据运用号码把产品送给我。
但根据您提供的号码我查不到我的货品。
请提供正确的信息。
★已收到的货品还差◯个。
因为我住在日本，昨天才从代理人那里收到货品。
请快点处理这个事件。

★收到的商品有◯个是破损的
★收到的商品的样式是不对的

元の翻訳
Our company mainly offer the chemical admixture which is used to improve the construction ground.
We deliver manufactured product from other makers and we also sell our own products.
We have contract with factories and transport companies. From producing to delivering, our company is responsible for all of this.
We have factories and stock point in Tokyo, Osaka and Kyushu.

Attached please find our brochure.
The brochure introduces our business and products for your reference.

About the method of construction of the JR track lane, we are afraid that the level of muddy water was getting low.

We are considering to use the product of your company for experimental purpose.

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Our company mainly offer [s-v agreement] the chemical admixture which is used to improve the construction ground.
We deliver manufactured products from other makers and we also sell our own products.
We have contracts with factories and transport companies. From producing to delivering, our company is responsible for all of this.
We have factories and stock points in Tokyo, Osaka, and Kyushu.

Attached please find our brochure.
The brochure introduces our business and products for your reference.

About the method of construction of the JR track, we are afraid that the level of muddy water was getting low.

We are considering using the product of your company for experimental purposes.

元の翻訳
1, We can find the product you wanted if you provide its picture or the link of the youtube video of it to us.
If it is the product sold in the 90's, we have the product A or B. If you are interested, please let us know.
2, What is 'A'? I am sorry that I am not used to English. Please tell us what ”A" is by sending us picture.
3, If possible, please use SAL with the chasing number to send us back the product. When the product is delivered, we would refund by ebay. We will pay the delivery cost to you by paypal.

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1, We can find the product you want if you provide its picture or its link of the youtube video of to us.
If it is the product sold in the 90's, we have the product A or B. If you are interested, please let us know.
2, What is 'A'? I am sorry that I am not so good at English. Please tell us what ”A" is by sending us its picture.
3, If possible, please use SAL with the tracking number when you return the product. When we receive the product, we would refund through ebay. We will also pay the delivery cost to you by paypal.

元の翻訳
We also deal with many other high class shoes.
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Our customers mainly order our product online↵

When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those shop around JIYUGAOKA
↵
Please grab the chance for choosing our product↵

We are proud of offering our product around the world↵

We play an important role in helping to expand your business of your product↵

We strongly hope that we could work our business together↵

Please give us a chance

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We also handle many other high class shoes.
Our customers mainly order our products online.
When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those who shop around Jiyugaoka.
Please grab the chance for choosing our product [mistranslation].
We are proud to offer our products around the world.
We hope to play an important role in helping to expand your business.
We strongly hope that we could work our business together [awkward].
Please give us a chance.

元の翻訳
We also deal with many other high class shoes.

Our customers mainly order our product online

When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those shop around JIYUGAOKA

Please grab the chance for choosing our product

We are proud of offering our product around the world

We play an important role in helping to expand your business of your product

We strongly hope that we could work our business together

Please give us a chance

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We also deal with many other high class shoes

Our customers mainly order our products online

When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those shop around JIYUGAOKA

Please grab the chance for choosing our products

We are proud of offering our product around the world

We play an important role in helping to expand your business of your products

We strongly hope that we could conduct business together

Please give us a chance