スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
発送方法を訂正してください。

クーリエ便ではなく、郵便局を利用したいのです。
これは、最たる経済的な郵送方法でありますが、↵
追跡番号もありますので。
５から１０ドルくらいだと思います。
製品は、かなり軽量ですが、日本においてこれらを大量に購入しました。

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こんにちは。
発送方法を訂正してください。

クーリエ便ではなく、郵便局を利用したいのです。
こちらの方が経済的ですが、追跡番号は付けてください。
５から１０ドルくらいだと思います。
製品は、かなり軽量ですが、日本においてこれらを大量に購入しました。

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I purchased the product at your site a few minutes ago,
but I made a mistake in e-mail address registered.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I want to check the current order, but can I do it?
Order number is 000000000000.

Please also check if I oredered the same product twice.

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I purchased the product at your site a few minutes ago,
but I made a mistake in the e-mail address I registered.

＊@gmail.com
↓
＊＊@gmail.com

I want to check the current order, so is that possible?
The order number is 000000000000.

I would also like to check if I ordered the same product twice.

元の翻訳
Ministry of Tourism and Japan Government Tourisim Agency entrusted 8 people who have authority to send message and network to Japan and abroad in industries and field of art as MICE ambassador.

As a representative of Japan, they find potential demand of MICE and reinforce competitive ability of invitation of MICE in Japan for advertisement and invitation.

※Invitation and holding international conference, etc.(MICE) is positioned as an important tool to invite a number of superior knowledge and investment to Japan in "strategy of revitalizing Japan" and "action program for realizing tourisim country".

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Ministry of Tourism and Japan Government Tourisim Agency entrusted 8 people who have authority to send messages and have the network access to industrial and art fields both in Japan and abroad as MICE ambassador.

As representatives of Japan, they find potential demand of MICE and reinforce competitive ability of invitation of MICE in Japan for advertisement and invitation.

※Invitation and holding international conference, etc.(MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract a number of superior knowledge and investments to Japan in "strategy of revitalizing Japan" and "action program for making Japan a tourisim-oriented country".

元の翻訳
The coffee is almost spilled.
I am too sleepy to work.
Tomorrow I will have afternoon off.

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The coffee looks like it's going to spill.
I am too sleepy to work.
Tomorrow I have the afternoon off.

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I have been waiting for the product that I had purchased from you,
but I have not received it yet.

I want to you to refund all amount.

If I cannot agree with your answer,or
if I decide that confirmation of refunding processing takes longer than 45 days from payment day,↵
I regret to say that I will report it to Paypal.

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I have been waiting for the product that I had purchased from you,
but I have not received it yet as of today.

I want you to refund in full amount.

If I cannot agree with your explanation, or
if I decide that confirmation of refunding process takes longer than 45 days from the date of the payment, I regret to say that I will report it to Paypal.

元の翻訳
Lighting ceremony of tree about as high as 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View observation deck. The tree whicl looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It includes a message to run for future by holding the mind of child and mind of play that we tend to lose when we are grown up secretly. 2 mirrors to take picture by ourselves are set around the tree.

If we take a picture by sitting at the seat of stump, we can take a picture of tree and ourselves neatly.

It is set from Novemer 29 to December 25. The business hour is postponed to 22:00.

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A lighting ceremony of tree about 5 meters was held in Tokyo City View Observation Deck. The tree which looks like melting ice expresses "it eventually disappears, form glistening in an instant". It conveys a message for people to move forward to the future with a childlike and creative mindset that we tend to lose when we grow up. There are 2 mirrors set around the tree for people to take pictures of themselves.

If we take a picture by sitting at stump, we can take a picture of ourselves with the tree in our back neatly.

The ceremony is from 29th of November to 25th of December. The business hour is extended to 22:00.

元の翻訳
こんにちは　親愛なる友人様
↵
ご注文ありがとうございました。悪いお知らせがあります。チャイナポストがバッテリー内の小包の回収を拒否したので、バッテリーを発送できません。貴方の注文も速やかにキャンセルしてください。よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは　親愛なる友人
ご注文ありがとうございました。悪いお知らせがあります。チャイナポストがバッテリー入りの小包の引き取りを拒否するので、バッテリーを発送できません。貴方の注文も速やかにキャンセルしてください。よろしくお願いします。

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元の翻訳
メール及び本情報のご提供ありがとうございました。

貴方の各ご依頼事項を調整し、お支払いいただきました金額に反映しました。

MY ACCOUNT > INBOXと称する貴方のオンライン口座において本件の
完了をご覧いただくことができます。発送の要請に先立ち、金額をご確認ください。

本要請において他の情報が必要な場合、メールにてお知らせします。

ご質問があれば、お気軽にご連絡ください。

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メール及び本情報のご提供ありがとうございました。

貴方の各ご依頼事項を調整し、お支払いいただきました金額に反映しました。

MY ACCOUNT > INBOXの項目にて、貴方のオンライン口座における本件の
完了をご覧いただくことができます。発送の要請に先立ち、金額をご確認ください。

本要請において他の情報が必要な場合、メールにてお知らせします。

ご質問があれば、お気軽にご連絡ください。

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元の翻訳
The tracking of order #610 has not been changed since November 18.
Please check again if arrangement of sending has been carried out without mistake.

The rug of order#610 and 611 is listed as is described below.
It has not been listed as business days.

In any case, 14 days have passed since we ordered.
Even counting only business day, 10 days have already passed.
Would you arrange that we can receive it before or on November 29?
Please send it immediately.
I appreciate your prompt action.

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The tracking of order #610 has not been changed since November 18.
Please check again if arrangement of sending has been carried out without mistake.

The rug of order#610 and 611 is listed as is described below.
It has not been listed as business days.

In any case, 14 days have passed since we ordered.
Even counting only business day, 10 days have already passed.
Would you arrange that we can receive it by 29th November?
Please send it immediately.
I appreciate your prompt action.

元の翻訳
I received watch. I am satisfied with it. Thank you.
The price of black watch is 4,800 dollars.
How many watches are for this price?
I want to have 50 black watches.
Are 50 black watches 4,250 dollars?
If it is so, I will pay 4,250 dollars via Paypal.

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I have received the watch. I am satisfied with it. Thank you.
You have mentioned that the price of the black watches is 4,800 dollars.
How many watches are for this price?
I want to buy 50 black watches.
Is the price of 50 black watches 4,250 dollars?
If it is, I will pay 4,250 dollars via Paypal.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me. I ma glad if you send with it in this package after removing the glass faceplate.

I can set it up after I receive it.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Thank you for contacting me. I would appreciate it if you could send with it in this package after removing the glass faceplate.

I can set it up after I receive it.

Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
これを、既に、注文しましたが、通関において支払いは必要ですか。

よろしく。

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こんにちは。
こちらを既に注文したのですが、関税は支払う必要がありますか？

宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
フェラリF93AのブラジルGP1993のドライバーであるジーン・アレシがモデルであると伺い遺憾です。↵
このモデルを、入手することは可能ですか。

もし可能であれば、モデルを自作しなければならないのですか、それとも
このモデルは、既製ですか。

このモデルをも入手できない場合、どのF1フェラリを手に入れることができますか。

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それは残念です。で、１９９３年のブラジルグランプリでジャン・アレジがが乗っていたフェラーリF93Aモデルはまだありますか。

もしあるなら、、それは自作しなければならないのですか、それとも
既製ですか。

このモデルがもうない場合、どのF1フェラーリなら手に入れることができますか。

元の翻訳
Confirmation of number of order by country or product
Confirmation of number of order by company which sells it
We confirm the number of order produced between January and March.

Disposal where reinputting of order that is already input is permitted
If you request so, we will permit reinput of order produced between January and March that has been already completed

※Please be sure to input production that is expected to be produced in 3 months from now
※You can change the number of expected order that is input 1 month before when making an order is completed.
Please check and review the number of expected order that has been input in the past every month.

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Confirmation of number of order by country or product
Confirmation of number of order by company which sells it
We confirm the number of order produced from January to March.

Disposal where reinputting of order that is already input is permitted
If you request so, we will permit re-input of order produced from January to March that has been already completed

※Please be sure to input production that is expected to be produced in 3 months from now
※You can change the number of expected order that is input 1 month before when making an order is completed.
Please check and review the number of expected order that has been input in the past every month.

元の翻訳
Hello!
Is total 1285.34 dollars?

The price of the product I purchased is 810 dollars.
Is shipping charge as much as 475 dollars?
I cannot pay this total amount.

I can send it by 100 to 150 dollars to Japan.

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Hello!
Is the total $1285.34?

The price of the product I purchased is $810.
Is $475 really needed for the shipping cost?
I cannot pay this total amount.

I can send it to Japan for $100-$150.

元の翻訳
ご厚情のこもったお返事ありがとうございました。

時間の制限のため、チャールスリー氏が来シーズンまで来日を延期する旨
をお知らせします。

同氏曰く万事が「拙速」気味であるため、長期に鑑みた結果、
適宜且つ適切に日本の市場をアプローチしたいと祈念しているそうです。

同氏のお気持ちをお汲み取りいただければ幸甚です。

ご連絡お待ちします。

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ご厚情のこもったお返事ありがとうございました。

時間的余裕がないため、チャールスリー氏が来シーズンまで来日を延期する旨
をお知らせします。

万事があわただしく、日本市場を長期に鑑みている同氏としては、
適宜且つ適切に日本の市場にアプローチしたいと祈念しているそうです（祈念しているところです）。

同氏のお気持ちをお汲み取りいただければ幸甚です。

これからも連絡をとりあいましょう。

元の翻訳
これは特急便だったので、返金可能です。過去数年、このような事故が多発しました。見つかるでしょうから心配無用です。貴方がこの荷物を要していることを周知しており、最新の状況確認のため、時々、問い合わせております。

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これは速達便だったので、費用は返金可能です。過去数年、このような事はまれに発生しています。見つかるでしょうから心配無用です。貴方がこの荷物を大変要していることを存じておりますので、最新の状況確認のため、しばしば、問い合わせをしております。

元の翻訳
We finished contest voting.

Thank you for participation in the contest by a number of people.
A couple of minutes ago, voting period was finished.
Fron now, we are going to total the voting, and will announce the result around 21:00
on 12th today.
You might be the first champion who is selected among 406 applicants.
Please look forward to the result.

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We finished contest voting.

Thank you for participation in the contest by a number of people.
A couple of minutes ago, voting period was finished.
From now, we are going to totalize the voting, and will announce the result around 21:00
on 12th today.
You might be the first champion who is selected among 406 applicants.
Please look forward to the result.