Megumi Walton (mzarco1) — 付けたレビュー

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The other day, the item I bought from you went through the Japanese customs inspection and recognized as the item that violates the intellectural property right. The customs sent me anotice stating that the item will be disposed.
I called them for an inquiry, but it looks like there is nothing we can do about it under the Japanese law.

The trouble that has been caused this time was very unfourtunate for both of us.
I, too, am very disappointed because I was looking forward to it. Now, since you are being so kind to me, I would like to consult with you to see if you could issue me $90 refund, which is a half the price I paid for the purchase, considering the full refund would be a major burden to you?

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The other day, the item I bought from you went through the Japanese customs inspection and recognized it as an item that violates intellectual property right. The customs sent me a notice stating that the item will be disposed.
I called for an inquiry, but it looks like there is nothing we can do about it under the Japanese law.

The problem this time was very unfortunate for both of us.
I, too, am very disappointed because I was looking forward to it. Now, since you are being so kind to me, I would like to consult with you to see if you could issue me a $90 refund, which is half the price I paid for the purchase, considering the full refund would be a major burden to you?

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Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused because the item did not get delivered to you.
I would like to issue you a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

Hello,
Thank you for your support as ever.
Regarding the below transaction, we would like to issue a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

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Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused because the item did not get delivered to you.
I would like to issue you a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

Hello,
Thank you for your support as ever.
Regarding the transaction below, we would like to issue a refund.
Thank you for your kind understanding.

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※ On the day of the event, a cameraman might be in the hall for reporting the event. You might be taken in the film. We ask you to understand it in advance.
※ You are prohibited from sitting from the previous day of the event as it causes a nuisance to those in the neighborhood.

We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

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※ On the day of the event, the camera crew might be in the hall to report the event. Please take note that You may be included in the film. We ask you for your understanding it in advance.
※ You are prohibited from waiting outside the day before the event, as it cause nuisance to residents in the neighborhood.

We appreciate your understanding and cooperation.

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I apologize for the belated response. Since the offer comes with a free shipping, we are not unable to apply $300 discount. The best we could offer is $2,150. We have relisted the item after marked down the price, so please purchase it if you like. Also, please be aware that this item is set with an option that when you settle the payment via PayPal, you could bid it simultaneously (in other words, you cannot bid the item unless the payment is settled).

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I apologize for the belated response. Since the offer comes with a free shipping, we are unable to apply the $300 discount. The best we could offer is $2,150. We have relisted the item after we marked down the price, so please purchase it if you like. Also, please be aware that this item is set with an option that when you settle the payment via PayPal, you could bid it simultaneously (in other words, you cannot bid the item unless the payment is settled).

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Early in September and early in November cash-out hasn't transferred to my account.
Total amount is $10.
It's been 2 months after I request for cash out at September 3rd.

It is $10 for cash back sum on Summary expression.
However it hasn't transferred to my account.
Can you tell me why?

Is it completed for transfer?
Is there any defect of bank account's information mentioned?

I am so worried when I get any information.

Please find out what is reason for transfer delayed immediately and tell me.
And please refund $10 immediately.

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Early September and November cash-out hasn't transferred to my account.
Total amount is $10.
It's been 2 months after I requested a cash out on September 3rd.

Summary expression states a sum of $10 for cash back.
However, it hasn't transferred to my account yet.
Could you explain?

Is the transfer request completed?
Was there unprovided information for the bank account?

I am so worried that I haven't received any information.

Please find out the reason for transfer delay immediately and let me know.
And please refund the $10 immediately.

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The razor I sold is in brand new condition, and has not been sharpened a single time up until now.

Rest assured to know that in order to prevent rust, I wiped any moisture off completely.

The knife I sold is made with good-quality steel. Also, it is made in a small-scale workshop, and so the price is on the expensive side.

The knife I am selling hasn't been polished. It will be polished after the order has been made.

I think that the knife I am selling will bring you satisfaction. It is a very beautiful knife.

No matter how many knives you buy, they will be sent in the same package with postage fees of $21.

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The razor I sell is in brand new condition, and has not been sharpened a single time up until now.

Rest assured to know that in order to prevent rust, I wiped off any moisture completely.

The knife I sell is made with good-quality steel. Also, it is made in a small-scale workshop, and so the price is on the expensive side.

The knife I am selling hasn't been polished. It will be polished after the order has been made.

I think that the knife I am selling will bring you satisfaction. It is a very beautiful knife.

No matter how many knives you buy, they will be sent in the same package with postage fees of $21.

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If I have to choose one, I would say that I prefer big breasts.
I like people who are fun to be around.
How old are you?
What do you do for a living?
Do you have any Japanese friends? Where do they live?
My height is 178cm and I weigh 70kg, how about you?
What type of guy do you like?
How did you find me on LINE?

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If I have to choose one, I would say that I prefer big breasts.
I like people who are fun to be around.
How old are you?
What do you do for living?
Do you have any Japanese friends? Where do they live?
My height is 178cm and I weigh 70kg, how about you?
What type of guys do you like?
How did you find me on LINE?

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As I was not able to find some details in the pictures, can you
answer me about the following questions?

Is the product new and never opened and without any scratch?
Can you pack the items very carefully and firmly when shipping?

We are thinking about buying six pieces depending on your answer.
Best Regards.

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As I was not able to find some details in the pictures, can you
answer the following questions?

Is the product new, never opened and without any scratch?
Can you pack the items very carefully and firmly when shipping?

We are thinking about buying six pieces depending on your answer.
Best Regards.

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This waterfall is a sacred place for those of the Hakusan faith, and it seems to have become a place for ascetic practices and training of many practitioners.

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This waterfall is a sacred place for those of the Hakusan faith, and it seems to have become a training ground for many practitioners.

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the WEB site is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual pysical of the item.
I would like to check the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am not possible to go to your shop and see the actual item,↵
so I would like to ask for your help.
Thank you.

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Please tell me the production year of the base.

Is the illustration on the website is a sample?

Could you please send me some photos of the actual product?
I would like to see the color of the rosewood fingerboard.

I am unable to visit your store and see the actual item, so I am asking for your help.
Thank you.

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Sorry for the late reply.

First, I want to inform you about one thing. I am currently designing a WEB Shop that deals all of your products in your current WEB Shop. It is still an early stage but in the future there will be more purchases of products other than Nisan (SUZUKI, HONDA,Jeep,etc..)

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Sorry for the late reply.

First, I want to inform you about one thing. I am currently designing a web store that deals all of your products in your current web store. It is still an early stage but in the future there will be more purchases of products other than Nisan (SUZUKI, HONDA,Jeep,etc..)

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Thank you very much for shopping at us among others.
We appreciate your interest in us.
It will be a short period, but please let us know if we can be any help.
We will inform you when we ship out your order.
Please look forward to receiving the item.

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Thank you very much for shopping with us instead of others.
We appreciate your interest in us.
It will be a short period, but please let us know if we can be of any help.
We will inform you when we ship out your order.
Please look forward to receiving the item.

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Today is the day when the products would be shipped, right? Please send me the tracking number upon shipping similar to last time.

Since you only sell Japan sizes, you do not need to send the following sizes.

I think the sales volume is also low at first, but I think it will sell if you post the product information into the WEB site moving forward
We aso did this for the main maker we are currently selling.
Because of this, please provide the product information
The price and the order sheet are as follows

You can not put your company's products in a prominent place in the store since you do not know the delivery date nor if it is in stock.
Please let me know how many days it would take to ship the order if I change it to the Japan size.

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Today is when the products are shipped, right? Please send me the tracking number upon shipping similar to last time.

Since we only sell Japanese sizing, you do not need to send the following sizes.

I think the sales volume is also low at first, but I think it will sell if you post the product information on the website later on.
We also did this for the main maker we are currently selling.
Because of this, please provide the product information
The price and the order sheet are as follows

We can not put your company's products in a prominent place in the store since you do not know the delivery date nor if it is in stock.
Please let me know how many days it would take to ship the order if I change it to the Japanese sizing.

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I confirmed PI.
There's no problem with the provided contents.

Next, is it fine if the bank transfer payment is sent?

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I confirmed PI.
There's no problem with the provided contents.

Should I send the bank transfer payment next?

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I'm afriad that we have already arranged the shipment for the product so the address cannot be changed.
If you would like to change the address, please cancel the product. I will give you a complete refund.

You said that you will move to Florida on October 2nd, so I have arranged the product to arrive after October 2nd.

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I'm afraid that we have already arranged the shipment for the product, so the address cannot be changed.
If you would like to change the address, please cancel the product. I will give you a complete refund.

You said that you will move to Florida on October 2nd, so I have arranged the product to arrive after October 2nd.

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I'm very sorry but I don't have a fax machine. Can you send me that photo as an e-mail attachment? I'm not sure specifically what you're aiming at when you refer to an "advertisement". If that advertisement doesn't refer to the Amazon product page, I think you may have some sort of misunderstanding.

It seems like you're talking about a false advertisement. It appears likely that Amazon and I have no responsibility regarding that advertisement.

To the best of my ability I sent you the product advertised on the Amazon page.

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I'm very sorry but I don't have a fax machine. Can you send me that photo as an e-mail attachment? I'm not sure specifically what you're aiming at when you refer to an "advertisement". If that advertisement doesn't refer to the Amazon product page, I think you may have some sort of misunderstanding.

It seems like you're talking about a false advertisement. It appears that Amazon and I have no responsibility regarding that advertisement.

To the best of my ability I sent you the product advertised on the Amazon page.

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あなたはgarchomp、altariaとgulorkのために何を取りますか？

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あなたはgarchomp、altariaとgulorkをなにで交換してくれますか？