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chanceofrain
chanceofrain 56 yoroshikuonegaishimasu
日本語

この滝は、白山信仰の霊場として、多くの修行者の修行の場となっていたそうです。

英語

This waterfall is a sacred place for those of the Hakusan faith, and it seems to have become a place for ascetic practices and training of many practitioners.

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mzarco1 50 Hello, I am a translator/interpret...
mzarco1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/12 14:15:56

元の翻訳
This waterfall is a sacred place for those of the Hakusan faith, and it seems to have become a place for ascetic practices and training of many practitioners.

修正後
This waterfall is a sacred place for those of the Hakusan faith, and it seems to have become a training ground for many practitioners.

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chanceofrain chanceofrain 2013/10/16 03:34:05

Hey, thanks so much for your suggestions. :) This sentence was a challenge for me.

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