Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ (11月25日更新)

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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/09/18 11:58:44

piro627
piro627 52 化粧品・健康食品の輸入販売企業で、製品部・マーケティング部のアシスタント時...
日本語

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英語

Thank you very much for shopping at us among others.
We appreciate your interest in us.
It will be a short period, but please let us know if we can be any help.
We will inform you when we ship out your order.
Please look forward to receiving the item.

レビュー ( 1 )

mzarco1 50 Hello, I am a translator/interpret...
mzarco1はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2013/09/18 12:28:38

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for shopping at us among others.
We appreciate your interest in us.
It will be a short period, but please let us know if we can be any help.
We will inform you when we ship out your order.
Please look forward to receiving the item.

修正後
Thank you very much for shopping with us instead of others.
We appreciate your interest in us.
It will be a short period, but please let us know if we can be of any help.
We will inform you when we ship out your order.
Please look forward to receiving the item.

I think it's good either ways!

piro627 piro627 2013/09/18 12:33:41

Thank you for your review!

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