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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/10/16 23:44:50

newbie_translator
日本語

ちょうどマクドナルドで朝食を買っていました。
私は英語が得意ではないので、いつも同僚に翻訳してもらっています。
だから話すことができません。
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英語

I happen to have bought breakfast from McDonald's.
I am not good in English so I always ask my colleague to translate.
So I cannot speak because of it.
Thank you for contacting me about the sale.

Thank you for the status report.
Please let me know the tracking NO once the product has been shipped.
I am looking forward to it.

The site is undergoing a renewal now.
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レビュー ( 1 )

mapmetroi 45 I love Foreign language. This is my f...
mapmetroiはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/10/19 15:23:57

元の翻訳
I happen to have bought breakfast from McDonald's.
I am not good in English so I always ask my colleague to translate.
So I cannot speak because of it.
Thank you for contacting me about the sale.

Thank you for the status report.
Please let me know the tracking NO once the product has been shipped.
I am looking forward to it.

The site is undergoing a renewal now.
It is scheduled to be back online from MM/DD.
Please wait for a while.
(The words will be used for the home page notification)

修正後
I happen to have bought breakfast from McDonald's.
I am not good at English so I always ask my colleague to translate.
So I cannot speak because of it.
Thank you for contacting me about the sale.

Thank you for the status report.
Please let me know the tracking NO once the product has been shipped.
I am looking forward to it.

The site is undergoing a renewal now.
It is scheduled to be back online from MM/DD.
Please wait for a while.
(The words will be used for the home page notification)

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newbie_translator newbie_translator 2013/10/19 22:46:53

dude that's one word and you rate it a 3? That's unfair

mapmetroi mapmetroi 2013/10/21 00:42:03

sorry newbie_translator. please keep calm, actually this page also have many unfair things :) that is the truth. i was suggested to rate someone's translation at 3 even this translation is good, i am very sorry, from now i will follow my mind, your translation was really good.

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