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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2017/10/05 15:58:41

sujiko
sujiko 50 IT、金融などを中心として社内翻訳者を数年経験後、フリーランス翻訳者として...
日本語

メーカーは、商品代金を支払ってから荷物の手配をします。オーダーを2件の客先にわけて発送する事はできませんか。もしくは、発注金額を変更しなければ、発注した品番を変更する事はできませんか。来週中に商品代金を支払うので、商品の出荷を早める事は、できませんか。去年以上に発送を受け入れたので、今回 出荷が遅れていました。このお客さんは、高い金額で販売していて、次回も発注するので、少し値引きして頂けませんか。今回は、納期が間に合わないので、飛行機を使って輸送するからです。

英語

The manufacturer arranges for the item after making a payment.
Would you send the order to 2 different customers by separating it?
Or if I do not change amount of the item ordered, can't I change the item number that was ordered? As I pay the item within the next week, would you send it earlier?
As I have accepted sending the item more than last year, I sent the item behind schedule this time. As this customer sells at high price and will order the next time, would you give me a small discount? The reason is that as I cannot send within the period, I send by air this time.

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karekora 57 ご利用をいただき、誠にありがとうございます。 *** ご存知の...
karekoraはこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2017/10/06 22:38:48

元の翻訳
The manufacturer arranges for the item after making a payment.
Would you send the order to 2 different customers by separating it?
Or if I do not change amount of the item ordered, can't I change the item number that was ordered? As I pay the item within the next week, would you send it earlier?↵
As I have accepted sending the item more than last year, I sent the item behind schedule this time. As this customer sells at high price and will order the next time, would you give me a small discount? The reason is that as I cannot send within the period, I send by air this time.

修正後
The manufacturer arranges the item after making a payment.
Is it possible to send the order to 2 different customers by separating them?
Or, if the order amount isn’t changed, can I instead change the item number that was ordered? I will pay for the item within the next week - is it possible to send the item sooner?↵
I sent the item behind schedule as I have accepted a lot more orders than last year. Is a small discount feasible, as this customer is selling at high price and will order again. As I cannot send within the period this time, I will send it by airmail.

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