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昔の人は、天を見て、星が回転する球の内面に固定していると信じていました。コペルニクスは、地球中心の宇宙の理論に彼の名前を与えられ、バチカンはその代わり、異端の科学を述べれば火あぶりによって燃やすという脅しによって、彼の信念を広めました。私たちは、今、ほぼ無限と拡大を続ける宇宙の周辺に住んでいることを知っています。既知の惑星の軌道を象徴する輪から成るダイヤルが、同時に、地球をブロンズの輪っかのメッシュの内側に位置させています。太陽の軌道は黄道円と呼ばれる広帯域で示されています。

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昔の人は、天を見て、星は回転する球の内面に固定してある/されているのだと信じていました。コペルニクスは、地球中心の宇宙の理論に彼の名前を与えられました。そしてバチカンは、科学的異教徒は違う説を唱えたとして火あぶりにすると脅迫し、彼の考えを広めました。今日私たちはほぼ無限であり、いまだ拡がり続ける宇宙の片隅に居るのだということを知っています。環状の目盛盤によって地球が青銅の輪の網の目の中に陣取っていて、惑星の通り道を当時知られていたように象っています。太陽の軌道は黄道円と呼ばれる幅広の環で示されています。

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Sorry, but it is difficult to list at a time because I'm gradually purchasing based on the sales, not selling items that I hold originally.
I'm going to exhibit a and b on 2 April. If those items will also be auctioned, the payment is OK after all auction has done.


Once I up the tracking number because we have to ship within 4 business days from your deposit. If you bided it successfully, I claim only the difference of shipping between paid and packed.

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Sorry, but it is difficult to list at a time because I'm gradually purchasing based on the sales, not selling items that I hold originally.
I'm going to list a and b on 2 April. If those items will also be auctioned, the payment is OK after all auction has done.


Once I upload the tracking number because we have to ship within 4 business days from your payment. If you bid it successfully, I charge only the difference of shipping between paid and packed.

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I will refund to you the amount of item $ 100 + shipping $ 10 + returning to cost $ 10 = total $ 120.

Usually, we refund after arrival of goods in Japan, but I refund full amount in advance because you looks like a reliable collector.

And I also sends you the feedback change email from eBay, so
Please change to the Positive from the negative.

changes to feedback is very important for sellers like us.

Email change request could send only one time,
and the deadline is one week

Return shipping address is follows.

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I will refund you the total amount paid (item $ 100 + shipping $ 10 + return shipping $ 10 = total $ 120) to you.

Usually, we refund after arrival of goods in Japan, but I refund full amount in advance because you looks like a reliable collector.

And I also sends you the feedback change email from eBay, so
Please change to the Positive from the negative.

changes to feedback is very important for sellers like us.

Email change request could send only one time,
and the deadline is one week

Return shipping address is follows.

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Regarding the watch (--) which we sold in our shop in the FBA, there is order with following ID, and it has returned from the customer on Jan 2015.


Order ID: --

Then the return process was completed from the customer, and it became non-sale merchandise as the FBA inventory.
For this we made a order for return to our designated place from our shop in the following order.

Order ID: --
Order Item ID:--

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Regarding the watch (--) that we sold on FBA, there was an order with the following ID and the item was returned from a customer on Jan 2015.


Order ID: --

Then the return process was completed from the customer, and it became non-sale merchandise as the FBA inventory.
For this we made a order for return to our designated place from our shop in the following order.

Order ID: --
Order Item ID:--

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Although I have confirmed to the Secretariat of the Japan post just now,
it is said that the survey numbers will be issued at the time survey contact came to Japan from the American side.
It is said that contact takes from one week to month.
I think that I can't make sure the survey number if I do not know the results.
I have no doubt because I called another post office and confirmed several times if the answers is same or not.
Additionally I sends you a copy of the invoice.
I also do our best for it to arrive as soon as possible.
Now please wait for a while.

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Although I have confirmed to the Secretariat of the Japan post just now,
it is said that the survey numbers will be issued at the time survey contact came to Japan from the American side.
It is said that contact takes from one week to month.
I think that I can't make sure the survey number if I do not know the results.
I have no doubt because I called another post office and confirmed several times if the answers is same or not.
Additionally I send you a copy of the invoice.
I also do our best for it to arrive as soon as possible.
Now please wait for a while.

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私はアパートを借りようとしていますが、同社は私の電子メールの要求に応答しません。私は本当にこの 1 つ、または少なくともそれを借りられるかどうかを知りたいです。私は今夜、mufg の口座を開くように試みるつもりです。別の会社が私に連絡し別のアパートを提示しましたが、他の場所を全く借りられないかどうかが分かるまでは賃貸契約をしたくないです。このことであなたを煩わせたくありませんが、しかし土曜日に自由な時間があるなら、電話をして私の為に彼らと話していただけますか？この事であなたのお邪魔をしたくありませんが、若干急務となっています。私の家族はこれを知りませんが、私から盗んでいる現在のルームメイトを捕まえました。私はなるべく早くここを離れなければなりません。お手数をかけて申し訳ありません。

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私はアパートを借りようとしていますが、その会社から、私のEメールの要求に返答がありません。私は本当にこの 返事を待ち望んでいます、または少なくともそれを借りられるかどうかを知りたいのです。私は今夜、mufg の口座を開くつもりです。別の会社が私に連絡してきて、別のアパートを見せてくれましたが、あの場所を全く借りられないかどうかが分かるまでは賃貸契約をしたくないのです。このことであなたを煩わせたくありませんが、しかし土曜日に自由な時間があるなら、電話を掛けて、私の為に彼らと話していただけますか？この事であなたのお邪魔をしたくありませんが、若干急務となっています。私の家族はこのことを知りませんが、私から盗みを働いている現在のルームメイトを捕まえました。私はなるべく早くここを離れなければなりません。お手数をかけて申し訳ありません。

元の翻訳
証券取引制限アメリカ合衆国 (米国) およびカナダ (CN に準拠して、証券取引の制限アメリカ合衆国 (米国) およびカナダ (CN)、ない米国または CN に我々 のレコードに、アドレスのいずれかを変更する顧客に準拠して↵
我々の記録にある米国（ＵＳ）またはカナダ（CN） の住所において、少しでも変更しているお客様は、当社の投資のsen/icesを享受し続けることはできません。
個人のお客様 (韓国の国民)で、私たちの記録で住所を少しでも変更している方々は、当社の投資サービスを享受し続けることができない事にも注意して下さい。

もしあなたのアドレスを変更した場合、ティアオフ フォームを完了して、それをGPO ボックス 64、Hong Kong に戻して下さい。

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アメリカ合衆国 (US) およびカナダ (CN）の 証券取引規制に準拠して、USまたは CN に我々 のレコードのアドレスのいずれかを変更するお客様は、当社の投資のサービスを享受し続けることはできません。
個人のお客様 (韓国人)で、私たちの記録のいずれか韓国に変更する方々は、当社の投資サービスを享受し続けることができない事にも注意して下さい。

もしあなたのアドレスを変更した場合、ティアオフ フォームに記入して、GPO ボックス 64、Hong Kong まで返送して下さい。↵

元の翻訳
When you ordered last time card information stolen from there site, and there was unauthorized use of the card and the card has been reissued.
After the order this time from your site, I'm in reissue process due to unauthorized use again.
Card information on your site is leaky.

The order number 5 in this time
Although I want to order, but again and again like this thing is annoying.
Can you deal with it?

Please treat me well.


Yesterday, I completed the remittance procedure of $10000.

I ask you quick shipping.

Here we finished the test of 00 person's name input processing.

They are good workmanship. Just wait for the goods arrival.

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When I ordered last time my card information got stolen from your website, and there was unauthorized use of my card and my card has been reissued.
After the order this time from your site, I'm in reissue process due to unauthorized use again.
A huge leakage of card information is occurring in your website.

The order number 5 in this time
Although I want to order, but again and again trouble like this is annoying.
Can you deal with it?

Please treat me well.


Yesterday, I got done with transferring $10,000.

Please ship quickly.

Here we finished the test of 00 for placing name process.

They are good workmanship. I just await arrival of the item.

元の翻訳
T の場合は、ディーラーとしてのTという個人に支払われました。

１． コンペティション イベントまたは幸運によって起きたイベントに関連しない、販売やプロモーション目的のための賞の場合、３％の源泉徴収税は適用されなければなりません。
２．賞または競争や幸運によって起きたイベントによる賞金の場合、源泉徴収税 5% が適用されます。

Tの場合は会社やパートナーシップに支払われました。
３．Tが会社またはパートナーシップに支払った、いかなる課税所得の場合でも、源泉徴収税１% が適用されます。

T からの賞または賞を受けた個人や会社、パートナーシップなどのすべてのディーラーが 、所得税の目的のために収入を記録する責任がありますが、付加価値税は課税上の対象となりません。

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T が、ディーラーとしてのTという個人に支払った場合

１． コンペティション イベントまたは抽選イベントに関連しない、販売やプロモーション目的のための賞の場合、３％の源泉徴収税が適用されます。
↵
２．賞または競争や抽選イベントによる賞金の場合、源泉徴収税 5% が適用されます。

Tが会社や提携相手（パートナー）に支払われた場合↵

３．Tが会社またはパートナーシップに支払った、いかなる課税所得の場合でも、源泉徴収税１% が適用されます。

T からの賞または賞を受けた個人や会社、パートナーシップなどのすべてのディーラーが 、所得税の目的のために収入を記録する責任がありますが、付加価値税は課税上の対象となりません。

元の翻訳
我達が Viciousの最新版をデザインした時、つま先が自然に広がるのを認めることや、かかとが位置を固定するために狭まる事に着目しつつ、部分的に足の人間工学的な構造を採用しました。私達はその後、そのフィットの整合性を保持しつつ、具体的には最後の辺りで複合的に安全なつま先をデザインしました。

「従来にない支持力」
The Trailguard platform は、EVA ミッドソールのクッション性をもたらしつつ、軽量化を図り、非常に耐久性のTPU シャンクをミッドソールに組み込むことによってねじり強度を提供するユニークな構造となっています。↵
直接ミッドソールをアウトソールに一体成形し縫い目を削除することで、重量を排除し、強度を追加しました。

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我達が Viciousの木型をデザインした時は、部分的に足の人間工学構造を採用して、つま先が自然に広がるようにすることと、足位置を固定するためにヒールを狭めることに焦点を絞りました。私達はその後、そのフィットの整合性を保持しつつ、具体的には木型まわりをつつむ合成安全トウをデザインしました。

「従来にない支持力」
Trailguard プラットフォームは、EVA ミッドソールがクッション性をもたらす一方で、軽量化を図り、非常に耐久性のあるTPU シャンクをミッドソールに組み込むことによってねじり強度をもたらユニークな構造となっています。直接ミッドソールをアウトソールに一体成形して縫い目を取り去ることで、私たちは重量を削り落とし、強度を追加しました。

元の翻訳
VICIOUS
あるブーツは山を登り、またあるブーツは工事現場を登る。
Vicious は、あなたの持つ従来のDannerではありません。軽量で快適な作業ブーツのための欲求は、我々に良い何かより良いものを創造することを挑みました。設計プロセス全体を通して我々は豊富な知識と経験を使用しましたが、あらゆるステップで私達の推測に疑問を投げかけられました。Viciousは私たちの最も快適で伝統を打ち破るワークブーツであり、存続しつづけるために作られたものです。

ERGONOMIC FIT
本当に何かを作成するには、破壊することから始めなければなりません。靴においては、それは文字通りフィット感を形成するガッチリとした形状と、ブーツのパフォーマンスを形作る靴の最終形を開発する事から始まりまります。

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VICIOUS
あるブーツは山を登り、別のブーツは工事現場を登る。
Vicious は、あなたが持っている従来型のDannerではありません。軽量で快適な作業ブーツに対する欲求は、我々により良いものを創造するという課題を与えました。設計プロセス全体を通して我々は豊富な知識と経験を活用しましたが、あらゆるステップで私達の推測に疑問を投げかけました。Viciousは私たちが作り出した最も快適かつこれまでにない作業用ブーツで、長く使えるように設計されています。

ERGONOMIC FIT
本当に何かを作成するには、破壊することから始めなければなりません。靴においては、それは文字通りフィット感を形成するガッチリとした形状と、ブーツのパフォーマンスを形作る靴の最終形を開発する事から始まりまります。

元の翻訳
I have shipped your item just now.
Discount will be done in the form of a refund after dispatch.
The refund processing has been completed from my side, so as soon as the transaction in Amazon has been completed, then there will be announced the amount of refund $10 in your account. So please wait for a while.

Regarding TW1-6, I got understood. Then I'll look for again and contact as soon as found.
In this time Thank you very much for your purchasing again.
Also I'm looking forward to the next from the bottom of my heart for the next.

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I have shipped your item just now.
The discount will be done in the form of a refund after dispatch.
The refund processing has been completed from my side, so as soon as the transaction in Amazon has been completed, you will receive a notification for the $10 refund in your account. Thank you for your patience.

Regarding TW1-6, I understood. I'll look for it again and contact you as soon as I find it.
Thank you very much for purchasing from me again.
I am wholeheartedly looking forward to doing business with you again.

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Thank you for your reply.

Card number on the payment is the following.
Card number: 0000
Expiration date: 0000

Regarding snowboard wear size, I have usually worn a size S or SS.
(Height is 165cm, Body Weight is 56kg)
Also regarding contents of the tour, I understand that there is not a dog sledding 3 consecutive days.
Thank you for your concern.

I look forward to your reply.

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Thank you for your reply.

Card number on the payment is the following.
Card number: 0000
Expiration date: 0000

Regarding snow wear size, I usually wear size S or SS.
(Height is 165cm, Body Weight is 56kg)
Also regarding contents of the tour, I understand that there is not a dog sledding 3 consecutive days.
Thank you for your concern.

I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Chiba International Convention Bureau has hold "2014 fiscal year member exchange meeting" at 2nd floor international conference room in Makuhari Messe International Conference Hall.

"Since established Jun 1989, due to a lot of corporation of such as Supporting Members, we have achieved a lot of things both the success of attracting and supporting a large number of international conferences, and the exchange businesses. And we could celebrate its 25th anniversary last year.
Tetsuo Takayanagi representative director reported.

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Chiba International Convention Bureau held "2014 fiscal year member exchange meeting" at 2nd floor international conference room in Makuhari Messe International Conference Hall.

"Since established Jun 1989, due to a lot of corporation of such as Supporting Members, we have achieved a lot of things both the success of attracting and supporting a large number of international conferences, and the exchange businesses. And we could celebrate its 25th anniversary last year.
Tetsuo Takayanagi representative director reported.

元の翻訳
I've attached the purchase order. Please check the quantity and correct if it necessary.

Regarding the payment, the maximum amount of a single payment is around $10000 by Paypal.

Since the payment will become expensive from now, so I want to ask you the settlement by credit card. Is it possible?

Although I heard last year that production possible number of month is around 3000,↵
please tell me how much it is now, and by when and how much it becomes from now.


The products have arrived today. I was so excited because they were more than I expected.

Currently you are not accepting the order for any reason, I see.

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I've attached the purchase order. Please check the quantity and correct it, if necessary.

Regarding the payment, the maximum amount of a single payment is around $10,000 by Paypal.

Since the payment will be high in value from now, I want to request for the settlement by credit card. Is it possible?

Although I heard last year that the possible production quantity per month is around 3,000, I would like to know how many can be produced now. Also, by when and how many can be produced in the future.


The products have arrived today. I was so excited because they were more than I expected.

I understand that you are currently not accepting the order for some reason.

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Please teach me below 2 points.

・By when I should transfer money from your company's fund to the bank account which A company designate?

・I'm planning to stay in Paris on March 19 and 20.
If possible I will to participate the board meeting of A company, is it possible?
Regarding the list I received the other day, I'm understanding that investor of series D is also possible to participate at the meeting on March 20.
And if there is also meeting which I can participate on March 19, I'm happy if you teach it to me.

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Please teach me 2 points below.

・By when should I transfer the money from your company's fund to the bank account which A company designate?

・I'm planning to stay in Paris on March 19 and 20.
If possible I would like to participate the board meeting of A company, is it possible?
Regarding the list I received the other day, I'm understanding that investor of series D is also possible to participate at the meeting on March 20.
And if there is also meeting which I can participate on March 19, I'm happy if you teach it to me.

元の翻訳
Hello,

The item returned by DHL have been arrived at you?
I've reviewed the tracking, and it is displayed with the arrival on Feb 24 Tuesday.
Please send it to me by Royal Mail as soon as possible.
Because I have already paid an additional fee at the time of order asking the shipping by Royal Mail.
I'm in trouble very much because this order is significantly delayed the delivery of planned, and here is no item at y hand and the payment deadline is approaching.
Could you mind some discount with respect to this transaction?

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Hello,

Have you received the item I returned by DHL?
I've reviewed the tracking information, and it says it arrived on Feb 24 Tuesday.
Please send it to me by Royal Mail as soon as possible.
Because I have already paid an additional fee at the time of order, asking the shipping by Royal Mail.
I'm very much in trouble because this order is significantly delayed from the planned delivery date, and I have no item in hand and the payment deadline is approaching.
Could you give some discount with respect to this transaction?

元の翻訳
The shipping method becomes "SAL".SAL means free shipping using vacant space of airplane and reasonable. But it also means that the time of arrival changes significantly due to on presence or absence of vacant space. Fortunately last time it has arrived at you soon, but normally it is said to take 2-3 weeks. $13 additional charge makes us send by EMS. Then it will arrive at you in 4-5 days if it would passes the custom. This comes with tracking service and insurance. Please consider it.

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The shipping method is "SAL".SAL means low-price shipping using vacant space of airplane so we ship it free of charge. But it also means that the time of arrival changes significantly due to on presence or absence of vacant space. Fortunately last time it has arrived at you soon, but normally it is said to take 2-3 weeks. $13 additional charge enables us to send by EMS. Then it will arrive at you in 4-5 days if it passes the customs smoothly. This comes with tracking service and insurance. Please consider it.

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I heard that Mr. 000 will speech at ｘｘｘ。

The salesmen of ｘｘｘ are so simple people that it is easier to understand if you could show the comparison with others.
For example, ｘｘ vs oo, etc.
And I hope you to tell them eagerly that ｘｘ can provide the user of it with best experience of easy and convenient use of it.
Then they must rise up!

I hope this would be helpful for you.

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I heard that Mr. 000 would make a speech at ｘｘｘ。

The sales persons from ｘｘｘ are so simple-minded that it would be easier for them to understand if you could show a comparison with others.
For example, ｘｘ vs oo, etc.
And I would like you to tell them eagerly that ｘｘ can provide the users with best experiences (easy and convenient use).
Then they must be inspired!

I hope this would be helpful for you.

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Are you going to go to school?
It is very good thing!
What kind of study do you do there?
It's hopeful to start new things,isn't it?
I also want to do new things in spring if I can!?

Soon it is spring in Japan.We Japanese,many of them begin new thing in spring because our body feel lighter with warm temperature,I think.
How about in Finland?
It seems very cold now in Finland.
Please take care of your health.

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Are you going to school?
It's a very good thing!
What are you going to study?
It's exciting to start new things, isn't it?
I also want to do new things in spring.

Soon it is spring in Japan. Many of us Japanese begin new things in spring because our body feels lighter with a warm temperature, I think.
How about in Finland?
It must be very cold now in Finland.
Please take care of yourself.