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元の翻訳
Hello, George,

I would like to order the following. Please send me an invoice if you see no issue with them.

The resent depreciation of yen has been eating most of our profits out.
Is there any item that you could offer any discount for?
If possible, I would like to have the invoice with the discounted prices.

I hope to continue business with you, and also hope to increase the amount of our purchase.

I would appreciate if you could name as many items as possible that sells well yet are inexpensive for us to buy.

Also I would be glad if you would lower the prices to declar on the invoice to include in the package for customs clearance.↵
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Thank you for your cooperation.↵

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Hello, George,

I would like to order the following. Please send me an invoice if you see no issue with them.

The recent depreciation of yen has been eating most of our profits out.
Is there any item that you could offer any discount for?
If possible, I would like to have the invoice with the discounted prices.

I hope to continue business with you, and also hope to increase the amount of our purchase.

I would appreciate if you could name as many items as possible that sells well yet are inexpensive for us to buy.

Also I would be glad if you would lower the prices to declar on the invoice to include in the package for customs clearance.

元の翻訳
KIMUさん申し訳ありませんでした。週末は外出していました。速達発送で請求書をお送りしました。こちらでフォームにすべて記入するので、送り先住所が必要になります。また、税関への申請の際のご希望額を教えてください。ほとんどの方は50.00未満と仰いますが、あなた次第です。
よい日曜日をお過ごしください。

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KIMUさん申し訳ありませんでした。週末は外出していました。速達発送で請求書をお送りしました。こちらでフォームにすべて記入するので、送り先住所が必要になります。また、税関への申請の際のご希望額を教えてください。ほとんどの方は50.00未満と仰いますが、あなた次第です。
よい日をお過ごしください。sandy

元の翻訳
yamahaya88102012 様

こんにちは、ハヤト。

遅れたのは気にしないで。このメールを打っている今、オーストラリアの中で僕が住んでいる地域は午前2時だから。

うん、Paypalは合ってるよ。

数年前はパワーレンジャーのファンだったんだけど、今はスーパー戦隊を見ながらパワーレンジャーのおもちゃやショーもチェックしてるんだ。仮面ライダー〇〇〇にも興味があるけど、他のシーズンはそれほどでもないかな。

他のおもちゃに関しては、価格には送料も含まれているの？　たとえば、ガオベアーとガオポーラーのセットを買ってガオイカロスと一緒に郵送してもらうことにしたら、合計は$170+$?+$40でいくらになるの？

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yamahaya88102012 様

こんにちは、ハヤト。

遅れたのは気にしないで。このメールを打っている今、オーストラリアの中で僕が住んでいる地域は午前2時だから。

うん、Paypalは合ってるよ。

数年前はパワーレンジャーのファンだったんだけど、今はスーパー戦隊を見ながらパワーレンジャーのおもちゃや番組もチェックしてるんだ。仮面ライダー〇〇〇にも興味があるけど、他のシリーズはそれほどでもないかな。

他のおもちゃに関しては、価格には送料も含まれているの？　たとえば、ガオベアーとガオポーラーのセットを買ってガオイカロスと一緒に郵送してもらうことにしたら、合計は$170+$?+$40でいくらになるの？

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us.
As I mentioned in the notes, the item will be shipped in 14-21 working days by standard shipping. The arrival can be delay due to the process in the Customs.
I would refund all the price including the shipping fee if you want to cancel the order.
Please refuse to receive the item on arrival and contact us in that case.
The refund will be after our confirming the refusal of the item of after the item would be arrived to us.
It is already being shipped. Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for contacting us.
As I mentioned in the notes, the item will be shipped in 14-21 working days by standard shipping. The arrival can delay due to the process in the Customs.
I would refund all the price including the shipping fee if you want to cancel the order.
Please refuse to receive the item on arrival and contact us in that case.
The refund will be made after our confirming the refusal of the item or after the item has arrived to us.
It is already being shipped. Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Hello.

The ordered item was shiped to:

SooYoung Kim
541 Las Palmas Dr.
Irvine, CA 92602
United States

Please look forward to arrival.
Thank you.

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Hello.

The ordered item was shipped to:

SooYoung Kim
541 Las Palmas Dr.
Irvine, CA 92602
United States

Please look forward to arrival!!
Thank you!!

元の翻訳
Is aunty Kazuko healing from tiredness of all the travel?
I assume that Machiko will be busy for a while as Robert family's moving to Boston.

We are looking forward seeing everyone by visiting Boston or Hawaii one day.
Anyway, I am happy that I can keep in touch with Machiko by email and so on.

Sorry for being late, but I send you some photos.

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Is aunty Kazuko healing from tiredness of all the travel?
I assume that Machiko will be busy for a while as Robert family's moving to Boston.

We are looking forward seeing everyone again by visiting Boston or Hawaii one day.
Anyway, I am happy that I can keep in touch with Machiko by email and so on.

Sorry for being late, but I will send you some photos.