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元の翻訳
Hello.
I have not received product yet and I am worried about it very much.
Please check its devlivery.
Thank you.

修正後
Hello.
I have not received the product yet and I am worried about it very much.
Please check its delivery status.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
How long does it takes to deliver this product to Japan?
I would like you to deliver within 1 week but is it possible?

Best Regards,

修正後
How long does it take to deliver this product to Japan?
I would like you to deliver within 1 week but is it possible?

Best Regards,

元の翻訳
Therefor,as a starter how about the concept of introduction of Japanese culture using the images of your products .

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Therefor, as a starter, how about the concept of introduction of Japanese culture using the images of your products?

元の翻訳
Good Day.
Thank you for contacting us.

Can you advise on the wholesale price of each product?
(Since the prices would depend on the quantities, I am planning to buy around 5 of each product)
-P150
-S320
-P420

In addition, I have one more question. I came across the P420 on your netshop and it was showing the P430 with a P420 product code. So can you advise which product is being sold?

Thank you very much.

修正後
Good Day.
Thank you for contacting us.

Can you advise on the wholesale price of each product?
(Since the prices would depend on the quantities, I am planning to buy around 5 of each product)
-P150
-S320
-P420

In addition, I have one more question. I came across the P420 on your online store and it was showing the P430 with a P420 product code. So can you advise which product is being sold?

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、行方不明の商品に関して、Royal Mailからのクレームと、返金の手続きを喜んでさせていただきます。ただ、心配なのは、返金の手続きの後に、あなたが商品を受け取ったることを想定すると、手続きができません。
商品は、いずれ到着するはずです。商品発送時に、送料が高めの信用できる方法を選んでおくべきでした。今回の事は、レッスンとして学びました。
あなたが、商品の到着を、もうしばらくお待ちいただけるようでしたら、現在の時点では何も手続きをする必要がありません。なぜ箱が開けられ、お客様がIMで、商品の発送状況について質問できなかったのか分かりません。

もし、その方法でそちらが満足されるようでしたら、 Resolution Centerよりメッセージを送り、売り手側にその旨をお伝えください。もし、このオファーを受け付けられない場合は、私どもがあなたに、満足していただける解決策を、メッセージで売り手側に送ることのお手伝いをさせていただきます。

修正後
こんにちは、行方不明の商品に関して、Royal Mailからのクレームと、返金の手続きを喜んでさせていただきます。ただ、心配なのは、返金の手続きの後に、あなたが商品を受け取ったとして、また送金することを想定すると、手続きができません。
商品は、いずれ到着するはずです。商品発送時に、送料が高めの信用できる方法を選んでおくべきでした。今回の事は、レッスンとして学びました。
あなたが、商品の到着を、もうしばらくお待ちいただけるようでしたら、現在の時点では何も手続きをする必要がありません。なぜケースが開けられ、お客様がIMで、商品の発送状況について質問できなかったのか分かりません。

もし、その方法でそちらが満足されるようでしたら、 Resolution Centerよりメッセージを送り、売り手側にその旨をお伝えください。もし、このオファーを受け付けられない場合は、私どもがあなたに、満足していただける解決策を、メッセージで売り手側に送ることのお手伝いをさせていただきます。

元の翻訳
Please make the payment with your credit card this time.

修正後
I will make the payment with my credit card this time.

元の翻訳
Good day!

I'm very sorry for the late reply.

I have finished shipping the item.

Sellers really take importance of the customer's assessment since it affects our lives.

Won't you consider editing the assessment you wrote?

We would gladly cope with your demands, so we would like to ask you to edit your assessment.

修正後
Good day!

I'm very sorry for the late reply.

I have finished shipping the item.

Sellers really take importance of the customer's feedback since it affects our lives.

Won't you consider editing the feedback you wrote?

We would gladly cope with your demands, so we would like to ask you to edit your feedback.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
We have set a delivery period by taking into consideration the tariff issue, problems concerning the lithium-ion batteries as well as the delivery price.
Hence, as the delivery schedule has been fixed, we would be unable to process the deliver for your case.
Should we do that, we would unfortunately be making a loss.
As such, we regret to inform you that we have to cancel the job.

修正後
Thank you for your email.
We have set a delivery period by taking into consideration the tariff issue, problems concerning the lithium-ion batteries as well as the delivery price.
Hence, as the delivery schedule has been fixed, we would be unable to process the deliver for your case.
Should we do that, we would unfortunately be making a loss.
As such, we regret to inform you that we have to cancel the order.

元の翻訳
商品は５つ星のもので、新品と考えられます。一度売却され、何らかの理由で返品されました。一般的に考えられる理由としては、注文または出荷の際のサイズ・型違い、もしくは移動中に生じた外装への損傷のためでしょう。

５つ星の商品はこのように申し分のない状態ですので、ご友人またはご家族への贈り物にすることができます。

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商品は５つ星のもので、未使用の新品と考えられます。一度売却され、何らかの理由で返品されました。一般的に考えられる理由としては、注文または出荷の際のサイズ・型違い、もしくは移動中に生じた外装への損傷のためでしょう。

５つ星の商品はこのように申し分のない状態ですので、ご友人またはご家族への贈り物にすることができます。

元の翻訳
When you are trying to find information concerning Japan (pop or traditional culture of manga, anime, etc.), what problems do you have?

-I don't know sites are good to view
-I do know sites, but they don't have the information I want
-There are no sites where fellow users can freely exchange information from Japan
-I don't just want to see images, I'd like to know a bit more about their background, etc.
-I want sites designed especially for smartphones
-There are no sites in my native language
-Other (please use the Comments column)

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When you are trying to find information concerning Japan (pop or traditional culture of manga, anime, etc.), what problems do you have?

-I don't know which sites to look
-I do know sites, but they don't have the information I want
-There are no sites where fellow users can freely exchange information on Japan
-I don't just want to see images, I'd like to know a bit more about their background, etc.
-I want sites designed especially for smartphones
-There are no sites in my native language
-Other (please use the Comments column)

元の翻訳
Thank you for your mail.
We can ship to US.
Please check the attached drawing.
In some cases the shapes of the actual parts are different from the ones shown on the attached photo, but if the item number is correct, you don’t have to worry.

The price shown on the site does not include tax.
The tax-inclusive price is as follows.

Besides the above price, the shipping cost is required.
You can choose EMS or DHL as a shipping method.

You may select your convenient payment method from the following choices.

If you want to place an order, please inform us of your shipping address as well as your favorable forwarder by return.
We will calculate the shipping cost and let you know.

修正後
Thank you for your email.
We can ship to US.
Please check the attached drawing.
In some cases the shapes of the actual parts are different from the ones shown on the attached photo, but if the item number is correct, you don’t have to worry.

The price shown on the site does not include tax.
The tax-inclusive price is as follows.

Besides the above price, the shipping cost is required.
You can choose EMS or DHL as a shipping method.

You may select your convenient payment method from the following choices.

If you want to place an order, please inform us of your shipping address as well as your favorable forwarder by return.
We will calculate the shipping cost and let you know.