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Selling And Selection of products

Selling Products ( Way Of Selling Products)

In Amazon, the seller is not only Amazon itself but also Amazon allows public people and ordinary enterprises to sell products by using Amazon's market place.

Sellers have the right to sell products at products management page. that we call as "Amazon seller central".

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Selling And Selection of products

Selling Products ( How to sell Products)

In Amazon, the seller is not only Amazon itself but also public people and ordinary enterprises to sell products by using Amazon's market place.

Sellers have the right to sell products at products management page. that we call as "Amazon seller central".

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"point site using HAPITASU"
-yahoo auction
-yahoo shopping
-rakuten

If you find a good item, you can do through the point site of HAPITASU.
http://hapitas.jp/

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"Using the point site HAPITASU"
-yahoo auction
-yahoo shopping
-rakuten

If you find a good item, you can do through the point site of HAPITASU.
http://hapitas.jp/

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Good afternoon,
Thank you for the reply.
And thank you for your understanding.
I am pleased as well to make acquaintance with you through ebay.
I will continue working hard for a better business relationship.
Also, if you have any enquiries regarding the products, please free feel to ask anytime.
Please pardon my poor English :)

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Good afternoon,
Thank you for the reply.
And thank you for your understanding.
I am pleased as well to make acquaintance with you through ebay.
I will continue working hard for a better business relationship.
Also, if you have any enquiries regarding the products, please free feel to ask anytime.
Please pardon my poor English. lol

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Daichi Miura Live Performance 「DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER」

http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv192267123

※Time shift period: 30 Days
※ International viewing is possible
※Twitter hashtag: #三浦大知

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Daichi Miura Live Performance 「DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER」

http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv192267123

*Time shift period: 30 Days
* International viewing is possible
*Twitter hashtag: #三浦大知

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Date: September 15 (Holiday/Monday)
PART 1 20:00〜21:50
PART 2 22:00〜24:00
Navigator: Sascha (J-WAVE navigator)
Presented by SUNSTAR Ora2

People who came to the event must listen! Also, even people who couldn't come can feel the J-WAVE LIVE 2000+14.

For radio: FM81.3MHz
For PC/Smartphone: http://radiko.jp/#FMJ

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Date: September 15 (Holiday/Monday)
PART 1 20:00-21:50
PART 2 22:00-24:00
Navigator: Sascha (J-WAVE navigator)
Presented by SUNSTAR Ora2

People who came to the event must listen! Also, even people who couldn't come can feel the J-WAVE LIVE 2000+14.

For radio: FM81.3MHz
For PC/Smartphone: http://radiko.jp/#FMJ

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カメラのホストネームをどうも有り難うございます。DNSサーバによると、NVRネットワークの連結部分?における貴殿のお客様環境設定が何かを確かめる必要があるため、スナップ写真を撮って頂けませんか？彼はプライマリーDNSサーバしか使用されないのでしょうか？それともLAN1とLAN2、もしくはLAN1のみにおいてセカンダリーDNSサーバも使用されるのでしょうか？確認をお願い致します。我々は新たなファームウェアサポーティングカメラのDDNS URLが来月中旬に発表されると考えており、私は貴殿にもこの情報を知って頂きたく存じます。私がURLを入手しましたら、貴殿にご報告致します。
今しばらくのご辛抱をお願い致します。宜しくお願い致します。

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カメラのホストネームをどうも有り難うございます。DNSサーバに関しまして、NVRネットワークの連結部分?における貴殿のお客様環境設定が何かを確かめる必要があるため、スナップ写真を撮って頂けませんか？彼はプライマリーDNSサーバしか使用されないのでしょうか？それともLAN1とLAN2、もしくはLAN1のみにおいてセカンダリーDNSサーバも使用されるのでしょうか？確認をお願い致します。我々は新たなファームウェアサポーティングカメラのDDNS URLが来月中旬に発表されると考えており、私は貴殿にもこの情報を知って頂きたく存じます。私がURLを入手しましたら、貴殿にご報告致します。
今しばらくのご辛抱をお願い致します。宜しくお願い致します。

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This customer understands our business.
If we decided to move the product to a wear house and remove the label, it will cost money and take time.
Could we trust the costumer, and let him (or her) remove the label themselves?
Also, in the case of cutting the label in half, could you do like the attached photo? It will prove the product is real because the pattern of the edge of the label shows that.
This photo is from the store's home page.

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This customer understands our business.
If we decide to move the product to a wear house and remove the label, it will cost money and take time.
Could we trust the costumer, and let him (or her) remove the label themselves?
Also, in the case of cutting the label in half, could you do like the attached photo? It will prove the product is real because the pattern of the edge of the label shows that.
This photo is from the store's home page.

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The head with a screw seen in the image is the modified version which plate on toe-dent is held with the screw. This modification was made in responce to the accident happened when PGA player used the initial model. The player was disqualified because the part came off.
In Japan, it is sold as Version 2, and is very popular.
I will ask a cliant who wants lower loft, so will you send us a image of the part, where the toe-dent is?

TourIssue products which is currently popular in Japan are; RBZ, RBZ Stage2, R1, SLDR series 1W and FW. Can you get these?

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The head with a screw seen in the image is the modified version which plate on toe-dent is held with the screw. This modification was made in response to the accident happened when PGA player used the initial model. The player was disqualified because the part came off.
In Japan, it is sold as Version 2, and is very popular.
I will ask a client who wants lower loft, so will you send us a image of the part, where the toe-dent is?

TourIssue products which is currently popular in Japan are; RBZ, RBZ Stage2, R1, SLDR series 1W and FW. Can you get these?

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I apologize for making you feel uncomfortable.
I checked the shipping log again, but it was already shipped from our company.
It should be stopped at customs or get lost somewhere during being shipped.
Since it was shipped via SAL package that doesn't provide the trucking service, I am afraid that I couldn't truck it anymore and couldn't inform when you will receive it.

As you claimed, I am concerned that a few month has passed, and I will refund you.

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I apologize for making you feel uncomfortable.
I checked the shipping log again, but it was already shipped from our company.
It should be stopped at customs or get lost somewhere during the shipping.
Since it was shipped via SAL package that doesn't provide the trucking service, I am afraid that I couldn't truck it anymore and couldn't inform when you will receive it.

As you claimed, I am concerned that a few month has passed, and I will refund you.

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According to Japan Post, it might take more than 3 weeks depending on the region which might be delivered. ( * if it takes more than a month, that might be a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around 3 weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrives at the adrress?


Here the office number:
111111111

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According to Japan Post, it might take more than 3 weeks depending on the region to which the product is delivered. ( * if it takes more than a month, it might be because of a shipping trouble.)

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It takes around 3 weeks until Japan Post would get the international tracking result.

Could you ask the call center if the merchandise already arrived at the address?


Here the office number:
111111111

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I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

After checking your payment, I sent the item by EMS as soon as possible, but it seems that it was stuck in custom. Though I cannot figure out the reason, it is stopped. It depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is usual problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive

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I am sorry that I reply to you late.
I had the days off on Saturday and Sunday.

After checking your payment, I sent the item by EMS as soon as possible, but it seems that it was stuck in custom. Though I cannot figure out the reason, it is stopped. It depends on the feeling of the customs officers. It is usual problem for international business and we are very sorry that we cannot work out a solution. Please be patient as it might take some time for the item to arrive.

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2点分の入金がまだ確認されておりませんので、次の商品を代理購入することはできません。
we can't confirm payment for 2 items yet, we can't purchace next items below for you.
今回もご入金が失敗した場合はお取り引きを中止させていただきます。
If you don't complete payment at this time, we will cancel this deal.
私もかなり長い期間ご入金をお待ちしておりました。
we have been waiting for your payment for a while.
オークションに出品しますのでそちらで購入をご検討下さい。
we are going to put those items on auction, we recommend you purchace through our auction.

私は支払いを待つことができます。あなたの都合がいい時にご購入下さい。ご入金をお待ちしております。
we can wait for your payment. please make the payment whenever you can. we are looking forward to doing business with you.

ラインストーンが付いたシールです。
It is sticker attached rhindstones.
ふっくらとした厚みのあるシールです。
It is thick plumpy sticker.
いろんなスイーツがデザインされたシールが入っています。
there are variety of sweets design sticker enclosed.

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2点分の入金がまだ確認されておりませんので、次の商品を代理購入することはできません。
We can't confirm payment for 2 items yet, we can't purchace next items below for you.
今回もご入金が失敗した場合はお取り引きを中止させていただきます。
If you don't complete payment at this time, we will cancel this deal.
私もかなり長い期間ご入金をお待ちしておりました。
We have been waiting for your payment for a while.
オークションに出品しますのでそちらで購入をご検討下さい。
We are going to put those items on auction, we recommend you purchace through our auction.

私は支払いを待つことができます。あなたの都合がいい時にご購入下さい。ご入金をお待ちしております。
We can wait for your payment. please make the payment whenever you can. we are looking forward to doing business with you.

ラインストーンが付いたシールです。
It is sticker attached rhindstones.
ふっくらとした厚みのあるシールです。
It is thick plumpy sticker.
いろんなスイーツがデザインされたシールが入っています。
There are variety of sweets design sticker enclosed.

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The way of art is far, as though it Is endless," he taught. Teacher sometimes made a quiet talk also and the classroom fell silent. Sure, Teacher was trained to shed tears freely as he wished, so he used the skill in his readings from time to time. We studied how you could shed tears as you like, but no one could succeed in doing so.

(1940, Masuji Ibuse)

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The way of art is far, as though it is endless," he taught. Teacher sometimes made a quiet talk and the classroom fell silent. Sure, Teacher was trained to shed tears freely as he wished, so he used the skill in his readings from time to time. We studied how you could shed tears as you like, but no one could succeed in doing so.

(1940, Masuji Ibuse)