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元の翻訳
もちろん、日本における何もかもが輝いているわけではない。ここにおけるエコシステム(しかし東南アジアよりも関係性の深い)はバレーよりも素晴らしくはない。東京ベースのスタートアップもRobert氏とMatthew氏が沢山旅をしたが、それはGengoが一日も早く国際的な企業になることに焦点を置いていた。

クリック、ブーム、驚嘆

争いは終わった。その日、Gengoは150万以上の言葉を翻訳していた。その顧客の中にはAlibabaやYouTube,RakutenやTripadvisorもいた。

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もちろん、日本における何もかもが輝いているわけではない。ここにおけるエコシステム(しかし東南アジアよりも関係性の深い)はバレーよりも素晴らしくはない。東京ベースのスタートアップになるにはRobert氏とMatthew氏が沢山旅をしなければならないが、それはGengoが一日も早く国際的な企業になることに焦点を置いていた。

クリック、ブーム、驚嘆

争いは終わった。その日、Gengoは150万以上の言葉を翻訳していた。その顧客の中にはAlibabaやYouTube,RakutenやTripadvisorもいた。

元の翻訳
スタートアップの地として、素晴らしい場所、東京
2009年11月、RobertとMatthewは友人や家族から、事業を起こすために30000ドルを得た。
500のスタートアップのＣＥＯのおかげで、それに次いで760000ドルの資金繰り2010年1月に起こした

企業家から10000ドルを受け取ったDave McClureはより多くの資金を稼ぐためにバレーへと旅に出た。
同じ年のその後、Gengoは900000ドルを稼いだ。2011年9月、Ａｔｏｍｉｃｏからの52500000ドルは2013年4月に120000000ドルになった

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スタートアップの地として、素晴らしい場所、東京
2009年11月、RobertとMatthewは友人や家族から、事業を起こすために30000ドルを得た。
500のスタートアップのＣＥＯであるDave McClureのおかげで、それに次いで760000ドルの資金繰りが2010年1月にあった。

企業家に10000ドルを渡してDave McClureはより多くの資金を稼ぐためにバレーへと旅に出た。
同じ年のその後、Gengoは900000ドルを稼いだ。2011年9月、Ａｔｏｍｉｃｏからの52500000ドルは2013年4月に120000000ドルになった

元の翻訳
私達はPDXを止めることができなかった。 LAXのタイルは60年代以来で、これらのソックスはその色の大胆な配色方法に対する敬意です。

注：これらは3足で１セットです。例えばスモールサイズを注文すると、青、オレンジ、グリーンのLAXソックスを1足ずつ受け取ります。

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私達はPDXを止めることができませんでした。 LAXのタイルは60年代以来で、これらのソックスはその色の大胆な配色方法に対する敬意です。

注：これらは3足で１セットです。例えばスモールサイズを注文すると、青、オレンジ、グリーンのLAXソックスを1足ずつ受け取ります。

元の翻訳
I am looking at buying either A or B. If I do go ahead with the purchase I will use PayPal.

How will the item be packaged? Will it be packed securely to prevent scratching or damage?
If I purchase from Japan, do I still have to pay the 6.25% MA State Tax?
Does it include the genuine foot switch?
Can you discount a little bit from either A or B?

In the future, if I purchase large quantities of amplifiers from you shop, would it be possible to get a better price?

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I am looking at buying either A or B. If I do go ahead with the purchase I will use PayPal.

How will the item be packaged? Will it be packed securely to prevent scratching or damage?
If I purchase from Japan, do I still have to pay the 6.25% MA State Tax?
Does it include the genuine foot switch?
Can you discount a little bit from the price of either A or B?

In the future, if I purchase large quantities of amplifiers from you shop, would it be possible to get a better price?

元の翻訳
Our partner from DHL has contacted me.

When you are filling out the form of air waybill of DHL,
there is a space for the payer account number.
Could you please write 955757666 for Receiver、Payer Account number ↵
on the space of "Charge to".
Also, please let me know the item/cargo number.

The Japanese website has been nearly completed.
We just need to create pages of Facebook and for purchasing.
We will need to test run of this site, so please contact me
when you are ready with DNS.

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Our partner from DHL has contacted me.

When you fill out the form of air waybill of DHL,
please notice that there is a space for the payer account number.
Could you please write "Receiver" on "Charge to" and 955757666 on Payer Account number.
Also, please let me know the item/cargo number.

The Japanese website has been nearly completed.
We just need to create pages of Facebook and for purchasing.
We will need to test run of this site, so please contact me
when you are ready with DNS.

元の翻訳
For plastics, use this, antiseptic solution.
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"Oh my god, even the painting is largely come off."
”It 's good time to through it away, anyway."
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Can people protect us just with that words? "
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Morita is always crazy what he does.).
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Erichin, I will by that underwear, what about you, Erichin?
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I think it is a terrible experience, if it happened because of such a reason of Daigo.

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For plastics, use this, antiseptic solution.
--
"Oh my god, even the painting is largely come off."
”It 's good time to through it away, anyway."
--
Can people protect us just with that words? "
--
Morita is always crazy what he does.
--
Erichin, I will by that underwear, what about you, Erichin?
--
I think it is a terrible experience, if it happened because of such a reason of Daigo.

元の翻訳
It is because there is a problem in the way of update.
At first, update itself is very slow fundamentally.
This will be trouble for the user who is waiting for a long time. I am waiting for publishing my website about a month.
And also, it has not been an update yet, in spite of saying firstly to have finished update last week or the week before last week.
Although I checked for updates many times.
It is a pain for me to be waiting every day.And I think it is strange of accepting customized freelance without updating.

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It is because there is a problem in the way of update.
At first, update itself is very slow fundamentally.
This will be trouble for the user who is waiting for a long time. I am waiting for publishing my website about a month.
And also, it has not been updated yet, in spite of saying firstly to have finished update last week or the week before.
Although I checked for updates many times.
It is a pain for me to be waiting every day. And I think it is strange of accepting customized freelance without updating.

元の翻訳
It may be difficult for the parcel to reach you on the designated date if you want to receive the product as soon as possible.

I will be on a business trip from tomorrow so the shipping will be later than it usually be. Moreover, because it is Christmas season, it is expected that the delivery time would be longer than it usually takes.

The scheduled shipping date is December 16. If it does not suit you, may I aske to to cancel this order please?

If you order again after you come back from the trip, I can promise you that I will ship the product as soon as I receive the order.

Thank you very much.

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It may be difficult for the parcel to reach you on the designated date if you want to receive the product as soon as possible.

I will be on a business trip from tomorrow so the shipping will be later than it usually is. Moreover, because it is Christmas season, it is expected that the delivery time would be longer than it usually takes.

The scheduled shipping date is December 16. If it does not suit you, may I ask to cancel this order please?

If you order again after you come back from the trip, I can promise you that I will ship the product as soon as I receive the order.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you.
I guess you are supposed to return a product of130 dollars, which has been lost the other day, to my account, but it is not reflected yet. I thought that you could send them out together last week when you had another shipment. What is the situation right now? We are looking forward to your quick reply. thank you.

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Thank you.
I guess you are supposed to return a product of130 dollars, which was lost the other day, to my account, but it is not reflected yet. I thought that you could send them out together last week when you had another shipment. What is the situation right now? We are looking forward to your quick reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
an introduction to friends.
It is setting...
Automatically change to WiFi
when getting the information of position, it would raise the accuracy by turning on the WiFi.
when getting the information of position, the situation of the WiFi can not change automatically.
It could not download the photos.
Please try it again in the environment of good reception.
By the each button below, you can send your friends the download URL of 「Kiss」app.
To send by LINE
To send by short-mail
To send by other message apps
To select the sending-mail app
the download URL of 「Kiss」app

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an introduction to friends.
It is setting...
Automatically change to WiFi
when getting the information of position, it would raise the accuracy by turning on the WiFi.
when getting the information of position, the situation of the WiFi can not change automatically.
It could not download the photos.
Please try it again in the environment of good reception.
By the each button below, you can send your friends the download URL of 「Kiss」app.
To send by LINE
To send by short-mail
To send by other message apps
To select the sending-mail app
the download URL of "Kiss" app