Tania Suhen (tania) — もらったレビュー

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How was that?
Besides, there are many projects still need to be done by Kyoto JC, but I will consider it a convenience of time.

Above, I'm terminating Kyoto JC's referral. Thank you for your attention.

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I hope you enjoyed my introduction to Kyoto JC.
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There are many more projects that Kyoto JC is working on, but I would like to stop here due to limited time.

Thank you for your attention.

元の翻訳
The purse I bought last time, I've ask for return and repayment, but when will I get the money back?
I think the return goods have been arrived.
Regards.

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I bought a purse last time and asked for returning it and refund. When will I get the money back?
I suppose the returned goods have arrived there.
Regards.

元の翻訳
<br></br>Parts like that are eventually, will be human's experiences greatest optimization

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<br></br>For those matters, after all, empirical know-hows works best for optimization.

元の翻訳
if the shift set is a complicated industry, human repeated troubles is serious.

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If the work type has a complicated shift setting, assigning labor is the serious problem.

元の翻訳
Thanks for contacting me.
I'm glad to get 20 for 360$.
Make sure to let us buy it.
How long does it take to arrive in Florida?
Also, can I buy this product again in the future?
Thank you.

Because I've never transfered money to foreign country before, I'll transfer 10$ for practice.
That's why, please give/tell me the information.
1000$ is the minimum quantity order. I agree!
I've thought to purchase about 2000$ on April 1st.
I'll try to list it one time.
I'm waiting to hear from you!!

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Thanks for contacting me.
I'm glad to get 20 for $360.
Please allow us to buy it.
How long does it take to arrive in Florida?
Also, can I buy this product again in the future?
Thank you.

Because I've never transfered money to a foreign country before, I'll transfer $10 for practice.
So please tell me the information.
$1,000 is the minimum quantity order. Understood!
I'm thinking to purchase about $2,000 on April 1st.
I'll try to list it one time.
I'm waiting to hear from you!!

元の翻訳
Long time no see.
How are you?
Do you still remeber me?

Why? Why are you in this company?
I was surprised.
Had you quit your previous company, AAA?
Even if I want to search a good Mobile Trading System.
What do you know?

How do you do?
Long time no see.
Thanks for visiting NZ last year.
How does the operational condition there? on NZ?

We are finishing WEBsite's set up and features this month
start from next month, we'll do marketing in a full scale.

From now on, I want to ask your help in many things.
Thank you.

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Long time no see.
How are you?
Do you still remeber me?

Why? Why are you in this company?
I was surprised.
Have you quit your previous company, AAA?
Even if I want to search a good Mobile Trading System.
What do you know?

How do you do?
Long time no see.
Thanks for visiting NZ last year.
How does the operational condition there? on NZ?

We are finishing WEBsite's set up and features this month.
start from next month, we'll do marketing in a full scale.

From now on, I want to ask your help in many things.
Thank you.