Paul Dots (premiumdotz) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending us the registration and documents of w8-BEN recently.
However, when we let the stock company read those documents received from your company, they asked us these 2 questions.

1. What is the TIN/SS# - Social Security and Tax Identification Number of the company?
2. Account type means “Retail” or “IRA”?

It seems that without the above data, we cannot transfer to DRS.
I feel sorry but I hope you can reply us as soon as possible.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for sending us the registration and documents of w8-BEN recently.
However, the stock company asked us two questions after reading the documents from your company.

1. What is the TIN/SS# - Social Security and Tax Identification Number of the company?
2. Does account type mean “Retail” or “IRA”?

It seems that without the above-mentioned data, we cannot transfer to DRS.
I'm very sorry for the trouble, but I hope you can immediately send us a reply.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am now informing you the very important information so please finish reading all the letter.

Thank you for your purchase of () but I am so sorry that we mistakenly sent you the bigger one that you ordered so we are currently cancelling the merchandise to our office. For that, we couldn't deal with the budget that we had so we can't send it to you anymore. Could you please cancel your purchase by yourself? If you canceled it, we will send you 30dollers worth Amazon Gift Card for the return. I am very sorry for your inconvinience.

修正後
I have an important announcement to make, so please be sure to read this until the very end.

Thank you for purchasing ().↵
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We have sent the item, which you have purchased. However, due to our mistake it was sent back because it was too big. ↵
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Since we weren't able to get the planned shipment method, the deficit amount in the amount that you paid is very big and so, we are not able to send the item.↵
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This may be a very selfish request, but may we ask you to cancel the order?↵
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We will give you an amazon gift certificate worth 300 dollars if you would cancel it.

元の翻訳
■The sales of this item has already ended and we only have a few left. I can't make any further discount as the price has already been so much lower than the other exhibitors'. We'll ship free if you buy them in quantity. They will be covered by insurance and can be tracked. Please give it a thought.

■I have purchased ◯◯ the other day and would like to know if it has already been shipped. I'd like to check the delivery status so let me know the tracking number.

■Please let me know if you have not shipped the item yet. I'd like to cancel my order if the shipping is delayed. Please make the refund immediately.

■How long will it take to be shipped?

修正後
■The sale of this item has already ended and we only have a few left. I can't make any further discount as the price has already been so much lower than the other exhibitors'. We will make the shipping fee free if you buy many of them in one go. They will be covered by insurance and can be tracked. Please give it a thought.

■I have purchased ◯◯ the other day and would like to know if it has already been shipped. I'd like to check the delivery status so let me know the tracking number.

■Please let me know if you have not shipped the item yet. I'd like to cancel my order if the shipping is delayed. Please make the refund immediately.

■How long will it take to be shipped?