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These days I haven't been practicing any musical instruments as much.

During rush hours, Japanese trains are more than packed.

We'll have to walk quite a distance to transfer at this station.

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These days, I haven't been practicing any musical instruments that much.

The trains in Japan are really packed with people.

The distance that we have to travel to transfer to this station is quite long.

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Kyoto Animation, producer of this anime, used to create many animation for girls peaceful everyday lives.

However, Free! has mostly men for its main character, so it has gathered a lot of attention since before it was televised.

Now it has been televised and they didn't let us down. It became an anime with a lot of fans in Japan too.

Please check it out freely if you haven't since the stories are not complicated nor sad!

You will want to watch the second, if you watch the first one!

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Kyoto Animation, the producer of this anime, used to create many animation that usually centers around the peaceful everyday lives of girls.

However, the main characters of Free! is mostly comprised of men, so it has gathered a lot of attention even before it was televised.

Our expectations were surely met when this anime started to broadcast. This anime has gathered a lot of fans in Japan as well.

The plot is not complicated nor is it sad, so for the people who haven't seen it yet, please check it out anytime.

You will want to watch the second episode, if you have watched the first one!

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The goods that were initially stopped by the custom clearance have finally arrived. Thank you for your kind cooperation.

By the way, the shipping fee seems to be gradually increasing recently. Do you know why is this so?
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The package that encountered a problem with the customs clearance has safely arrived. Thank you for your cooperation.

By the way, the shipping fee seems to be gradually increasing recently. Do you know the reason behind this?
The example is found below.