翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

大変魅力的なオファーをいただきまして、本当にありがとうございます。
こちらこそ、この数年の取引を感謝しています。

さて、取り急ぎ欲しい商品をいくつか列挙させていただきました。
商品のURLを載せましたので、ご確認ください。
購入可能であれば、改めて数量をご連絡します。それぞれ最低4個以上は購入させていただきます。

Tour Issue品以外の品にも興味がありますので、改めてご連絡させていただくかもしれません。


ARPについては理解しました。ARPのスタンプはどこに押されていますか？

英語

I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're possible to buy, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units of each of the entries.

I'm also interested in items that are not Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where does the ARP stamp have to be pressed?

レビュー ( 2 )

mooominはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/06 08:01:13

分かり易く訳されていると思います。勉強になりました。【取り急ぎ】ですが、【urgently】だと意味が少し強すぎるのかなとも思いました。【quickly】くらいが妥当でしょうか？

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/06 14:28:26

元の翻訳
I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're possible to buy, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units of each of the entries.

I'm also interested in items that are not Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where does the ARP stamp have to be pressed?

修正後
I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're available for purchasing, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units each of these items.

I'm also interested in items other than Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where is the ARP stamp affixed?