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元の翻訳
I have some requests.

-To release and share Favorite folders
-To create playlists
-To show the song title currently playing
-To show the play time of a song

It would be better if we can share and link the user's information on ABC script. If we can do so, I think it would be sold very much.

修正後
I have some requests.

-To release and share Favorite folders
-To create playlists
-To show the song title currently being played
-To show the duration of a song

It would be better if we can share and link the user's information on ABC script. If we can do so, I think it would have a great sale.

元の翻訳
The item has successfully arrived.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are broken.
Also, one of the bulb has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

修正後
The item has arrived successfully.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are bent.
Also, one of the bulbs has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

元の翻訳
The item has successfully arrived.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are broken.
Also, one of the bulb has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

修正後
The item has successfully arrived.
However, both light-emitting parts of the bulbs are broken.
Also, one of the bulbs has a big scratch on the light-emitting part.

元の翻訳
Please send me 10 of A as replacements for the defective product.

修正後
Please send me 10 pieces of A as a replacement for the defective products.

元の翻訳
Please send me 10 of A as replacements for the defective product.

修正後
Please send me 10 of A as replacements for the defective products.

元の翻訳
Sorry for bothering you while you are busy.
Referring to Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
I look forward to your reply.

修正後
Sorry for bothering you while you are busy.
With regard to Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
Looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Sorry for bothering you while you are busy.
Referring to Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
I look forward to your reply.

修正後
Sorry for bothering you when you are busy.
Regarding Mr./Ms. AAAAAAAA's case, could you tell me the progress?
I am looking forward to your reply.↵

元の翻訳
そのプレアンプはこれまでの数年間、街で一番評判が良い修理技師(次にそれを売る相手)が使っていたもので、あなたがおっしゃっているような問題もなかったので、少し腑に落ちない点もあります。ただ、eBayでの私の評判にも関わるし、完全に機能する状態で販売しましたが、ご指摘いただいた問題を自分で確認することができないので、修理にかかる費用をリファンドします。しかし、見積もりの$150というのは少し高いような気がします。その半分($75)にして欲しいとは言いませんが、$100のリファンドということでいかがでしょうか。
どちらにとっても円満に解決できれば嬉しいです。
ありがとうございます。

修正後
そのプレアンプはこれまでの数年間、街で一番評判が良い修理技師(次にそれを売る相手)が使っていたもので、あなたがおっしゃっているような問題もなかったので、少し腑に落ちない点もあります。ただ、eBayでの私の評判にも関わるし、完全に機能する状態で販売しましたが、ご指摘いただいた問題を自分で確認することができないので、修理にかかる費用をリファンド(返金）します。しかし、見積もりの$150というのは少し高いような気がします。その半分($75)にして欲しいとは言いませんが、$100のリファンドということでいかがでしょうか。
どちらにとっても円満に解決できれば嬉しいです。
ありがとうございます。↵
↵

元の翻訳
Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this situation, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managening.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistake again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

修正後
Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this status S, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managing.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistakes again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.