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I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

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I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I will have to file a complaint to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as a seller.
Thank you.

元の翻訳

I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

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I want to return all 11 items after all.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to keep a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
For that reason, we don't want to bother you anymore and we'd like to cancel the 2 products that you inquired about and we will fully refund the money to you.
Please understand that we will refund by amazonUSA.
This time even though you like these products so much, we are terribly sorry that they can't be shipped due to the delivery problem.

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For that reason, we don't want to bother you anymore and we'd like to cancel the 2 products that you inquired about and we will fully refund the money to you.
Please be sure that we will refund by amazonUSA.
This time even though you like these products so much, we are terribly sorry that they can't be shipped due to the delivery problem.

元の翻訳
To deal with this issue, we'd like to contact and announce the estimated arrival date to the customers after shipment from now on.
Next, one of the reasons why the product still hasn't arrived is because things are kept at every nation's customs for inspection. Or it is because the customer doesn't go pay the tax incurred during verification procedures.
About this problem, we are thinking of talking things thoroughly with the customers in advance and then using the fulfillment service FBA.
Please tell us about what measure we should take from now on.
Thank you in advance.

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To deal with this issue, we'd like to contact and announce the estimated arrival date to customers after shipment from now on.
Next, one of the reasons why products don't arrive is because they are kept at each country's customs for inspection. Or it is because customers don't go pay the tax incurred during verification procedures.
Regarding this problem, we are thinking of talking things thoroughly with the customers in advance and then using the fulfillment service FBA.
Please tell us what measure we should take from now on.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
mo109013

(3) Donation to WWD Japan (World Wild Fun For Nature Japan)

Happinet

A conglomerate that becomes the core of Bandai Namco Group and holds the leading position in Japanese market as the toy wholesale business.

A leading company in wholesaling of games and DVD softwares. It's also very strong in character business as well as in music and video business.

The company serves as the distributor of home video game players like Xbox and Xbox 360 of Microsoft Corporation in Japan.

It also involved in the production of "Digital Monster (Digimon) Series" including "Digimon Adventure".

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mo109013

(3) Donation to WWD Japan (World Wild Fun For Nature Japan)

Happinet

A trading company conglomerate that becomes the core of Bandai Namco Group and holds the leading position in Japanese market as the toy wholesale business.

A leading company in wholesaling of games and DVD softwares. It's also very strong in character business as well as in music and video business.

The company serves as the distributor of home video game players like Xbox and Xbox 360 of Microsoft Corporation in Japan.

It also involved in the production of "Digital Monster (Digimon) Series" including "Digimon Adventure".

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mo109011

Shareholders with more than 100 stocks wil be presented with eBook coupons that allow to buy ebooks on "eBookJapan" website.
In order to make our customers enjoy collecting the eBook coupons every year, we are thinking of printing famous manga characters on the coupons.

WonderCorporation
The company that is developing "WonderGOO" entertainment stores mainly in Kanto region of Japan.
It deals with selling and purchasing products focusing on books, DVDs, music, video softwares and game softwares,..

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mo109011

Shareholders with 100 or more stocks will be presented with eBook coupons that allow to buy ebooks on "eBookJapan" website.
In order to make our customers enjoy collecting the eBook coupons every year, we are thinking of printing famous manga characters on them.

WonderCorporation
The company is developing "WonderGOO" entertainment stores mainly in Kanto region of Japan.
It deals with selling and purchasing products focusing on books, DVDs, music, video softwares and game softwares,..

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mo109005

Before we had focused on management of the nation's largest software download website "Vector", now we would like to make online game supply and operation our core business.
The 10,000 yen online game use ticket.

Below are the stockholder special benefits
Stockholders owned more than 100 stocks evenly get the 10,000 yen online game ticket used for PC.

(This applies to both browser game service and client/server online game service)

Toei Animation

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mo109005

Before we had focused on management of the nation's largest software download website "Vector", now we would like to make providing and operating online gameｓ our core business.
10,000 yen worth of online game use ticket.

Below are the stockholder special benefits
Stockholders owned more than 100 stocks evenly get the 10,000 yen online game ticket used for PC.

(This applies to both browser game service and client/server online game service)

Toei Animation

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mo105408

This page contains 5 bottle set of soy sauce that goes well with tamago-kake-gohan from "Shokunin Shoyu" manufacturer. You can buy carefully selected seasonal products of Odakyu department stores like gift, food, liquor, living stuff... by mail order through an official online shop which is operated by Odakyu department stores.

You can also make "Onsen eggs" by yourself.

Experiment with eggs How to make Onsen Eggs from "Recipes that help everyday"
We'd like to introduce the recipe of how to make the onsen eggs. And yet you can cook it easily by putting a jar inside when the rice is being kept warm. (I've tried many other ways to make Onsen eggs)

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mo105408

This page contains 5 bottle set of soy sauce that goes well with tamago-kake-gohan from "Shokunin Shoyu" manufacturer. You can buy carefully selected seasonal products of Odakyu department stores like gift, food, liquor, living goods by mail order through an official online shop which is operated by Odakyu department stores.

You can also make "Onsen eggs" by yourself.

Experiment with eggs How to make Onsen Eggs from "Recipes that help everyday"
We'd like to introduce the recipe of how to make the onsen eggs. And yet you can cook it easily by putting it inside the rice cooker when the rice is being kept warm. (I've tried many other ways to make Onsen eggs)

元の翻訳
Things you can only buy at hair salon.

There are many females that are ready to buy limited items or stuff bringing good use feeling in spite of the high price.

◎The important thing is a healthy scalp

Cuticle and aura are significant.

This is the secret that helps you protect the cuticle, take care of the surface of every single hair in order to give you beautiful hair.

The radiant glow that is like the aura from the angel will be the testament for the healthy hair you will get.

The most important things are good sleep and good nutrition.

There are many beauty items for hair out there, but after all the greatest secret to beautiful hair is a body in good physical condition.

Isn't this universal?

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Things you can only buy at a hair salon.

Many women are willing to buy limited items or stuff bringing good use ? feeling in spite of the high price.

◎The important thing is a healthy scalp

Cuticle and aura are significant.

This is the secret that helps you protect the cuticle, take care of the surface of every single hair in order to give you beautiful hair.

The radiant glow that is like the aura from the angel will be the testament for the healthy hair you will get.

The most important things are good sleep and good nutrition.

There are many beauty items for hair out there, but after all the greatest secret to beautiful hair is a body in good physical condition.

Isn't this universal?

元の翻訳
mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

The flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan are beautiful, and also has a high utilization value .

元の翻訳
mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful.

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

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mo105101

What Japanese people do to keep their hair black hair beautiful

The original hair color of Japanese people is black. Nowadays, there are a large number of people dying their hair with different color than natural hair color, but in recent years, the charm of natural black hair is being recognized again. So what is Japanese people's secret of keeping their black hair beautiful?

◎The Japanese traditional technique handed down from ancient times
・"Camellia-seed oil" as hair oil
The hair oil with 100% Camellia seeds extract.

It gives your hair a firm texture, helps keep moisture in the hair, and leaves you a smooth and shiny moisturized hair.

There will also be high utilization value of flowers from the evergreen trees native to Japan.

元の翻訳
The excellent product with soft fluffy cheese melted into hot curry.
There are baked curry shops everywhere so you might want to walk around to try and compare?
Just try going a little further from Mijoko Station
It's Shiokaze-go that faces towards Mekari Shrine!

After getting satisfied with the Mojiko Retro, we would like to recommend this "Mojiko Retro Train - Shiokaze-go" tour to anyone who still has time.
Connecting the Mekari area of Kanmon Straits and Mojiko Retro area, the train is operated during spring and summer vacation, on Saturdays, Sundays, and holidays from middle March to late November.

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An excellent dish with soft fluffy cheese melted into hot curry.
There are baked curry shops everywhere so you might want to walk around to try and compare?
Just try going a little further from Mijoko Station
It's Shiokaze-go that faces towards Mekari Shrine!

After getting satisfied with the Mojiko Retro, we would like to recommend this "Mojiko Retro Train - Shiokaze-go" tour to anyone who still has time.
Connecting the Mekari area of Kanmon Straits and Mojiko Retro area, the train is operated during spring and summer vacation, on Saturdays, Sundays, and holidays from middle March to late November.

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go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, is one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building are still being reused.

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go83105
It hasn't changed much since it was completed.
Daimaru Shinsaibashi store, which was built at the center of Midosuji, was one of the landmarks of Osaka.
The illumination here is just like in New York.
During Christmas season, the illumination lights up and creates a solemn atmosphere.

5. The old Daibiru Honkan Building
An office building which was rebuilt in 2013.
Completed in 1925.
It was considered the newest building at that time.
The building was constructed after Setsu Watanabe's design and is a large-scaled building with a Neo-Romanesque style.
Most of the exterior parts of the old building were reused.

元の翻訳
I'm thinking of buying it.
Below are my requests:
I'd like you to make URL so that it can change into Article ID but not Title name.
It's no problem if you revise the PHP file by yourself.
If you use Japanese for permalink and then share on sites like Twitter, it will turn into a long URL like below.
It's a really big demerit that you can only type 140 words on Twitter.
I think there are not only problems with the Japanese language but maybe also with German, Turkish, Vietnamese, etc...
One more thing is that I would appreciate it if you can add the category name onto the title of the category page.

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I'm thinking of buying it.
Below are my requests:
I'd like you to make URL so that it can change into Article ID but not Title name.
There will be no problem if you revise the PHP file by yourself.
If you use Japanese for permalink and then share on sites like Twitter, it will turn into a long URL like below.
It's a really big demerit that you can only type 140 words on Twitter.
I think there are not only problems with the Japanese language but maybe also with German, Turkish, Vietnamese, etc...
One more thing is that I would appreciate it if you can add the category name onto the title of the category page.