Hien Tran (luklak) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
ph62403
Lala Satalin Deviluke(To LOVEru -Toraburu-)
Mizuho Kazami (Please teacher!)
Tomalin (Teekyu)
Eris (Cat Plant Cutie/Let's go play: Bomb shells from the Sky)
-I'm an alien!
He insists he's an alien, but the main characters are doubtful.
Erio Tōwa (Electric Wave girl and Youthful boy)
Lucy Maria Misora (To Heart 2)
-Lastly...
No matter what generation, desires like "I want to meet an alien!" or "Am I actually an alien?" are ceasless.

修正後
ph62403
Lala Satalin Deviluke(To LOVEru -Toraburu-)
Mizuho Kazami (Please teacher!)
Tomalin (Teekyu)
Eris (Cat Plant Cutie/Let's go play: Bomb shells from the Sky)
-I'm an alien!
He insists he's an alien, but the main characters are doubtful.
Erio Tōwa (Electric Wave girl and Youthful boy)
Lucy Maria Misora (To Heart 2)
-Lastly...
No matter what generation, desires like "I want to meet an alien!" or "Am I actually an alien?" are ceaseless.

元の翻訳
a.
Greetings.

Today I have to inform you regrettable notice.
Since the item you ordered us the other day was deemed inflammable article with high-pressure gas, we could not send the item.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience.
We can accept your cancellation.

How you can cancel the order:
Log in to b.
Please choose "Cancel" or "Return" from the order history.

I wish you a good luck!

修正後
a.
Greetings.

Today I have to inform you of some bad news.
Since the item you ordered us the other day was deemed inflammable article with high-pressure gas, we could not send the item.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience.
(Because we haven't shipped the item yet,) we can accept your cancellation.

How you can cancel the order:
Log in to b.
Please choose "Cancel" or "Return" from the order history.

I wish you a good luck!