翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

やはり商品は11個、全て返品したいです。

私は日本に住んでいるので、11個も返品するのは難しいかと思います。

あなたとは良い関係でこれからも取引を続けていきたいですが、

返品を受け入れてくれないのなら、ペイパルにクレームの申し立てを
せざるを得ないかもしれません。

売り手として責任を感じて欲しいと思っています。

宜しくお願い致します。

英語

I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

レビュー ( 2 )

cold7210はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/27 22:59:11

元の翻訳

I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

修正後

I want to return all 11 items after all.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to keep a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

russ87はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/28 11:37:30

元の翻訳

I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I have to file a claim to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as of a seller.
Thank you.

修正後

I really want to return all 11 items.
Because I'm now living in Japan, it's really hard for me to return all these 11 items.
I want to build a good relationship of doing business with you, but if you don't accept my return, then I'm afraid I will have to file a complaint to Paypal.
I think you need to take responsibility as a seller.
Thank you.

Nice, just some small things. Claim is usually not the best translation of クレーム