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I have not made a mistake.
According to my friend, his company changed name recently.

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I am sorry, I have made mistakes many times.
According to my friend, his company changed names recently.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your support.

Regarding the product, sonu handicraft, I made a product specification based on the sample you had sent me.

I would like you to send it to sonu handicraft as well as the staff members who inspect the products.

Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your support.

Regarding the product, sonu handicraft, I made a product specification based on the sample you have sent me.

I would like you to send it to sonu handicraft as well as the staff members who inspect the products.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your support as always.

Regarding the item of sonu handicraft, I made the basic product specification based on the sample you sent me.

Would you please send it to sonu handicraft and the staff of checking the product?

Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance.

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Thank you very much for your support as always.

Regarding the item of sonu handicraft, I made the basic product specification based on the sample you sent me.

Would you please send it to sonu handicraft and the staff checking the product?

Thank you very much for your cooperation in advance.

元の翻訳
I found bags below.
1.Vote up button is not shown up. It shows up when cursor is on.
2.When I change slug it shows 404 Error. I don't use set Slug in other place.
3. Posted picture size(heightxwidth) is shown enlarged. Can you make it same size of original?

Below is demonstration site so please login.
You can change whatever you like to.

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Below are bugs I found.
1. Vote up button is not shown. It shows up when cursor is on.
2. When I change Slug it shows 404 Error. I don't use set Slug in other place.
3. Posted picture size(height x width) is shown enlarged. Can you make it the same size as the original?

Below is demonstration site so please login.
You can change whatever you would like to.

元の翻訳
I've found following bugs.
1. The vote up button is not displayed. If you put the cursor over, it is displayed.
2. When you change Slug, you'll see "404 Error". The Slug which is set up here is not used in anywhere.
3. The picture size(the height x the width) of the posted picture is enlarged and displayed. Would it be possible to display the picture in exact same size as the actual picture?

Below is the demo site. Please feel free to log in and try it, if you like.
Please feel free to modify them as you like.

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I've found the following bugs.
1. The vote up button is not displayed. If you put the cursor over, it is displayed.
2. When you change Slug, you'll see "404 Error". The Slug which is set up here is not used anywhere else.
3. The picture size(the height x the width) of the posted picture is displayed enlarged. Would it be possible to display the picture in the exact same size as the actual picture?

Below is the demo site. Please feel free to log in and try it, if you like.
Please feel free to modify them as you like.

元の翻訳
For the motif referencing the design of the American flag, we adopted it's color and pattern for the composition of the product design. The new American President was inaugurated, but what do you think about putting out the product design for a limited time during the season, such as the Independence holiday?

As for the materials proposing a design with a different color, I summarized it in what I sent so that it was even easier to understand, so could you please check the attached file.

Also, as for the preparatory meeting with Mr. M on Friday, I understand. Are you having a strategy meeting beforehand with Mr. M on Friday morning before the meeting? If necessary I'll make advance arrangements on Friday morning.

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Using/Taking the design of the American flag as the motif referencing, we adopted it's color and pattern for the composition of the product design. The new American President was inaugurated, but what do you think about putting out the product design for a limited time during the season, such as the Independence holiday?

As for the materials proposing a design with a different color, I summarized it in what I sent so that it was even easier to understand, so could you please check the attached file.

Also, as for the preparatory meeting with Mr. M on Friday, I understand. Are you having a strategy meeting on Friday morning, prior to the meeting with Mr. M? If necessary I'll make advance arrangements on Friday morning.

元の翻訳
We incorporated colors and patterns into the product design composition with reference to the American flag design as a reference motif. New American president also took office, and how about as a product design for a limited time only, such as Independence Day, etc.?

As for the design change proposal material of the color change, since I changed the thing which we sent you a little more easily understandably, please check the attached file.

I am ok about the meeting with Mr. M on Friday. Will we have a team meeting on morning Friday before we meet him? Let 's have a meeting on Friday morning if necessary.

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We incorporated colors and patterns into the product design composition with utilizing the American flag design as a reference motif. The new American president also took office, so how about this as a product design for a limited time only, such as Independence Day, etc.?

As for the design change proposal material of the color change, since we have made changes to the thing which we sent you to make it a little more easily understandable, please check the attached file.

We are ok about the meeting with Mr. M on Friday. Will we have a team meeting on morning Friday before we meet him? Let 's have a meeting on Friday morning if necessary.

元の翻訳
I tried to take American flag design motif into the color and pattern of the product’s composed design. Now that the new president has inaugurated, why don’t you use it in the product design for seasonal products for Independence Day?

Regarding the material suggesting a color change in the design, I have made a little revision to the one I already sent to you for easier understanding. Please check the attached file.

Also, I understand about the meeting on Friday with Mr. M. Would you like a briefing with me on Friday morning before you meet Mr. M? I will be able to meet you Friday morning if you would like.

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I tried to take the American flag design motif into the color and pattern of the product’s composed design. Now that the new president has inaugurated, why don’t you use it in the product design for seasonal products such as for Independence Day?

Regarding the material suggesting a color change in the design, I have made a little revision to the one I already sent to you for easier understanding. Please check the attached file.

Also, I understand about the meeting on Friday with Mr. M. Would you like a briefing with me on Friday morning before you meet Mr. M? I will be able to meet you Friday morning if you would like.

元の翻訳
"Jagariko" with Japanese sukiyaki taste!
Yet another new flavor has appeared in "Jagariko" pproduct series! So far they have developed and released more than 70 new flavors of Jagariko. This specific new taste is Japanese sukiyaki taste! (* Sukiyaki is a Japanese dish where meat and vegetables are cooked or simmered in a pot, and seasoning is basically with soy sauce and sugar which is melted raw eggs.) Taste of the beef and the scent of the onion and the sauce of sukiyaki which is full of sweetness and richness matching firmly and being reproduced! Try the taste in conjunction with the crispy texture. Since it is the limited item in convenience stores, try to get it as soon as possible!

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"Jagariko" with Japanese sukiyaki taste!
Yet another new flavor has appeared in "Jagariko" product series! So far they have developed and released more than 70 new flavors of Jagariko. This specific new taste is Japanese sukiyaki taste! (* Sukiyaki is a Japanese dish where meat and vegetables are cooked or simmered in a pot, and seasoning is basically with soy sauce and sugar, which is eaten mixed with beaten eggs.) Taste of the beef and the scent of the onion and the sauce of sukiyaki which is full of sweetness and richness matching firmly and being reproduced! Try the taste in conjunction with the crispy texture. Since it is the limited item in convenience stores, try to get it as soon as possible!

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacts us. Sure, we are still interested in selling SWINGS in Japan.
Swings not only has incredible products, but It is going very well in Japan.
If it is possible, let us know about your selling conditions, full costs and another rank of conditions.

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Thank you for contacting us. Sure, we are still interested in selling SWINGS in Japan.
SWINGS not only is an incredible product, but I'm sure It will go very well in Japan.
If it is possible, let us know about your selling conditions, full costs and other of conditions.

元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting us. Of course, I have an interest in selling SWINGS in Japan.
SWINGS is a wonderful product and I am sure the business will go well.
If you do not mind, I would be happy if you could tell us your sales conditions, annual MOQ, wholesale prices and other conditions.

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Thank you for contacting us. Of course, I still have an interest in selling SWINGS in Japan.
SWINGS is a wonderful product and I am sure the business will go well.
If you do not mind, I would be happy if you could tell us your sales conditions, annual MOQ, wholesale prices and other conditions.

元の翻訳
An opportunity for tourists to come and sweat with Muay Thai Kick Boxing!
Welcoming suitable for beginners and experience people

Don't only watch kickboxing but come and experience the greatness!
Unfortunately we do not have any staff who are proficient in English, but even without words staff are polite and kind in their support.
Additionally we can prepare a course that is taylor made to your needs.
Enjoy Kickboxing without the stress.

☆ On the day please wear clothes which you can workout in, a towel, and an additional change of clothes.

One lesson is 3000円

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An opportunity for tourists to come and sweat with Muay Thai and Kick Boxing!
Welcoming beginners and experienced people.

Don't only watch Muay Thai and kick boxing but come and experience the greatness!
Unfortunately we do not have any staff who are proficient in English, but even without words staff are polite and kind in their support.
Additionally we can prepare a course that is tailor-made to suit your needs.
Enjoy Kickboxing without the stress.

☆ On the day please bring clothes which you can workout in, a towel, and an additional change of clothes.

One lesson is 3000 JPY

元の翻訳
Hello.

I have already received your request payments.

I tried to make payment, but I could not set the destination address other than the address in Japan.

I reviewed it and thought for a while, and I made inquiry to PayPal.

Their answer was that I cannot set the destination address other than the address in Japan in the request payments.

However, they also said that I can do so if you set the destination address to my address in Florida by creating invoice.

So, can you please send a bill to me again by xx?

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Hello.

I have already received your request payments.

I tried to make the payment, but I could not set the destination address other than the address in Japan.

I reviewed it and thought for a while, and I made an inquiry to PayPal.

Their answer was that I cannot set the destination address other than the address in Japan in the request payments.

However, they also said that I can do so if you set the destination address to my address in Florida by creating invoice.

So, can you please send a bill to me again by xx?

元の翻訳
1. Please give me abundant materials.
Remnants that cannot be sold are fine.
I want each color.

I am looking for color samplings for our customers.
I would like abundant materials for that purpose.

Please put them in the next delivery.
Thank you for your cooperation.

2. Could you send me pictures of the cushion cover?

3. What has happened since then? Can I give you a call tomorrow?

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1. Please give me abundant materials.
Remnants that cannot be sold are fine.
I would like each color.

I am looking for color samplings for our customers.
I would like abundant materials for that purpose.

Please put them in the next delivery.
Thank you for your cooperation.

2. Could you send me pictures of the cushion cover?

3. What has happened since then? Could I give you a call tomorrow?