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Date : July/2/2014 (Wed)
Time : Open at 19:30 / Start at 20:00
Price : Book 1,500 Yen / On the day 1,800 Yen (not including 1 drink)

* Book ticket online
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

* USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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Date : July/2/2014 (Wed)
Time : Opens at 19:30 / Starts at 20:00
Price : Advanced Booking 1,500 Yen / On the day 1,800 Yen (not including 1 drink)

* Book ticket online
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

* USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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Sumitomo Corporation Equity Asia社の副社長・Josephine Chan氏は、投資の背景についてこう語る。

「aCommerce は、E-コマースにおける物流およびバックエンド受注処理が抱える大きな弱点を解決している。そして、東南アジアでの E-コマースマーケット拡大の加速に寄与している。」

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Sumitomo Corporation Equity Asia社の副社長、Josephine Chan氏は、投資の背景についてこう語る。

「aCommerce は、E-コマースにおける物流およびバックエンド受注処理が抱える大きな弱点を解決している。そして、東南アジアでの E-コマースマーケット拡大の加速に寄与している。」

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Thank you for your reply.
To be honest, I've already asked about this to eBay since I haven't received your reply for a little while. Since I had received reply from eBay today, I'm going to follow their instruction. They say that I have to open the case. So, could you please cooperate with me on this case even it might bother you a little bit?
Thank you and Best Regards.

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Thank you for your reply.
To be honest, I've already asked Bay how to handle since I haven't received your reply for a little while. Since I had received reply from eBay today, I'm going to follow their instruction. They say that the case needs to be opned. So, could you please cooperate with me on this case even it might bother you a little bit?
Thank you and Best Regards.

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I think now you understand about the OCR technology, so that I will present the technology we found this time.

That is a demo-application which automatically translate just by holding your tablet or smart phone over a paper or printed characters by using OCR and the machine translation technology.

Stress free translation.
The reason why I focused on this application is, I felt like almost as I'm reading the letters by myself when I experienced this application on demo-device.

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I think now you understand about the OCR technology, so I will present the technology we have found this time.

That is a demo-application which translate automatically just by holding your tablet or smart phone over a paper or printed characters with using OCR and the machine translation technology.

Stress free translation.
The reason why I focused on this application, I felt like almost as I was reading the letters by myself when I have experienced this application on demo-device.

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* The photo is Korean, but it also apply to English.

Seves the user's process of translation.

And, another notable point of this technology is, you don't have to save the image.

The ordinal technology is the one, you take photo, and let an application read the image to convert the data. This application, however, translates the letter immediately just after focused on it so that it omits the user's operation.

I'm looking forward the release day for this application, which pursuit technology from user's point of view!

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* The photo is Korean, but it also apply to English.

It saves users the process of translatation.

In addition, another notable feature of this technology is that you don't have to save images.

The ordinal technology is the one, you take photo, and let an application read the image to convert the data. This application, however, translates the letter immediately just after focused on it so that it omits the user's operation.

I'm looking forward to the release day for this application, which pursuit technology from user's point of view!

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I want to note that this application always tries to recognize image so that it keeps this speed even it translate after scanning the data.

Focus on particularly speed.
I asked about the speed to a person in charge and got the following reply.
"Even though it still has a problem about the recognition rate and translate accuracy when it comes to a long sentence, we focus on shortening the translation speed for now."

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I noticed that this application keeps this speed enen though it always tries to recognize images and translate after reading.

Focus on particularly speed.
I asked about the translation speed to a person in charge and got the following reply.
"Even though it still has a problem about the recognition rate and translation accuracy when it comes to long sentences, we focus on shortening the translation speed at the present stage."

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このアイテムの代金全てと、返送にかかる費用を返金してください。
私はこの品をすぐにでも返送できるように梱包しています。
私はこれをコレクションするために、とても長い旅をしてきましたし、その旅にはお金がかかっています。その旅費を返せとまでは言いませんが、あなたは、このアイテムについて、返送費用と代金の全てを返金すべきです。

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このアイテムの代金全てと、返送にかかる費用を返金してください。
この品をすぐにでも返送できるように梱包しています。
また、これを取りに行くのに、距離の離れた場所へいかなくてはいけませんでした、それにもお金がかかっています。その費用を返せとまでは言いませんが、あなたは、このアイテムについて、返送費用と代金の全てを返金すべきです。

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Thank you for your message.
The item isn't worn out and looks as good as new.

The specification of the item is what you see on amazon.

I'll ship the item via EMS.

Regarding the shipping fee, I'm afraid to say but I can't change the fee since the change will affect all of the items I list at amazon.

I'm sorry about cancelling the item, but I can't ship it again. I'm able to refund some of the amount paid instead.

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Thank you for your message.
The item isn't worn out and looks as good as new.

The specification of the item is what you see on amazon.

I'll ship the item via EMS.

Regarding the shipping fee, I'm afraid to say but I can't change it since the change will affect all of the items I list at Amazon.

I'm sorry about cancelling the item, but I can't ship it again. I'm able to refund some of the amount paid instead.

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#will
I would like to reconfirm since it's expensive item.
Is it meets following 3 points?
* The plate at the hollow place around toe is screwed up.
* There is no "+" seal at neck part since it's hot head.
* Is the serial the retail serial?
If it satisfy all above 3 point, please send me the payment form then I'll make an order.

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#will
I would like to reconfirm since it's an expensive item.
Is it meets [ungrammatical] the following 3 points?
* The plate at the hollow place around toe is screwed up.
* There is no "+" seal at neck part since it's hot head.
* Is the serial the retail serial?
If it satisfy [subject-verb agreement] all above 3 point, please send me the payment form, and then I'll place an order.