Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ

koji_at_east_tokyo — 付けたレビュー

本人確認済み

10年以上前男性

日本

日本語 (ネイティブ) 英語

このユーザーが他のユーザーの翻訳結果に対してレビューしたものに関連するアクティビティを確認できます。レビューに関連するアクティビティには、翻訳に対する修正やコメントが含まれます。

この翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2014/06/23 01:16:38
コメント I have learned a lot. Thank you !

この翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2014/06/16 21:59:51
コメント勉強させていただきました。

この翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 日本語 → 英語

2014/06/07 11:14:07

元の翻訳
This is a very time consuming task, but we would like to establish our future order method.
Also, we appreciate your obtaining large quantity of ○○．
Is this item a limited, too?
If you'd allow me to, I would like to purchase more than 5 pieces each.
So please give us a discount.
I am very excited as we have received the items to day.

Also, △△ concerns me too.
Would you please send me a photo so that I can check what it is like?

If it is the products that are not seen in Japan, we would like to purchase them immediately.

修正後
This is a very time consuming task, but we would like to establish our future order method.
Also, we appreciate your efforts for obtaining large quantity of ○○．
Is this item a limited in the US, too?
If you'd allow me to, I would like to purchase more than 5 pieces each.
So please give us a discount.
I am very excited as we have received the items today.

Also, △△ concerns me.
Would you please send me a photo of that so that I can check what it is like?

If it is the products that are not seen in Japan, we would like to purchase them immediately.

この翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました日本語 → 英語 2014/06/04 23:50:27
コメント最初の文の動詞となるべき operate が operation になっています。それ以外にも、日本語原文の意味が伝わりにくいところがいくつかあるかと思われます。