山下謙一 (kenny_yeppoon) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
アイディアは全ての改革管理プログラムの骨格である。しかし、今日のあなたには、自分のビジネスを進めるのに自分が本当に必要とするアイディアがありますか？

あなたの従業員、顧客、パートナーを改革のプロセスへ案内する事は、あなたの会社がこれまでに行ってきた事のない本当に貴重なアイディアを発見し、進化させるのに大いに役立ちます。また仲間はアイディアのビジネス価値を特定し、予見するのに大いに役立ち、あなたは自身の改革の努力をどこに集中させればいいかがわかります。

改革管理プログラムは、会社にこのゴールをもたらす為のプロセスです。最良の改革をボトムアップし、内外の仲間を活用し、最も価値のあるアイディアを汲み上げ、ビジネスへの影響を予見する為に”アイディアスケール”の利用を始めましょう。↵

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アイディアは全てのイノベーション管理プログラムの根幹である。しかし、今日のあなたには、貴社のビジネスを進める必要があるというアイディアがありますか？

あなたの従業員、顧客、パートナーをイノベーションのプロセスへ案内することが、貴社がこれまでに行ってきた事のない本当に貴重なアイディアを発見し、実行するのに役立ちます。またそのクラウドは、あなたが一つのアイディアのビジネス価値を特定し、予見する役に立ち、そうしてあなたは自身のイノベーション活動をどこに集中させればいいかがわかります。

イノベーション管理プログラムは、会社にこのゴールを達成させてくれるプロセスです。今日、このボトムアップによって最良のイノベーションを推進し、IdeaScale を使い始めて、内部および外部のクラウドを選び出し、最も価値あるアイデアを表面化させ、ビジネスに与えるインパクトを予測しましょう。

元の翻訳
ご回答ありがとうございます。もし貴殿が229に即決価格を設定いただければ、私はすぐに購入します。私の質問に対する貴殿からの回答がなかったので、私は昨日の入札価格を上げようとは思いません。ご回答をお願いします。

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ご回答ありがとうございます。もし貴殿が229に即決価格を設定いただければ、私はすぐに購入します。私の質問に対する貴殿からご回答頂いていませんでしたので、昨日の価格で入札しようとは思いません。ご回答をお願いします。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your order.
Please confirm that your order is short scale base.

We will prepare for shipping as soon as possible and please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any further queries before shipping.

Kind regards.

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Thank you for your order.
Please confirm that your order is a short scale base [word confusion].

We will prepare for shipping as soon as possible and please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any further queries before shipping.

Kind regards.

元の翻訳
Sure, please let me know when you prepare the sufficient fund.
Though I cannot guarantee your preferred guitar is in stock, I will try to find it our as hard as I can.

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Sure, please let me know when you have the sufficient fund ready.
Though I cannot guarantee your preferred guitar is still in stock, I will try to find it as hard as I can.

元の翻訳
Hello. Thank you for your inquiry. Your product was shipped with a tracking capability.
According to our tracking, your product has been arrived at Brasil.
I would be grateful if you could be patient.
We cannot directly communicate with the post office in Brazil therefore please contact your closest post office to find the status of shipping.
I can appreciate your apprehension of the delay of shipping but we confirmed the product arrived at your countryuntile as said above. Please wait for a while.
Please do not worry as we look after the delivery of your product the whole way.

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Hello. Thank you for your inquiry. Your product was shipped with a tracking capability.
According to our tracking, your product has been arrived at Brasil.
I would be grateful if you could be patient.
We cannot directly communicate with the post office in Brazil. Therefore, please contact your nearest post office to find out the status of shipping.
I understand your apprehension of the delay of shipping, but we confirmed the product arrived in your country. Please wait for a while.
Please rest assured as we look after the delivery of your product the whole way.

元の翻訳
How about the progress ?

According to the investigation by our company, many shops do not comply with the price setting yet.
The shops that have not complied with the price change yet are listed as below. I would appreciate you prompt attention to this matter.
Please contact us if there are anything we can support.

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How about the progress ?

According to the investigation by our company, many shops do not comply with the price setting yet.
The shops that have not complied with the price change yet are listed as below. I would appreciate your prompt attention to this matter.
Please contact us if there are anything we can support.

元の翻訳
Hello,

I received the product today.
The condition is quite good and I love it however it is dissapointed that a couple of cup were broken when delivered.
(Please see attached picture.)
Can you make any compensations about it?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards.

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Hello,

I received the products today.
The condition is quite good and I love them, but a couple of cups were broken when delivered.
(Please see the attached photo.)
Could you compensate me for the damaged goods?
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards.

元の翻訳
I have not received the product yet. Normally a parcel from USA is delivered at least 10 days after shipping therefore I guess it may possible to be lost. I appreciate if you proceed to refund for me. I await your response.

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I have not received the product yet. Normally a parcel from USA is delivered within 10 days at the latest after shipping. Therefore, it may have gotten lost. I would appreciate it if you could issue me a refund. I await your response.

元の翻訳
My name is Yamada and I had a booking for SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35am on 3rd February.
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I had been waiting for the above bus until 10am on the day but the bus did not arrive.
I took a taxi to the airport because no further waiting allowed to catch the airplane.
I would like you to refund my bus fare $27.86 which I already paid by my credit card because I could not have your bus service by your fault.

When the game software arrived, I found it had not been binyl covered.
Do you have the Product code?
I would like you to refund my payment if the game cannot be installed.

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My name is Yamada and I booked the SPEEDI SHUTTLE at 8:35 am on February 3.
I waited for the bus until 10 am that day but it did not arrive.
I took a taxi to the airport because no further waiting [unnatural] allowed to catch the airplane.
Please refund my bus fare $27.86 which I already paid by my credit card because I could not ride your bus because of your fault.

The game software arrived opened, without a plastic cover.
Do you have the product code?
I would like you to refund my payment if the game cannot be installed.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response.

This manual is a little bit old and I would like to add some more information, I will let you know later.

I am not good at communicating in English therefore I will communicate with you by using google translation or any other method instead of skype. The main communication with you is by email or other written wording method.

I would like to use drop box to exchange the data with you.
Please let me know your email address.

I hope we can work together as long as possible.

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Thank you for your response.

This manual is a little bit old and I would like to add some more information, I will let you know later.

I am not good at communicating in English therefore I will communicate with you by using a translation site such as google translation.And I do not use Slype.The main communication with you is by email or other written wording method.

I would like to use drop box to exchange the data with you.
Please let me know your email address.

I hope we can work together as long as possible.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your response.

This manual is a little bit old and I would like to add some more information, I will let you know later.

I am not good at communicating in English therefore I will communicate with you by using google translation or any other method instead of skype. The main communication with you is by email or other written wording method.

I would like to use drop box to exchange the data with you.↵
Please let me know your email address.

I hope we can work together as long as possible.

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Thank you for your response.

This manual is a little bit old and I would like to add some more information. I will let you know later.

I am not good at communicating in English, so I will communicate with you by using Google translation or any other method instead of Skype. The main communication with you is by email or other written wording method [awkward].

I will use Dropbox to exchange the data with you. Please let me know your email address.

I hope we can work together for a long time to come.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Thank you for your response.
I am happy to have an information that the product delivered without any troubles.
I will discuss about the payment procedure with the customer support of ebay after this weekend then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience and also your prompt response.

The product to be delivered this time is for a left handed user.
You may be sure that we have confirmed above with the manufacturer.

I understand and I will proceed the cancellation.
I will discuss about it after this weekend with the customer support of ebay then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience.

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Hello,

Thank you for your response.
I am happy to know that the product delivered without any troubles.
I will discuss the payment procedure with the customer support of ebay after this weekend then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience and also your prompt response.

The product to be delivered this time is for a left handed user.
Please do not worry as we have confirmed above with the manufacturer.

I understand and I will proceed the cancellation.
I will discuss it after this weekend with the customer support of ebay then respond to you.
Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
This is a genuine product as shown by the photograph. This product is popular in Japan therefore your consideration would be appreciated.

Thank you for your replay.
So we will refund immediately.
We appreciate for you waiting for a while, as we will proceed the proceeding as soon as we contact to ebay.

This is the information of the progress.
We are now proceeding the refundment communicating with ebay as several days have been passed since we commenced the deal.
We are sorry for you waiting for a while but we will be able to proceed in a few days.

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This is a genuine product as shown in the photograph. This product is also popular in Japan. Therefore, your consideration would be appreciated.

Thank you for your replay [word confusion].
So we will refund you immediately.
We appreciate your waiting for a while, as we will proceed the proceeding [awkward] as soon as we contact eBay.

This is the information of the progress [unnatural].
We are now proceeding the refundment [spelling] communicating with eBay as several days have been passed since we commenced the deal [a bit unnatural].
We are sorry, but please wait for a while as we will be able to proceed [a bit unclear] in a few days.

元の翻訳
Hello,

Please be advised the current status about our investigation for the fishing rod (Eveluzion F7-76ti White Python).
We found the item above has been out of stock at the shop, therefore we have not confirmed the delivery size of the item.

The shop made a enquiry to the manufacturer and we will have a response from the shop on Tuesday in Japan time.

The retailing shops which I found the out of stock have suspended their sales on Rakuten website.
We are sorry for your patience but please understand we need a little bit more time to make a total price quotation as well as the confirmation of the stock status at the nanufacturer.

Kind regards

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Hello,

Please be advised the current status about our investigation for the fishing rod (Eveluzion F7-76ti White Python).
We found the item above has been out of stock at the shop, therefore we have not confirmed the delivery size of the item.

The shop made a inquiry to the manufacturer and we will have a response from the shop on Tuesday in Japan time.

The retailing shops which I found the out of stock have suspended their sales on Rakuten website.
We are sorry for your patience but please understand we need a little bit more time to make a total price quotation as well as the confirmation of the stock status at the manufacturer.

Kind regards

元の翻訳
今回の購入に関しまして、次回の私の購入に関する送料を無料にするという事は、良い解決策とは思えません。もしお望みであれば、私は完全に払戻しをしていただく為に全ての商品を返送します。それに伴う送料は、追加購入額とは別に、ひび割れした秤のおおよその損失額を意味します。それらは、目立つ傷、回収可能性がある価値の二次的損失なしに修理する事は不可能です。
こうした不具合によってDorko'sは現在日本の収集家達によってダンピングされており、価格は急速に下落しています。

これらの秤は貴殿が記述された通り、既に修理されたものかも知れません。
何故なら、よく見ると"Dorko"のエンブレムの下に毛髪ほどのひび割れを確認できるからです。またこのエンブレムも、見たところ別な位置に再度貼り直されたもののようです。

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今回の購入の代償として、次回の私の購入に関する送料を無料にするという事は、良い解決策とは思えません。もしお望みであれば、私は完全に払戻しをしていただく為に全ての商品を返送します。それに伴う送料は、追加購入しなくても、ひび割れした柄のおおよその損失額に相当します。それらは、目立つ継ぎ目、収集目的あるいは価値の損失を伴わずに修理する事は不可能です。
これらDorkoのウェッジブレードは現在日本の収集家達によってダンピングされており、価格は急速に下落しています。

これらの柄は貴殿が記述された通り、既に修理されたものかも知れません。
何故なら、よく見ると"Dorko"のエンブレムの下に細いひび割れを確認できるからです。またこのエンブレムも、見たところ別な位置に再度貼り直されたもののようです。